Swasan ss:True Love Always Win (part8-pg23)

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello guys,nw i m trying 2 write ss on swasan.i m nt reguler updater.so forgive me for that.i m updting prologue.if u guys like it thn,i'll cnt.

At 1st some points abt ths story.
-ragini is successful in her revenge.laksh staying with her &accept ragini nw.evrybody(MM+Gadodia) hates swara.thy accept ragini without knwing ragini's further truth.
-sanskar living a life whic is nw burden for him.he bcm ruthless,arrogant businessman.he close his heart nw.he is keeping his promise.nobody mk place in his heart as his love.swara isnt with him yet she is with him bt through bad memories.

PROLOGUE-
After 5 months:-
scene1-
sanskar 2 swara's photo-i hate tht i love u so much swara.maine itna pyar kia tumhe,mujhe koi expectation nehi tha.main tumare sath ek dost ban ke hi khush tha.fir kyu umeed jagaya agar rishta nivanahi nehi tha..!i trusted u swara.thn why??pata nehi kitni baar sabke khilaf gaya phir vi aisa q kia???kyu??

Scene2:-
In a NGO of DELHI:
Mrs singh,head of ths NGO-piya r u sure ki tum swara ko apne sath le jana chahte ho?
Piya-yes,madam.she z my college frnd & main iss NGO k liye kam karti hu.i'll b very happy if i can help swara.
Mrs singh-par u knw na,uski halat kaisi ha...3mahine koma me thi aur ab pichle do mahine se aise halat me hai.
Mrs singh & piya ntr a room.thrz a girl sitting in d middle of all toys.she is wearing lng skirt-top with braids both side.
Piya-swara kya kar rahi ho??
The girl is swara.she turned & said-piya,tum agayi,dekho ye hai mera doll ,aur ye dekho ye ha uska prince 'SANSKAR'.mujhe khelna ha iske sath.sanskar bohot acha ha.
Mrs singh 2 piya-akhir kon hai ye sanskar??jab se hosh aya har roz isika naam leta ha...

P.s-shud i cntinu??Flower,jute,tamator evrythng is welcm.

INDEX-

part1-pg2

part2-pg6

part3-pg8

part4-pg11

part5-pg13

part6-pg17

part7-pg20

part8-pg23

Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 9 years ago

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Interesting a different concept

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sana

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice...do conti..plzz pm me when u update.

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

The prologue sounds very interesting! Why is Swara like this? What happened that Sanskaar doesn't trust Swara anymore? How will Sanskaar and the rest of the Maheshwaris and Gadodias react when they find out about Swara's condition? She only remebers Sanskaar's name?

So many questions and I would love to read more to get the answers to all of them!

Continue soon, please.

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the story seems to be very interesting,... continue soon,...

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It looks very inetresting. Please do continue 😊

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Sumi Roy

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Posted: 9 years ago

part1-

at MM-

sanskar-bade papa,aaj dopahar k flight se main delhi jaa raha hu.maine presentation ready kar dia hai,ekbar aap check kar lijiye...main lunch k baad nikal jaunga..fikar mat kijiye,ye deal hume mil jayega...

DP-thik hai sanskar.par isme laksh ka vi sign chahiye.ab tum to usse miloge nehi,main sign karwa k lata hu.sanskar nodded.

from past 5months sanskar isnt in talking terms with raglak.thy all r living in same home but none of thm acknowledge each othr.jst for repunation thy r living under same roof.sanskar spend his all day at office,only cm at night.

sanskar land on delhi airport.he checked in into a hotel.next day will b meating & after that he will leave for kolkata...after some work he walked out 4m hotel...

he was walking when he saw a NGO.he tho8 to donate something.after donating whn he was cming he saw something & froze ...he jst dnt knw wht was he seeing...

at the backyard of the NGO piya was manaoing swara to cm with her----

piya-swara baby,chalo mere sath,tumhe bohot sare choclates aur khilona dungi...tumhe pasand hai na..

swara-nehi mujhe nehi jana.swara baby ko sanskar se milna hai.wo abhi ayega...mere liye bohot sare choclates vi layega.mujhe na dekhkar agar wo naraz ho gaya to,main nehi jaungi aur mujhe to uske sath khelna vi hai...

sanskar was staring at her.he dnt knw wht he was seeing..thr was thr girl whom he loved ,actually he still love him bt also he was hurt by ths woman whom he love.yet he cudnt expect to see her like ths in his worsest nightmare...

flashback-

jis din swara ko MM se nikala gaya usdin sanskar office me tha,jab office se wapas aya to sabne kaha swara ne laksh & sanskar dono k emotions k sath khela hai.usnehi ragini ka kidnap kia yaha tak ki sanskar ki car blast me vi usika hath hai.thy queston on her charector.he tried to explain everyone tht thr was some misunderstanding bt kisine nehi suna.when sanskar reachd badi he got to knw swara was nt thr.he only got divorce paper signed by swara.he was devasteted.after tht he tried to search her but failed.after some day he had full doubt on raglak bt he hadnt any prove.he himslf was confused.his heart told him to belive on swara bt his mind told him to blv wht he saw...he himslf saw swara with laksh happy,he himslf saw swara saying ILU to laksh yet he cudnt blv on it.he himslf saw love,care into her eyes.after bomb blast he saw a new swara.he always can read swara.but he was so much confused.whn he saw the divorce paper he tho8 his instinct was wrong.swara never hd feelings for him.unknown to everyone he still tried to find her,to find answers of his questions...

flashbk ends

sanskar went near swara,kneeling down he sat in4nt her.'swara tum aise...kaise..matlab,main main hu swara sanskar'.

bt swara was busy in mumbling 'sanskar ayega,mujhe uske sath khelna hai'...

sanskar shook her..'swara,meri tarf dekho,kya hogaya tumhe,mujhe pehchano'.he was crying.bt swara didnt care,she was playing with dolls.

piya saw the interaction & ask sanskar-'excuse me,aap sanskar hai,aap swara k kon hai?'

sanskar-main swara ka husband hu.pichle panch saal se main swara ko dhund raha hu.par wo yaha kaise aur aise halat me...

piya-main swara k sath ek college me parti thi.main iss NGO me kaam karti hu.maine 5mahine pehle swara ko delhi me dekha tha.uske pass kuch nehi tha sewai ek diary k.wo usi dyari ko sah leke k chaltehi jaa rahi thi.uske akho me thori si vi ansu nehi thi par uska face pura blank tha.wo apnehi khyalo me thi.maine usse bula rahi thi ki tabhi ek truck se swara ka accident ho gaya.hum clge me zyada talking terms me nehi the & maine 1yr baad clge vi chor dia tha to mujhe uske bare me zyada kuch pata nehi tha,nahi uske family k kuch number.maine uske diary vi check kia par uski diari pura blank tha.dr ne kaha wo coma me chali gayi.3mahine baad use hosh aya to dr ne bataya accidnt k wajah se uski dimagi halat ek 8 saal ki bachi tarah ho gaya hai.par jab se use hosh aya uske mu se sirf ek naam nikla-'sanskar'.main usse apne sath ghar lejjana chahti thi ye soch k ki sayed environmnt chng hua to uske lie vi acha hoga.issi lia use mana rahi thi.aise me aap agaye.

sanskar-thank u piya,whatever u did for her.tum nehi jante wht u did for me.

piya-no need for thans,ye mera farz tha.aur pata hai swara humesha kehti rehti hai mujhe 'dosti me no sorry,no thank u'.swara meri dost thi.itna to main kar sakti hu.

sanskar-he smiled sadly,in ds condition also she remembr him.bdw,u were saying abt diary,kya main dekh sakta hu??piya-ya!sure,par pura diary blank ha.

sanskar-actually maine ek pen dia tha swara ko.swara humesha usi se apna diary likhti thi.mujhe vi nehi dekhne deti thi kya likh rahi hai.tht was invisible ink.sirf water k contact me u can see the ink...

prcp-what actually happend in past sanskar get to knw by reading swara's diary.sanskar taking care of swara...

p.s-guys,ths swasan separation isnt for mistrust but for misconception & misscommunicatin of swasan.

critisicm/appriciations r welcome.