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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Sonu
Thanks for the pm. I read both parts 3 and 4 at one go. I was so touched at the way Sanskaar is taking care of Swara. His deep and unconditional love for her is so apparent. God, these two are so made for each other.

I am so very curious about what happened in the past. From the diary entries its evident that Lakshya and Ragini surely had a hand in landing Swara in this condition. Waiting to see the mystery get solved, and I want Sanskaar to give them both a befitting punishment.

I am a little scared by your precap though...Ragini sees that message from Pia on Sanskaar's phone, regarding Swara. I hope she would not succeed in harming her again.

Looking forward eagerly to the next chapter Sonu. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
interesting story
read all parts
update it soon
n do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Loved it
Can you send me pm when you next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE:-thanks guys for ths beautiful appriciations,likes & cmnt.it means alot.part5 is below.hope u guys like it also.its quite long.sorry guys next updt will b in January.i'll b busy with family,guests,get togethr,picnic everythng n all..in all ths dnt b able to write down something.will try bt no promise...sorry.
here below is the nxt part...
Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part5-

nxt day after reaching kolkata sanskar call maa-dida & ask thm to meet his place...in tht time swasan is all set to settle down in sanskar's flat..

sanskar was clearing all dusts,pulled off all dirty cloths,changing sheets..whn swara was busy to eat choclate sitting on dining table & instructing sanskar.

swara-'kya kar rahe ho idhar kachra hai,ye dekho idhar vi...yaha vi aur waha vi'..

sanskar-kaha?kaha hai?jald se jald saaf karna hoga,fir lunch vi taiar karna hai?kaha dhul hai swara'...whn he looked at her & saw her smiling,he realize swara was again playing..

sanskar-'swara ki bachi!!ruko avi batata hu' saying tht he ran behind swara..thy both ran around whole room & at last both sat on sofa..

swara-'hmm!vuk lagi hai'.sanskar-kya khana hai'?swara-kuch alag,wohi dal chawal nehi khana'..

sanskar-to kya khai' swara-pizza!' sanskar-dopahar ko pizza'??

swara gv him her best puppy look & again sanskar agreed with her.

swara-mujhe vi banana ha',sanskar-nehi main kar lunga,tum baitho'..

swara-'mujhe karna ha karna ha karna ha',sanskar-acha thik hai tum help kar dena thik hai'.swara-yayy!tum bohot acche ho'.sanskar-haa!tumari baat maan lia issliye..notanki ho tum.apni baat manwa lete ho'.swara gv him a bright smile.

in kitchen swara sat on kitchen slab & helping sanskar..bt yet nt helping.bcz she z busy for inspecting things...she z all ready to shoot all type questions & sanskar patiently answering her...

later after finishing lunch both watching TV..whn chnging chnl swara stop a music chnl.sanskar noticed it & intentionally ask her-swara,ye to music chnl ha,tumhe music pasand hai'??

before she cud answer thr was some cable prob & the song stopped.sanskar th8 himslf-tsk!itna acha moka tha,sayed ye music kuch madad kar sakti..music is swara's passion'.

he brought bk from his tho8s listening swara's song...swara singing same song which was playing in TV a while ago,staring at nothng paticuler swara jst sang the song 'piu bole pia bole' from film 'parinita'.sanskar was lost of words.he called swara,bt swara was in her own world.sanskar shook her & thn swara asked-maine ye song kaise gaya'?

sanskar-tumne bohot acha gaya swara'...swara-acha,thik ha.mujhe nind arahi hai,main tumara god me so jau'?sanskar-hmm!so jao.main yahi hu'.

as usual whn swara slept sanskar lifft her in his arms & lied her down on bed.thn he immidietly call DR. & told him everythng.

DR-maine kaha tha sanskar sirf time,pyaar & a good environmnt can cure her.usse kisi vi tarah koi pressurize mat karna.waqt,sirf waqt aur pyaar ha jisse swara thik ho sakti ha.jab wo delhi me thi to koi vi meds ka asar nehi ho raha tha.par tumare milne k baad wo khush hai,wo tumare pyaar ki wajah se respond kar rahi ha.aaj usne gana gaya aur tumne khud kaha tha music z swara's passion.iska matlab uske subconscious mind ye chnges feel kar rahi ha & respond kar rahi ha.tumare liye uske dil me jo pyaaar ha thts helping her,music k liye uske dil me jo pyar ha wo usse help kar rahi ha.she wanna cm out,she z responding to our treatmnt.i said u meds vi kaam nehi karta jab tak patient khud na chahe thik hona.nw seems its working.aisehi pyaar se usse sambhalo,time do usse,waqt k sath sab thik hoga.& yes ek kaam karo kal ekbar chck up k liye ajao.chck up vi ho jayega & agar koi meds chng karna pare to kar dunga'.

sanskar didnt realize whn he strtd crying-thnks dr.main kal swara k sath pohoch jaunga'.

jst thn dida & shomi reached thr.sanskar welcomed thm.thn he told everythng abt swara.listening everythng both ladies cried.sanskar kneel down infrnt of thm,holding thr hand he said-maa,dida pls aap log rona mat.agar aap log himmat har jayenge to kaise chalega.swara ko hamari zarurat hai,main to usse yaha lanahi nehi chahta tha,aap log to jantehi hai mere ghar me sab kya sochte ha..par laga its her birthplace,yaha wo badi hui ha,humare gharme le jane ka risk to main nehi utha sakta par main khud uska khyal to rakh sakta hu.mujhe aap logo ki vi madat chahiye..maine avi avi DR se baat kia,kal chck up vi hai..he said swara z responding.sirf humara pyar aur patience cn cure her.wo apni family k bare me puch rahi thi.pls jab aap uske samne jaye to roina mat,uske sath normally baat kijiye'.

shomi-kya ho gaya mere shona ko sanskar,main kaise sambhalu apne aap ko,usse main aise halat me nehi dekh paungi'...

dida-tui eivabe bhenge poris na(dnt break down like ths).shoru ko hamari zarurat ha.wo thik ho jaygi.himmat rakh.vagwan ne jab usse humare paas wapas veja hai to ab wohi usse thik karenge'.

sanskar-dida,thik keh rahi ha.sambhaliye maa.waise main jo keh raha tha.like i said i didnt wnt to cm here bt bade papa called me back urgently bcz of office work.so i was thinking jab main office me rahu aap ya dida swara k sath rahengi?apne pariwar me to swara ko lekar main kisipe viswas nehi kar sakta.pls agar aap log kisi vi tarah manage kar paye aur ha baba ko mat batana,unhe batana matlab dadi aur ragini ko vi pata chal jayega & we cnt tk risk.so pls'...

shomi-tumhe fikar karne ki koi zarurat nehi ha,hum hai na,shekhar ko kuch nehi pata chalega.i'll manage'.

dida-sanskar tum kya sochoge pata nehi par i decide main yehi reh jaungi.shomi kab kaise manage karegi wo baad me dekhenge.par main yehi rukungi.ghar me keh dungi i m visiting my frnds place.ghar me uske sath rahungi,tum aram se apna office ka kaam khatam kar sakte ho & household work vi main kar lungi'.

sanskar-dida,mujhe kya prob ha.main to bohot khush hu.atleast i'll b relieved.aur aap ko koi kaam karne ki zarurat nei ha,maine ek maid fix kar dia ha.aap bas swara ka khyal rakhiye'.

swara cm at dining rubbing her eyes...'sanskar kon ayaa hai,kisse baat kar ahe ho.tumlogo ki baton ne mujhe nind se jaga dia'..

sanskar-dekho swara,kon aya hai,tum apne family se milna chahti thi na,ye dekho ye ha tumari maa aur dida'.

swara staring at thm & ask'tum mere family ho?mere maa dida'.thy both nodded.before thy realize swara jumped on thm & hugged thm tightly...

swara-'yayy!aap mere maa ho aur aap mere dida,aap log vi bohot pyar karoge mujhe'.

dida-haa, shona.hum bohot pyar karenge aur main yehi rahungi tumare sath'.swara with sad face-maa nehi rahoge'?shomi-mujhe to kaam ha na beta,main roz tumse milne aaungi.par dida yehi rahenge tumare sath'.swara-aap pakka ayoge na',shomi-haa ayenge'.

swara thn jumped beside sanskar & kissed his cheek,pull it-'tum kitne ache ho'..sanskar jst shocked.seeing his expressn dida & shomi laugh out aloud..& sanskar blushed.

sanskar-swara meri baat manoge,mujhe kuch der k liye kaam pe jana ha,tum dida k sath rahoge'...

swara with pout-nehi tum yehi raho,mujhe akele nehi rehna'.sanskar-akele kaha ho,dida ha na.main jaldi ajaunga'.

dida-main hu na shona'.swara with crying face-par mujhe sanskar chahiye'...sanskar wiped her face& said-main ajaldi ajaunga.i promise'.

swara-promise na to thik ha.kyuki mujhe pata ha tum kavi apna promise nehi todte'.

sanskar-maa chaliye aapko chid deta hu,aap dida ki luggage pack karke rakhna,main MM se ate waqt lekar ayunga'.thy both leave.

evening at MM-

DP-adarsh-laksh were sitting at dinning.pari & ragini were setting dining table for dinner.AP & sujata in kitchen.

sanskar didnt realize he left his phn on dining table.he received a msg from pia.ragini saw it.

ragini th8-sanskar k phn pe kisi ladki ki msg..interesting'.before she cn open it,phn automatically locked again.it shwing to draw a pattern.

ragini-ab kaise pata lagau?oh main vi kitna pagal hu,pattern S hi hoga'.

sanskar noticed his phn with ragini & immidiately snatch it.'what the hell ragini?manners vul gaye ho kya?how dare u to touch my phn without my permission?'.

laksh-sanskar!ye kaise baat kar raha hai.tera tameez kaha gaya'..

sanskar-oh pls!tum dono ye tameez ke baat karke uss word ka insult mat karo'.

sujata-itna kyu bharak raha ha chora!phn hi to tha'.

sanskar-maa pls ab aap suru mat ho jao.bade papa,main ye file le jaa raha hu.kal office me vejwa dunga.& ha,main kal sirf kuch waqt k liye ayunga.porso se office join karunga'.

sujata-arre aise mat jaa chora,khana ready hai.khake chale jaa'.

sanskar-nehi mom.mera frnd intazar kar raha hoga.i need to go'.

sujata-kya dost dost!hum vi to yaha intazar kar rahe ha'.sanskar-maa pls nt again.wo yaha akela ha,naya hai.aap har baat pe suru mat ho jao'.

ragini-waise sanskar ye pia konhai,jiska msg aya avi?'...

sujata-haye kisi chori ka msg!kon ha chora wo?mardwari ha ke?ghar me kon kon ha?kya karti ha?'

sanskar-dur raho mere personal life se ragini.ghar me sab tumare kehne pe uthte baithte ha matlab ye nehi u cn cntrl my life.jst stay out of my life.aur maa,apko bas mauka chahiye hai na,for ur kind informatin pia mere frnd ka behen ha aur mujhe bhai kehti ha.aap logo ne to mera mood hi kharab kar dia.isiliye main sabse dur rehna chahta hu'...

saying tht he took leave from MM.

prcp-swasan visiting every places of kolkata.maheswari ladies went for shopping & saw swasan togethr.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sonu this us very sweet I love u alot for this FF .. I actually missed few parts I'll comment for all..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Such a sweet n emotional story..plz update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Tnx for pm
N lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Superb
Wow Shomi and dida are with shona
sanskaar gave nice answer to raglak

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Posted: 10 years ago
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yaar..wo logo ko maat dekhao swasan ko...please take time...but its awesome.

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