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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Amazingly beautiful medha
Just perfect
Rabindra sangeet ,though I know nothing about me but the fact it has its name attached to the great Rabindra Nath tagore itself speaks loads
The translation of the song gave me goosebumps,What a beautiful song
simple deep and enchanting!!
I simply envy You writers at forum especially u shruti and Viji ...why can't I write such beautiful stories..oh my poor grammar and vocabularyy...!!!
What beautiful piece of writing
The little things of fun u described between them were so cute yet presented the deep understanding and comfort they share with one another
Lovely as always medha
You are truly gifted dear
keep writing
love Samiya

Edited by samiya.059 - 9 years ago

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Sana

@Forum.Maniac

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Such a beautiful and haunting OS, Medha. It leaves me wanting more just like most of your writings do.

Loved that light moment between Swara and Sanskaar in the cafeteria. There are very few liberties that you only dare to take with the one you love, like Swara did with helping herself to Sanskaar's packet of chips and finishing half of it ❤️

The translation of the song did explain the reason for Swara's tears. It wasn't just missing, it was also her realization of all the times she has taken him for granted and shot him down without a care for his feelings. It was beautiful indeed.

Sanskaar was wary of the meaning Swara was trying to convey, this is something I really want to see on the show too.

The talking throughtout the night was so adorable ❤️

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

It was awesome and amazing dear...

I felt it was really cute...

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

cute one shot.

Thanks for the pm

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Medha 🤗 I feel so good after reading SwaSan's stories 😳
And as i always said it's always a treat to read your stories. You manage so well to capture the emotions 👏 I never heard about the song neither i know bengali. But i listened to it (thank you for posting the link 😳) and i loved it ❤️ It fit perfectly for SwaSan <3
Swara and Sanskar's conversation are always beautiful. The chips's eating scene was a delight
And then the night scene. How beautifully you have penned it down 👏 The lyrics's translation ❤️ I love this song now 😳 And this line:
"Its my favourite song Sanskaar. Yet I did not understand it at all before you entered and are now trying to exit my life. I miss you" ❤️
They kept talking all the night without even realizing that it was morning aww This two ❤️
Keep writing Medha 😳

Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Khub valo.ganta ki 'amar hiya r majhe'??
Amar robindrasangit khub valo lage.sob somoi li8 off kore robindrasangit suni halka sound dia.valo lage.

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Medah..🤗

loved this os..😊

i don't know who is tagore..😉 but lyrics r nice perfectly suited to swasan situation...😳

"Lakshya had invited himself.." this line OMG..🤣

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

This is brilliant!! The song is amazing. Thanks for posting the audio too 😊

I liked that Sanskaar was distant here. Sometimes a little distance can make wonders. I loved the contrast you presented in swara's outlook before she spoke to sanskaar and after he left. Once he left, all the things which once seemed beautiful lost their luster because he was not their to share it with her.

I loved the Kavita reference too. Kavita is a part of his life, his memories. She will always remain so. I wish they would talk about Kavita in the show too. One poignant conversation centered around her and I will be happy.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: misaki

I actually love when someone goes out of the "general way" and tries to do something new. So there was no way that I wouldn't like it , especially coming from you Medhu.😊

With Swara being super dense!🤢 I know re! Which is exactly what is making me write so much. I even left thinking about my FF (I really need to start working that on that one)in the middle so that I can finish the TS and get the frustration out and make Swara suffer and realize.
I seriously don't understand what they are trying to do with Ragini. Her plotting and planning and promising them hell is fine. But car blast? 😕 Again with the murder angle. Sanskaar love, dekho kya kya sehna pad raha hain hamain tumhare liye. It's torture to watch all this crap. Hopefully, Swara Devi realizes her love for you soon *headdesk*

Yeah..that FF, what on earth happened I never got to read after the 6th part😡

and I dunno, what they are planning for ragini. Loony bin? Like I cannot even bear to see her if she does a car blast🤢 she is a lead toh..not a vamp right?😕 Maybe they'll show ki everybody thinks she did it ..and then someone else comes up..a new entry?😲 overimagination.😲

If swara does not realise her love soon..our sansku is gonna die . of lovaria even if he does not die of blasts, which he won't.😕