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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Oye, loved it Medhuuu... Swara eating up Sanku's chips.. and the song.. I also learnt singing.. Rabindrasangit is my fav too.. I guessed the song "Amar hiyar majhe lukiye chile dekhte ami paini tomay dekhte ami paini" is it? Reply me..


thanks Purbi...
glad u liked it.

oi gantai...video ta chilo toh khole ni bujhi?😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: misaki

Medhu This deserves a big jhappi🤗🤗


Firsly, loved how you got the song to almost say everything Swara had to say. It was perfect👏I didn't understand a word of course, but I listened to it after reading Swara's translation. Maybe that's why I could feel it when I was listening.😊
I too am not fond of remixes, esp the good old amazing melodious ones. They are meant to stay that way.

I also noticed how you did not make it unnecessarily dramatic. The Gulmohar tree touch was very beautifully done. I loved how it so fittingly served to reflect Swara's moods .
The way Sanskaar helped Swara finally find a song that spoke her heart was perfect!
Kavita's inclusion in the story to tell how much she still means to Sanskaar as his first love was very nicely done.
Of course the last part where they finally get to talk and clear their MU gave thandak to my heart. If only it were that easy in the serial duniya *sigh*

Pleasure to read again Medhu!🤗


Thanks Geetu..and jhappi back.🤗

I was unsure of this OS acceptability..because its not really very generalised so to speak.
I really don't care. People whose opinions matter to me as a writer...think its good..then its ok.😃

I am glad u took the pains of trying to understand this...and reading it after the translation was a good idea.😊

I am making up my own endings...I cannot bear bomb blasts drama. ragini ko terrorist murdere kya kya nahi bana tahe hai. still if it makes Swra get some sense in that thick skull of hers😭...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: medhasankar



thanks Purbi...
glad u liked it.

oi gantai...video ta chilo toh khole ni bujhi?😕

Na kholeni.. Net ta slow jachche.. Sakale ato boro drugswala post korechi je mobile er matha kharap hye geche.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Na kholeni.. Net ta slow jachche.. Sakale ato boro drugswala post korechi je mobile er matha kharap hye geche.. 😆


he he...
mobile got drugged.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: medhasankar


Thanks Geetu..and jhappi back.🤗

I was unsure of this OS acceptability..because its not really very generalised so to speak.
I really don't care. People whose opinions matter to me as a writer...think its good..then its ok.😃

I am glad u took the pains of trying to understand this...and reading it after the translation was a good idea.😊

I am making up my own endings...I cannot bear bomb blasts drama. ragini ko terrorist murdere kya kya nahi bana tahe hai. still if it makes Swra get some sense in that thick skull of hers😭...


I actually love when someone goes out of the "general way" and tries to do something new. So there was no way that I wouldn't like it , especially coming from you Medhu.😊

With Swara being super dense!🤢 I know re! Which is exactly what is making me write so much. I even left thinking about my FF (I really need to start working that on that one)in the middle so that I can finish the TS and get the frustration out and make Swara suffer and realize.
I seriously don't understand what they are trying to do with Ragini. Her plotting and planning and promising them hell is fine. But car blast? 😕 Again with the murder angle. Sanskaar love, dekho kya kya sehna pad raha hain hamain tumhare liye. It's torture to watch all this crap. Hopefully, Swara Devi realizes her love for you soon *headdesk*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: medhasankar


I want Sanskaar to be dense...so Swara hits her head hard.
It needs some sense knocked into.

The meaning was very clear...just he cannot trust the meaning teller very much. She keeps going so round and round.😡

Thanks for liking it..and the imagery provided.

and Thanks for reassuring me that its good..I was scared about this one's acceptability.


Why? I mean scared about acceptability?

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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
loved it loved it loved it... Loved it vry much...

Hw much Swara was happy whn she find Sanskar thr... Loved SwaSans cnvrsation . Hw sad whn she came to knw about that he didnt came there for her. He gaving d last chips to Swara... I loved it...
Their phn cnvrsation was nyc... Whn I read the lyrics I felt that this song is written for SwaSan...

Sanskar vry well knw hw to make her smile whn she is not in gud mood...

In serial too , I want Sanskar to keep some distance frm Swara... Thn only she'll realize her feeling...

I dnt knw y , but I really expecting one more part frm u... I want to knw wt's they r going to discuss tmrw ? I really want to knw hw Swara is going to confess her love to her Sanskar . Plsss...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
I LOVE YOU Medha! ❤️How can you write so good? Your words are charming. I'm not going to say I've fallen for this once more, I have fallen for the writer herself...🤗much less confusion I guess! Don't have to waste my time thinking which OS I love more.
This is the most beautiful OS I've ever read no doubt on that one. And the song...I have no words for it.❤️❤️
As I read on, images popped in my mind, the sun set, the flowers, Swara and Sanskar sharing chips...they would never fade from my imagination's eye I guess.
Then the phone call, the song translation and then the later conversation...I just love it! It has a golden aura of the sweetest longing of love, just like the sunset you have captured at the beginning. Marvelous piece of writing!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Hey medha
I really love this
Well i have tried to listen n understand the song but then i didn't get the lyrics so dropped the idea n read the OS but after reading the meaning of those beautiful line i listen it again but samajh phir bhi nhi aya😆
But tge OS was so beautiful
Thanks for the pm
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely one, Medha. I specifically liked that you brought Kavita in and the fact that she remains in some corner of his heart still! Wish the CVs would take inspiration from the writers here...sigh!


I don't know Bengali, but I listened to the song, the melody is haunting! Thanks for the translation.

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