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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
This is brilliant!! The song is amazing. Thanks for posting the audio too 😊
I liked that Sanskaar was distant here. Sometimes a little distance can make wonders. I loved the contrast you presented in swara's outlook before she spoke to sanskaar and after he left. Once he left, all the things which once seemed beautiful lost their luster because he was not their to share it with her.
I loved the Kavita reference too. Kavita is a part of his life, his memories. She will always remain so. I wish they would talk about Kavita in the show too. One poignant conversation centered around her and I will be happy.

Hey raksha,

Yeah..how could they just wipe Kavita off I dunno.🤢 unless of course they mean to bring her back someday.😳

Distance makes the heart grow fonder...and also makes u realise their worth.

Thats what I wanted Swara to realise.😊

I am glad u liked the OS😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
beautiful os

thanks Prithi😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: swa291
Wow loved it dear.
When will our sansku get his love
Waiting for that day

thanks ...

glad u liked it.

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Loved this OS !! I liked the song too !!

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
Loved this OS !! I liked the song too !!

thanks nisha.

glad u like it.😊

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preetywoman

@preetywoman

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Lovely OS Medha 🤗

This is one of my favourite Rabindrasangeet 😳

And I must say,it suited the situation perfectly 😛

I love how you writers make Swara take the initiative in all your stories , its like a balm to my aching heart , after seeing her torturing Sansku indirectly in the show , by being such a confused soul . 😕

I have a small request . 😛

If you dont mind , can you write another musical OS , on anpther of my favourite Tagore song , Amaro porano jaha chay 😳

I think this song will perfectly fit in Sanskar's situation , if he starts feeling that Bhabhiji is still in love with devarji , during this ridiculous BFF track

I love that song , specially the following lines -

TUMI SUKH O JODI NAHI PAO
JAO SUKHER SONDHANE JAO OOO

AMI TUMARE PAYECHI HRIDOY O MAJHE
ARO KICHU NAHI CHAI GO

JODI ARO KARO VALO...BASHO
JODI ARO FIRE NAHI ASHO

TOBE TUMI JAHA CHAO
TAI JENO PAO
AMI JOTO DOKHKHO PAI GO OOO
AMARO PORANO JAHA CHAY
TUMI TAI

Edited by preetywoman - 9 years ago

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Ramya

@The-Heart

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Wonderful OS with beautiful song⭐️⭐️ and the meaning of the song is heart touching🤗

Swara eating chips like a child 😆 ( Its fun to watch this kind of scenes in show)

I love to see swara missing sanskar so much and suffering like this before confession ( you know i am big sadist in this kind of things😉)

Talking full night without realizing the time is beautiful moment

Please write more this kind of musical OS, it will give a sigh of relief😃 after watching the current devar bhabi scrap in show😡

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monsi08

@monsi08

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Ah subtle ! Perfect song selection 😊 I loved the meaning of it..

Its true that sanskar needs to be away from swara for her to realise his worth. He is always around and so she doesn't know what she has and what she would lose when he isn't there. She is taking him for granted

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Beautiful OS Medha

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: samiya.059
Amazingly beautiful medha
Just perfect
Rabindra sangeet ,though I know nothing about me but the fact it has its name attached to the great Rabindra Nath tagore itself speaks loads
The translation of the song gave me goosebumps,What a beautiful song
simple deep and enchanting!!
I simply envy You writers at forum especially u shruti and Viji ...why can't I write such beautiful stories..oh my poor grammar and vocabularyy...!!!
What beautiful piece of writing
The little things of fun u described between them were so cute yet presented the deep understanding and comfort they share with one another
Lovely as always medha
You are truly gifted dear
keep writing
love Samiya

Thank you Samiya...

and I am glad u liked it.😃

I dunno about your grammar and vocabulary..

but I think you should write lines in Urdu...

I told you before also..

you seem interested in it..and obviously you are well read in it.

Try and write one on SwaSan na😊