Swaragini ff: 'YOU ARE THE ONE' CH 6 pg 20 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Niyati brilliant update 👏
I'm loving your story 😳 Continue soon ⭐️

Thank u so much
I'll update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini


Thanks eee u Neha na😕


Yup..
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loved ur ff completely !!
dont know how i missed this one..
waiting for next update..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

loved ur ff completely !!
dont know how i missed this one..
waiting for next update..

Thanks a lot most probably I'll update by night.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a cute story
I'm loving it 👏
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Originally posted by: Amrtina

Such a cute story

I'm loving it 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 4

After laksh made sanskar understand abt kavita. He called him it was wen she confessed she doesn't likes swara's presence around as he always pays heed to her , sanskar promised her that from now, she will be her priority.


GADODIA MANSION

"Ragini di to iska mtlb hum uttara ke Bhai ki sagai me jaenge" swara couldn't believe that ragini approved to go. "Han shona ye bat tum 5 bar pehle Hi puch chuki ho" ragini said n swara bit her tongue. "But suno maasi ko kuch mt pta lgne dena ok" swara simply nodded in yes. "To di kal hum kya pehenge" ragini smiled at her baby's sister 's silly questions. "Kapde swara" joked ragini. "Hahahaha hasna tha kya dI, bt btao na" swara made puppy face. "Mmm tum fikr mt kro me tumhare kapde nikal dungi OK" and swara nodded n hugged ragini.

"Oho behno ka pyaar to dekho" came the cruel janki in. "Tumse kuch kam to hota nai h or yhn bethke bus hasna ata h" she said angrily.
"Ghar b to hamara h , apki permission thodi lenge hasne k lie or rahi bt kam ki to is ghar me 7 servents h unse kahie" ragini replied with low tone full of anger n hatered for her.
"Ragini bhul mt hum is ghar k caretaker h" janki came to ragini. "To kya hum is ghar k hone wale malik h, ap b janti h hamari shaadi k bd is ghr ka adha hissa hmara n adha hmari bhn ka hoga" janki left being disguised.

Janki's room

"Sunie," she said to her husband. "Hume is ragini ki shadi apne pehchan k kisi ldke se Hi krni hogi, Jo isse vo property hmare naam kr de" his husband turned. "Par vo ladka hoga kaun or hmari bt manega kyun." He completed. "Vo sab me dekh lungi." Janki smirked.

MAHESHWARI MANSION

Sanskar was in his room. "Kal me kavita ko ye gift dunga" he said seeing smthng online.
He took the phone and dialed to ajit. "Sun kal kavita ka bday h mene uske lie ek gift order kia h tere adress pe, sagai me ate waqt leke aaio okk" sanskar completed in a breathe. "Sanky tujhe marunga me" ajit got up frm bed. "Itni rat ko ye btane k lie phn kia tune, mind khrb kr dI" ajit completed. "Hahaha achal so ja Dr" sanskar hunged the call.
"Kal me apni jaan ka din bht acha bna dunga" she smiled n slept.

Next day

All were in MAHESHWARI MANSION for the preparations of engagement. It was their family's first marriage for this generation, they wanted to make if the most memorable.
"Sujata jaldi karo parineeta k parivar vale ate hi honge" Annapurna called for sujata who was in kitchen busy making some sweets.
"Jiji kr Hi rhi ho je dono chore to kisi kam k na h, mithai mangai thi vo b na hua inse" she shouted out angrily. And felt someone's hand on her shoulder she turned n saw sanskar n laksh with sweets in their hands. "Ye lo mom ab mt khna kam nai kia" giggled sanskar.
"Arey mahre chore mene kab kha ki tum dono kam na krte ho lao yhn rkh do" she showed them where they were supposed to keep the sweets.
"Chalo ab tayar ho jao guests ate Hi honge." Sujata said n both of them went to get ready.

After 2 hours , the MAHESHWARI MANSION was full of guests.
Sanskar was a blue kurta with black pathani. Laksh in cream sherwani,
Swara entered wearing a pink colour anarkali and ragini in yellow A line kurta with patiyala.
Kavita came wearing green colour anarkali,
Uttara was wearing blue lehenga, priya came in mustard dress very like of uttara.

All were there ,uttara went running to swara to priya. Ragini joined her friends. "Swara iska ghar to bht bda h na" exclaimed priya. "Hmm" swara simply huffed . uttara came n hugged swara. "Chalo na swara kuch khate h" uttara dragged her to food area.
Swara n uttara had the traditional daal baati n priya took simple snacks. When they giggling n smiling at their jokes when by mistake uttara spilled daal on swara's dress "shit I m so sorry swara" uttara panicked. "Hey its OK uttara" swara smiled to her.
"Chal come to my room n wash it" uttara took swara with her. On way laksh met them. "Hiii chutki kesi h" he pinched swara's nose. "Achi hun" she smiled to laksh. "Ab to niketan kuch ni krta na, vese vo b h yhn chal bdla le khub marenge use" he made swara laugh out loud. "Arey ye kya hua" he saw stain on swara's dress. "Daal.." Swara .made puppy face. "Uttara le jake saaf kra de" n he bid goodbye to them n left.

Laksh went to his group , ruchi n ragini n saesha in their world. Laksh came n hugged saesha almost brushing his hands with ragini. It send shivers in her.
"How r u bebs" he asked to saesha. "I m fine baby" they both were standing hand in hand wen laksh asked ragini "mmm u all r looking very beautiful. Ruchi and ragini simply noded. Ragini was not much interested in interacting with laksh. So ruchi n she went to food area.

Upstairs swara and uttara were walking to her room. " oh no swara I remembered while knob of my washroom's tap broke" swara do one thing tum is room me fresh ho jao okkk" swara smiled n went to the room she instructed.
Swara went to washroom n spilled water on Her anarkali n came out to room n was standing at the window. It was 5 in evening n the dawn appeared to be beautiful she stood to feel the cold winds touching her face a smile took her face. Then she realised in winters usualy it gets dark soon so the dawn light made it difficult for her to peep further in room she searched for the light switches. Wen someone came in.
"Kaun h" she said being scared. As she made a step forward she bumped in smone who was lying in floor. "Aaa" she saw sanskar looking at her with surprise. "Tum yhn kya kr ri ho" he whispered. "Me vo... mere dress me..." sanskar dint let her complete "Jo b ho jao yhn se, kavita ane vali h mujhe usse akele me bat krni h" these words almost killed swara. She slightly stood up n was abt to go wen sanskar holded her frm her waist n took her behind curtains. "Shhh.. Kavita aa ri h shyd vo tumhe mere sth na dekh le tum yai rhna" n he went out.
She saw sanskar giving a gift to kavita. N much to swara's shock kavita kissed sanskar's lips n they were passionately kissing, swara's eyes went wet. She stood like a statue no matter how much she denies bt she. Was attracted to him.
They broke the kiss n sanskar told kavita to leave as someone cn come. As soon as she left sanskar moved the curtains n saw swara standing there mumb. "Ab tum ja skti ho" sanskar smiled to her n stood folded her arms.
Swara was abt to go wen sanskar said "by the way u r looking very beautiful" whispered in her ears. She dint responded n left. "Ise kya hua me hmesha use chup kese kra deta hun" he ran his hands through his hairs.

Engagement was over all was completed happily.
Annapurna came to laksh n sanskar n uttara's group.
"Beta thankss for cmng n being a part of our happiness" Annapurna said. "Mmm to maa apko mere sb disturb pasand aae" laksh said winking to saesha. "Laksh bura mt manio ache to sb the par sbse achi to mahre ko je ragini lagi bdi sundar or samajdar choei h" completed sujata. And all smiled except laksh n saesha.
"N mom mre dost" uttara said bt sanskar intrupped "pehle mere valo k bare me" "Bhai pehle me" "pehle me" they started fighting "oh bus , hum bta re h na jiji dekhiye inhe" sujata smacked her head.
"Sanskar sb bht ache h," then Annapurna's eyes fell on the most shy n beautiful girl was standing without saying a word. "Arey beta tum itni chup chup kyun ho" she came to swara. "Vo kuch nai aunty" she smiled back to her. "Tum akele ghr kese.." Annapurna said said "ye hmari bhn h aunty, hum chale jaenge" ragini smiled to her.
"Par raat me koi taxi..." sujata said. "Hmare pass gaadi h aunty or hum drive b krte h, swara ko b aati h driving bt abi license nai h uska" she laughed n so did others. "Tumhare maa baba aise mana nai krte , me to inhd kbi nai Jane dun" Annapurna said. Tears took swara's eyes ragini went silent. "Kya hua asked laksh who first time saw her tensed. " vo aunty hmare maa basp ko guzre 3 saal ho gae hum or swara ek dusre k lie sb kuch h" she cried. All went silent. Even sanskar was shocked to know that swara was an orphan, he knew that she dnt hv father bt this made sanskar shocked. N so was laksh he realised by ragini is always in trust issues with all. As she had to secure her baby sister.
Annapurna and sujata hugged swara n ragini respectively. "Nai beta aj se kbi aise mt khna hum uttara ki maa h to tumhari b hue na" Annapurna said to swara. Swara went emotional. Ragini turned to swara. "Thank u aunty lekin hum kbi hmari bhn ko anath nai khta uske lie hum uski maa h or hmesha rhenge jaan h vo hmari" n she hugged swara. Annapurna was shocked to see level of matureness ragini holds she was so young to be so protective n well mannered.
She touched ragini's head. "Fr me tumhari maa" ragini hugged Annapurna tight. Ya that was a motherly bond they shared. Saesha smiled to ragini n hugged her too. "Ragini schi me hum sb tujhe bht Pyar krte h" laksh was also happy for ragini.
"Ye kya nautanki h" kavita murmured bt sanskar heard it. "Tum pagl to nai ho gai ho, chup rho" he felt disguised.

At night it was almost 12.

Sanskar's room
"Swara kitni Dari sehmi so rhti h aj pta lga kyun. Kitni pyari h vo" a smile took his face. "Sanskar tu kavita ka boyfriend h hosh me aa." He jerked the blanket n went below it.

PRECAP: "bachao bachao" shouted swara bt still he approached her , he tore her shirt .

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Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey very nice update i think boy is niketan and sanskar will save swara
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update
Hope nothing happens to swara
Thnku for the pm

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