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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Loved it, the update was awesome! Loved reading about the trust Swara has on Sanskaar. It was adorable how much she missed him and how frustrated she was!
Will she fall in love soon?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Continue soon, please.

thanks for your nice comments 😊 😊

i hope she falls in love soon too...but i think it will take some more time. she has been taking him and his presence for granted. she needs to be shaken up a bit for her to wake up.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Res. Just woke up. Need a clear head to read this :)

Unres

Sanskaar ke toh Qayamat aa gayi.. he was ignoring her and RagLak had been testing her patience.

Sorry for the late comment. Thanks for the update and pm. Continue soon!!

Edited by Sparkler8 - 9 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I have somehow missed this while roaming around the forum, my eyes must have been frosted not to see it...

This is so good! Intelligent to an interesting level, and I really like your writing style...charming actually.

Dear, can I give you one advice?

Try to move your story forward a little faster, I'm sorry if I hurt you by saying this but since your updates are short, it'll be a lot more interesting if the story moves a bit, mind you not too much, but a bit faster.

I'm so sorry if I made you feel uncomfortable, I really love this one that's why I made the suggestion.

Continue soon. :)

- Sakura

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Just read part 4. Loved the way Sanskaar explained to Swara.

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sparkler8
Just read part 4. Loved the way Sanskaar explained to Swara.

thanks Sparkler 😊

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Sakura24
I have somehow missed this while roaming around the forum, my eyes must have been frosted not to see it...
This is so good! Intelligent to an interesting level, and I really like your writing style...charming actually.
Dear, can I give you one advice?
Try to move your story forward a little faster, I'm sorry if I hurt you by saying this but since your updates are short, it'll be a lot more interesting if the story moves a bit, mind you not too much, but a bit faster.
I'm so sorry if I made you feel uncomfortable, I really love this one that's why I made the suggestion.
Continue soon. :)
- Sakura

thanks for your comments Sakura.Really appreciated your advice.will try to move it along faster

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

The next part is a bit of filler, but i hope you like it.

I am trying to keep the characters as close to what we see them in the show, but at the same time trying to untangle the plot to get us to what we all want to see.

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Neha

@..Neha.

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

hey good one chalo at least she's realizing here! the line he has become voice of her head!! wow!! beautifully written. cont soon

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ..Amaira..
hey good one chalo at least she's realizing here! the line he has become voice of her head!! wow!! beautifully written. cont soon

thanks amaira...this Swara like the show one hadn't yet thought about why she is doing some of the things...she hasn't realised yet. she has started to feel somethings though.