Raglak Fanfic: Ishq ki intehaa

Raglak NEW Fanfic by Shazi Part 1

The setup of the fanfic:

This is an only RagLak fanfic and there would be no swara or sanskar in the story... Sorry SwaSan fans :(

This story starts from the beginning when Laksh and Ragini do not even know each other.

Evening time:

A girl in modern avtar is standing on the terrace of the baadi and her eyes are closed. She is looking up in the sky and folding her hands. She is wearing a pink top with pyjamas trousers with her hair tied on the side.

Suddenly, she hears someone but thinks nobody would come at this time. Then a boy comes to her and says: sorry but mujhe bacha lo please.

Girl: Kaun ho tum aur yahan kya kar rahey ho?

Boy: abhi chupa lo baad mein sab bata doon ga please...

Girl: chalo store room mein

They hide and the boy thanks her.

Boy: Hi my name is Laksh

Girl: to hum kya karein? Kya churaya hai tum ne?

Laksh: arey kuch nahi wo mere friends ne apney neighbours ke ghar par eggs phenk diye they to khaamkha mein phans gaya mere peeche police padh gayi thi aur agar papa ko pata chal jaata to meri to band baj jaati. Aur tum kaun ho?

Girl: kyun humein fb pe ja kar search karna hai kya

Laksh: arey nahi tumhara thanks karna hai theek se

Girl: hum ragini hain

Laksh: yeh hum hum kya lagaya hua hai tum koi group ho kya

Ragini: tumhey kya hai yeh humari bachpan ki aadat hai

Laksh: haha ok thanks Ragini ab mujhe chalna chahiye

Ragini: to jao hum ne kab roka tumhe?

Laksh: ok madam

He runs to get back home and Ragini says: kesse kesse pagal logon se paala pad jaata hai

Ragini looks up in the sky: maa aap humein kyun chod kar chali gayi

She gets teary eyes and leaves. She goes in her room and goes to sleep meanwhile Laksh also reaches his room by his window and opens his laptop.

Laksh: yaar dark mein to madam ragini sahi nazar nahi aa rahi thi fb pe search kartey hain

He searches for her on facebook but doesn't find her then he Google searches her and sees Ragini Gadodia Classical Dancer and Singer contest einner of Calcutta. He then searches Ragini Gadodia and finds her. He looks at the pictures and says: yaar mujhe wahan pe achey se dekh lena chahiye tha yeh to pretty Ragini nikli.

He sends her a friend request and waits for her to accept.

Laksh: arey abhi to uthi ho gi yaar accept kyun nahi kar rahi? Essa karta hoon cancel kar deta hoon... Magar agar wo so rahi hui aur dekhi na toh? Kal tak wait karta hoon.

He goes to sleep. In the morning, the first thing he does is to check his fb but nothing there.

He checks his inbox and sees a message from Ragini and chat starts...

Ragini: who is this?

Laksh: arey yaad nahi kya kal ka chor baadi mein? Haha

Ragini: tum ne humein dhoonda kese?

Laksh: well I am too god nahi?

He waits for a reply but nothing. Ragini goes to her dad and says: papa aap ko kuch chaiye kya?

Shekhar: nahi beta mujhe tum se kuch zaroori baat karni hai

Ragini gets scared from yesterday night's incident and says: boliye

Shekhar: beta hum itney raees ho kar itney chotey se ghar mein rehtey hain mein businessman hoon kahin pe bhi ghar banwa sakta hoon to hum yahan?

Ragini: nahi papa aap jantey hain ke iss ghar se maa ki yaadein judi hui hain aur hum maa se juda nahi ho saktey. Yahan se hi aap dono ne apni zindagi ki shuruwaat ki thi aur aap chahtey hain ke hum yahan se chaley jayein?

Shekhar smiles and says: bohat ziddi hai meri beti

Ragini smiles and checks her phone then reads laksh's message

Ragini: oh please, don't give yourself so much importance

Laksh phone rings and he smiles by seeing Ragini's message

Laksh: well now u reply itni deer ke baad?

Ragini: instant reply? Tum to mujhe dara hi rahey ho kya chahiye tumhe?

Laksh: arey nahi wesse hi friendship tum ne meri mada jo kit hi

Ragini: kaha na its ok... Bye

Laksh: friend request to accept kar lo? Ragini?

She goes offline and Laksh wonders why she is not replying

Laksh: zyada bhaav kha rahi hai yaar chalo chodo

Laksh goes out with his friend Omi and tells him everything that happened... Omi suggests him to not talk to the girl because she could tell your dad

Lakh: mein kissi se darta nahi hoon agar yeh mujhe attitude dikha rahi hai to me bhi kam nahi hoon

Omi: bhai tujhe pyaar to nahi ho gaya na?

Laksh: nahi tu mujhe jaanta nahi hai kya? Me uss ko bataon g eke Laksh Maheshwari hai kaun

They laugh and Laksh messages her

Laksh: attitude mat do mere papa bohat badey businessman hain unh se keh kar tumhara saara bio data nikalwa sakta hoon main

Ragini replies instantly: haha to hum kya karein? Humarey papa bhi businessman hain tumharey jesse 100 ladkon ko wo apni jeb mein rakh saktey hain

Laksh: jhoot mat bolo rehti to tum itney chotey se ghar mein rehti ho

Ragini: agar kissi baat ka pata na ho to bolna nahi chahiye... Mein tum jesse cheap insaan se kabhi baat nahi karna chahti

Laksh: arey mein mazaak kar raha tha Ragini baat to suno

She blocks him and doesn't talk to him...

Laksh then starts his research on Ragini and asks the story behind the gagodia house...

A neighbour tells him the story that Ragini was 15 years old when her mom, dadi and dada passed away in a car crash. They were very close to her and she used to cry a lot but then her dad and she got very close and she goes everyday to the terrace to talk to her mom. This house was built by her dada and her mum and dad started their journey from here which is why Ragini wants to stay in here and does not want to sell the house as there are a lot of memories attached. After the mum passed away, Shekhar got into his business so much that now he is a very well known businessman of the country.

Laksh gets teary eyes: oh toh ab me samjha ke Ragini itni upset kyun ho gayi thi. Anyways kya aap bata saktey hain ke Ragini iss waqt kahan miley gi?

Neighbour: pata nahi magar Ragini bitiya iss waqt dance classes mein jaati hai shayad wahan miley gi.

Laksh leaves to reach there and sees Ragini in her fitted dance suit. He is mesmerised and says: wow yeh real mein to aur sundar lag rahi hai... Yeh tujhe kya ho raha hai Lucky control yourself tu sirf yahan maafi maangne aaya hai.

Ragini is a classical and aerobics dancer. She does her aerobics moves and he cannot get his eyes off her. Then he says: control yaar lucky tujhe ho kya raha hai...

Precap: He sees Ragini coming out n holds her hand. She says: kaun ho tum?

Hope u all liked...

#Shazi

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New RagLak fanfic part 2 by Shazi

Ragini comes out of her classes and someone holds her hand. She tries to free herself and cannot really recognise the person.

Ragini: ccount number ho tum? Tum ho nahi to hum jaantey ccount number tumharey poorey hain ...

Laksh: arey Ragini its me Laksh the chor form the other night

Then he leaves her hand

Ragini: Laksh tum humara peecha kyun kar rahey ho hum ne kaha na humein tum se baat nahi karni to phir kya chahtey ho tum? Hum essi vessi ladki nahi hain!

Laksh: jaanta hoon main magar me tum se kal ke liye maafi mangna chahta tha mujhe pata nahi tha ke tumhari mom

Ragini: Laksh bus tumhe nahi hai koi haq humari barey mein zindagi ke laganey ka pata chaley jao aur tum ho humarey peeche kyun zabardasti ccount number parey ho?

Laksh: ab tum se kabhi nahi miloon ga sorry

Ragini: bye

Laksh see Ragini going and he also makes a move he then turn around half way through but Ragini does not turn and goes.

Laksh reaches home and is furious with himself. He starts punching his wall and thinks about hurting Ragini's feelings.

Laksh: kyun mujhe itna farq par raha hai wo to sirf ek ladki hai magar meri neend kyun udh rahi hai uss ke barey mein soch ke. Mujhe uss se milna hi ho ga warna mein pagal ho jaon ga wo mujhe! Lucky ko reject kese kar rakti hai? Mene aaj tak kissi ladki se sorry nahi kiya aur iss se kiya to yeh attitude dikha rahi hai? Nahi me essa nahi honey doon ga tumhe mujh se baat karni ho gi

Next day Laksh goes near the academy but Ragini is not there. He goes to the information desk.

Laksh: excuse me kya aap mujhe bata sakti hain ke Ragini aaj aayi ya nahi?

Receptionist: jee Ragini madam aayi to thi lekin wo aaj jaldi chali gayin unhein koi lene aa gaya tha

Laksh: ok thanks

Laksh is driving back to his house when he sees Ragini in a purple and white salwar suit. He parks his car and goes near her in the coffee shop then he realises she is sitting with someone. He gets surprised but thinks that Ragini looks even more beautiful in this dress.

Laksh: lucky yaar control yourself and talk to her

Ragini sees him and makes him a sign to help her.

Laksh: arey Ragini tum yahan salwar suit mein kya kar rahi ho? Tumhara style to fitted clothes hain na? Aur aaj raat club tum essey jao gi kya?

The other boy: aap kaun?

Laksh: me Ragini ka close actually very close friend...

Ragini: arey Laksh tum aao na

Laksh: please formalities chodo mein tumharey liye sirf lucky hoon to aaj Laksh kyun

Ragini thinks uff yeh apney aap ko pata nahi kya samajhta hai and says: of course Lucky betho na

The other boy: hum jantey nahi they Ragini ji ke aap essey logon se milti hain humein to aap ke papa ne bheja tha aap ko dekhney ke liye magar

Ragini: sorry hum kabhi kabhi jab pi letey hain to essey dost apney aap ban jatey hain

The other boy: kya? Hum chaltey hain bye!

Ragini and Laksh start laughing while the boy runs aways and they high five each other.

Laksh: yeh kaun tha?

Ragini: papa ka hua tha yeh bheja city! Papa chahtey hain me shaadi kar loon kyun ke meri unhein rehti hai magar tension again me papa ko of akela chod doon kesse unh ka rakhey ga ccount number trafficking ecstasy? Khair chodo thanks help to liye ...

Laksh: arey dosti me no sorry no thank you

Ragini: hum dost kab baney

Laksh: arey! Yeh high five aur kya tha?

Ragini laughs then stops and is shocked: tumhein kese pata ke hum yahan they?

Laksh: wo me guzar raha tha to socha coffee pi loon magar yahan tum nazar aa gayi to me kya karta

Ragini: oh!

Laksh says: Baal Baal Bach gaya

Ragini: kuch kaha?

Laksh: han? Nahi wo... Khair Ragini me dil se maafi maangna chahta hoon apney behaviour ke liye

Ragini: its ok raat gayi baat gayi... Pata hai Varun hota na to wo bhi bilkul essa hi karta

Laksh: Varun?

Ragini: Haan mere bachpan ka best friend tha

Laksh: tha?

Ragini: Jab maa guzri to uss ki mom bhi uss haadsey main thi. Tab mein 15 aur wo 16 ka tha. Uss ke papa aur wo London chaley gaye aur Varun ne hum se vaada liya ke hum ussey contact nahi karein ge warna ussey maa ki yaad aati rahey gi. Phir to woh humein bhool hi gaye kabhi contact hi nahi kiya... Hum samajh saktey hain hum bhi aaj tak maa ko nahi bhool paye

Laksh: i am sorry Ragini

Ragini: its ok! Kuch lo ge?

Laksh: cold coffee

Ragini: two cold coffees please

They have coffee together and they laugh thinking about the boy that ran away... Ragini gets a call from shekhar.

Shekhar: Ragini tum ne phir se ek aur bicharey ko daraa kar bhaga diya?

Ragini: papa wo humara peecha hi nahi chod raha tha hum kya kartey

They both laugh

Ragini: love u papa

Shekhar: bye beta

The bill arrives and Laksh is about to pay when Ragini stops him.

Ragini: hum apna bill khud pay karein ge

Laksh: magar Ragini essey acha thodi lagta hai

Ragini: sirf humarey papa ya agar kabhi humara boyfriend ya husband hua to wo hi humarey liye pay kar saktey hain kissi aur ka ehsaan nahi letey hum

Laksh: arey par

Ragini: kaha na

Laksh: ok Ragini madam aap ko ghar drop kar doon?

Ragini: nahi humari car paas me hai hum chaley jayein ge. Bye laksh.

She walks away and laksh is still looking and her. He thinks that what is happening to him why can't he get his eyes off Ragini? He then goes to his car.

In the evening Ragini is lying down and thinks about Varun and their childhood games, the way they used to have fun and the way their families were very close.

(Varun has nothing to do with sanskar or Varun kapoor just to clarify that Varun is the other character of my fanfic and he is Abhishek Malik because I like him and think that he suits Ragini this is why I chose him and I liked the name so called him Varun)

(Once again Varun is Abhishek Malik and not sanskar)

Ragini then cries but wipes her tears and thinks that she needs to be strong for shekhar

She then goes through her phone and remembers that she blocked Laksh so she unblocks him and accepts his request.

Laksh sees that Ragini accepted her so he messages her.

Laksh: thank you madam itni meharbani ke liye

Ragini:badey badey deshon mein essi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hain seniorita

Laksh lies on his bed and gets happy then messages: hahah wese kal tum free ho?

Ragini: umm depends what for

Laksh: movie?

Ragini: mood nahi hai

Laksh: picnic? U nd me?

Ragini: seems like fun

Laksh: pick u ap at 11?

Ragini: too early what about 2?

Laksh: ok be ready!

The next day, Ragini gets ready and she is wearing a dress till her knees wih a simple dots pattern. Laksh looks at her then says: bethiye princess

Ragini laughs and sits in the car...

Laksh: sundar lag rahi ho pehli baar

Ragini: hum hamesha hi sundar lagtey hain

Laksh: aaj sab picnic ka khaana mene banaya hai

Ragini: matlab food poisoning honey wali hai?

Laksh laughs: yeh to kha kar hi pata chaley ga

Ragini plays the radio and ang laga de plays then she changes the radio and tumhe apna banane ka song plays and then she gets embarrassed and stops the Radio.

Laksh starts singing tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hai and Ragini is enjoying the drive.

They go to the spot and Ragini sees some children there. Ragini starts playing with them and laksh looks at her with love.

Ragini comes and sits. Laksh looks at her.

Ragini: essey kya dekh rahey ho

Laksh: tumhe bachon se pyaar hai kya?

Ragini: maa ke janey ke baad hum ne bachon se ek alag hi attachment create kar li kyun ke bachpan me dusron se pyaar milna bohat keemti hota hai jo hum samajh nahi patey.

Chalo ab bohat bhook lag rahi hai tum ne kya banaya

Laksh: yeh lo ab yeh mat kehna ke iss ka bhi tum bill do gi

Ragini: nahi next time me tumhe khana bana kar khilaon gi

They have food, talk about everything and nothing then in the evening they go back in the car and Ragini falls asleep. Laksh looks at her with love and thinks: Ragini jo pyaar tumhein chahiye wo mein tumhe doon ga! Me jaanta hoon ke tum mere sath bohat khush raho gi

Ragini wakes up after some time: laksh ghar aa gaya?

Laksh aaney wala hai: bass. Tum theek ho na?

Ragini: Haan hum theek hain

He drops her and Ragini forgets her bag in his car. She says bye and goes. Omi comes to see laksh there.

Omi: arey bhai wah tu ne toh phansa liya ladki ko kuch dinon mein maan gaya Lucky tujhe. Shart to tu ne poori kar li party kab de ga jab wo poori tarah se teri hi jaye gi?

Laksh: arey omi

Ragini turn him around n slaps him hard

Ragini: you cheapster! You cheated my trust! Tumhe kya lagta hai meri maa nahi hai to tum mera faida utha lo ge? Mujhe hamesha se akele rehney ki aadat thi aur hamesha rahoon gi!

Laksh: nahi Ragini me maanta hoon ke mene ghalati ki magar me tumhara dil nahi dukhana chahta tha jab mujhe pata chala

Ragini: oh to taras kha kar mera sahara ban'ney aa gaye? Tumharey jesse insaan ki humein koi zaroorat nahi! Humein kissi ka sahara nahi chahiye

Laksh: nahi Ragini baat to suno!

Ragini does not listen and takes her bag then goes

OMI: sorry bhai pata nahi tha tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai sacha color tu bhabhi se maar na khata

Laksh has teary eyes and leaves from there. He cannot stop thinking of Ragini and her words...

The next day, ragini comes back from dance classes and when she enters her room, it is full of teddy bears and flowers and sorry messages. She reads one message:

Phoolon jessi ladki ki iss hansi ke peeche itney gham hon ge mene socha na tha... Unh dukhon ko doston ke sath khatam kiya jata hai... Sorry Ragini I promise aaj ke baad tumhara kabhi dil nahi dukhaon ga... Tumhara dost, Laksh

Ragini turn around and he is there.

Laksh holds his ears and says: sorry

Ragini smiles

Precap: Laksh and Ragini become close and they spend their time together. Laksh falls in love with Ragini...

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