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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
New RagLak fanfic by Shazi part 6

Preparations for the sangeet are going on... Laksh is very busy woth the decorations and he is very dedicated to make everything look perfect. He gets a call from unknown number.
Laksh: hello?
Varun: Laksh yaar meri haalat kharaab hai yahan
Laksh: kyun kya hua bro
Varun: papa ne kaha me shaadi tak Ragini ko dekh nahi sakta hoon. Abhi to poora din aur raat padi hai me kya karoon ga
Laksh laughs: arey control karo ek din hi to hai. Tum ne itney saal wait kiya to ek din aur sahi
Varun: bhai tu samajh nahi raha hai Ragini ko dekhney ke baad uss ke chehrey se nazar hataney ka dil nahi karta. Tu nahi samjhey ga tu uss se pyaar jo nahi karta
Laksh pauses for a while and a tear drops from his eyes: acha tujhe mujh se kya chahiye
Varun: aaj sirf girls party hai na tere ghar
Laksh: haan kyun?
Varun: aur wahan sirf tu hi ho ga
Laksh: mujhe bhi ijazat nahi hai
Varun: kuch kar humein wahan jaana ho ga... mujhe to Ragini ko dekhna hai lekin tere liye bhi koi dulhan dhoondni hai
Laksh: teri help to main kar doon ga magar mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai abhi
Varun: to kya karein
Laksh: acha mera plan sun
In the evening, Anna kicks every guy out of the house and Ragini comes in wearing flower jewellery and green and pink simple lehnga. Anna cries looking at her and says: meri bachi ko kissi ki nazar na lagey
Ragini hugs her and the function starts with dholki and some performances from Parineeta bhabhi and other relatives...
From the kitchen, Laksh and Varun enter the house wearing marwadi sarees with pallu
Laksh goes forward and sees Ragini he stands still and cannot get his eyes off her. Varun gets stuck and is about to fall.
Varun: kya kya karna parta hai na apney pyaar ke lie
Laksh still looking at Ragini: wo to hai
Then he realises and helps Varun. They both are looking at her.
Varun: hayeee humari Ragini kitni sundar lag rahi hai na?
Laksh: humari nahi sirf tumhari
Varun: par tumhari bhi to wo best friend hai na humari shaadi ke baad tum Ragini se kabhi bhi milney aa saktey ho mujhe koi problem nahi ho gi
They sit on the chairs in the kitchen. The song Milney hai mujhse aayi phir jaane kyun tanhayi
Laksh imagines dancing with Ragini in a formal suit. He makes Ragini spin and pulls her closer. Then he runs his fingers on her arms and hugs her from the back. She becomes shy and he puts his hands on her cheeks and is about to kiss her forehead but he comes back to his senses.
Varun: Ragini se kese miloon
Laksh: door se dekh le
Varun starts walking towards Ragini and looks at her mehndi... He observes her hands and says in a girly voice: aap ko rang acha aaye ga aap ka honey wala pati aap se bohat pyaar jo karta hai
Ragini: haan.. Magar aap ko kese pata?
She looks at him and gets shocked
Ragini says slowly: bohat maar parney wali hai
Another woman sits on the other side and Ragini looks on...
Ragini: Laksh tum dono ko pitney ka shauk hai kya?
They both start dancing in the middle of women and everyone gets surprised about seeing them dancing with so much enthusiasm.
They take Ragini and all three dance and Varun's pallu falls. Anna looks at him and also removes Laksh's pallu. She holds both guys ears and removes them from the party and everyone laughs...
Then they play truth or dare and they spin the bottle: it goes on parineeta bhabhi
The ladies ask her: Adarsh bhaiya aap se kitna pyaar kartey hain
Parineeta is shy: arey humari itni cute 7 saal ki bachi hai Kalpana aur kya saboot chahiye tum logon ko
They all laugh and then the bottle points toward Ragini: arey nahi nahi hum kuch nahi kahein ge
Parineeta: Ragini bolna to parey ga na
Laksh and Varun are listening to Ragini
Annapurna: beta tumhara sab se acha dost kaun hai
Ragini: Hmm mushkil sawal hai... Humara sab se acha dost... laksh
Anna: Laksh? Humein laga tum Varun ka naam lo gi
Varun waits for Ragini's answer while Laksh is getting happy.
Ragini: Varun to humara pyaar hain magar Laksh ne humein uss waqt sahara diya jab hum toot chukey they aur bilkul akeley they. Varun to humari har saans mein hain
Varun gets happy and even Laksh does and they hug outside. The function ends and Ragini goes back home. She cannot sleep so she calls Laksh at night...
Laksh in sleepy voice: kaun hai?
Ragini: hum hain Laksh, Ragini
Laksh gets up and sits suddenly: tum theek to ho na?
Ragini: haan bas hum nervous feel kar rahey hain aur Varun ko hum iss waqt call nahi karna chahtey they kyun ke hum nahi chahey wo yahan aayein
Laksh: kesa feel kar rahi ho?
Ragini: stress ho rahi hai Laksh
Laksh: me aa raha hoon
Ragini: nahi nahi tum mat aao
Laksh: meet me on the terrace in 15 min bye
Ragini goes there and she sees Laksh and he looks at her covered in blanket and he gives her a hug
Ragini: thank u me bohat acha feel kar rahi hoon
Laksh: jab bhi tumhe meri zaroorat ho to bula lena tum duniya me jahan bhi ho gi me tumhe aa kar essey hi hug karoon ga takey tumhari pareshanian kam ho jayein.
Ragini: looks into his eyes and sees pain in his eyes
She touches his cheek and says: kaun thi wo?
Laksh: chodo na Ragini please tum batao tum theek ho na ab?
Ragini: topic mat change karo
Laksh looks in to her eyes and his eyes are filled with pain he turns around then turns back to Ragini with a smile
Laksh: chup karo Ragini aur mujhe muskurahat do ok!
Ragini understands that he likes her: Laksh I am sorry mera tumhara dil dukhaney ka koi maqsad nahi tha hum to dost they na?
Laksh is surprised: nahi Ragini tum kesi baatein kar rahi ho kal tumhari shaadi hai me to kissi aur se pyaar karta hoon
Ragini: r u sure?
Laksh: pagal ho kya tum? Of course i am sure
Ragini: uff mujhe laga ke. Me tum se bohat pyaar karti hoon magar dost ki tarah
Laksh: haan Ragini me bhi... Ok me ab chalta hoon
Ragini: bye
Ragini stands on the terrace and thinks there is something fishy... She then thinks she is just making up stories.
She goes to her room and falls asleep... Laksh cannot sleep and thinks about Ragini's words saying that he is just a friend... He thinks that tomorrow she will get married and he will go out of her life forever because he knows Varun will keep her very happy...

Precap: Ragini is ready but Laksh doesn't come to the wedding... Laksh gets a call from DP and gets changed then comes to the baadi...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
New RagLak Fanfic by Shazi part 7

This starts with Laksh looking at his watch and the day has come... Ragini's wedding date is here... He looks at himself in the mirror and says: mujhe me kya kammi hai god jo aap ne uss Varun ko meri Ragini ke liye bhej diya? Me bhi utna hi Ragini ka khayaal rakhta jitna wo rakhta hai balkey shayad uss se zyada? Wo na hi aata to sahi hota meri life me itni badi problem to na aati...
Meanwhile Varun calls Shekhar
Varun: hi sasur ji
Shekhar laughs: bohat jaldi hai tumhe to beta
Varun: kya karoon haal bura hai
Shekhar: sabar karo thodi deer aur
Varun: acha papa mujhe aap se important baat karni thi
Shekhar: kya hua beta bolo
Varun: dekhiye wo mera to koi nahi hai yeh baat karney wala iss liye main hi kar leta hoon
Shekhar: haan bolo na
Varun: mujhe jahaiz chahiye
Shekhar: beta mera jo kuch bhi hai wo tumhara hi hai
Ragini hears this and says: Varun tum kya keh rahey ho
Shekhar: nahi Ragini bolney do issey batao beta kya chahiye
Varun: papa please mujhe ghalat mat samajhna magar me Ragini se shaadi karron ga to aap bhi humarey saath London chalein ge
Ragini smiles and gets very happy
Shekhar: beta yeh me apni beti ke ghat kese reh sakta hoon?
Varun: magar betey ke ghar to reh saktey hain na
Shekhar: par
Varun: koi par var nahi please mujhe mere papa wapis lauta dijiye
Ragini nods and shekhar agrees
Ragini takes the phone: I love u
Varun: i love u too... Aur haan me ghodi se nahi gaadi se aana chahta hoon Ferrari book ki hai tumhe bhaga kar le jaon ga shadi ke baad. Papa mene room book karwaya hai aaj raat ko aur next week hum sab London chaley jayein ge
Shekhar: theek hai beta jaldi se aa jana
Ragini goes to get ready and Anna and Parineeta bhabhi reach... Ragini looks for Laksh
Anna: beta aaj hum tumhein tayaar karein gi
Ragini: ji maa aap ko hi to karna hai magar maa Laksh kahan hai
Anna: beta wo thoda bimaar hai shaam ko aaye ga
Ragini: mujhe ussey call karni chahiye
Anna: arey nahi beta rehney do so raha ho ga poori raat nahi so paya
Ragini: oh theek hai
They get her ready
DP: Shekhar ji bohat sundar sajawat karwayi hai aap ne
Shekhar: shukriya ek hi beti hai uss ki khushi ke liye to kuch bhi. Laksh kahan hai?
DP: haan wo aata hi ho ga
Ragini is ready in her bridal clothes and everyone looks at her...
Anna: meri bachi itni sundar lag rahi hai bilkul parion ki tarah
DP: theek kaha aap ne annapurna ji
Ragini feels shy and Shekhar looks at her emotionally
Shekhar: itni jaldi badi ho gayi tum ke pata hi nahi chala
Ragini hugs him then she takes blessings from Anna and DP they all hug her and she is waiting for Varun to arrive
Ragini: arey laksh abhi tak nahi aaya papa please call kariye na ussey
DP: theek hai beta
Laksh is in his room with a pillow and he is crying. The song "tere bin nahi laage jiye tere bin ab to aaja piya" plays and the memories come back to him. He picks up the call and DP speaks: Laksh beta tum kahan ho Ragini zid kar rahi hai tum se milney ki
Ragini is given the phone: arey Laksh tum to bohat bewafa nikley meri shaadi hai aur tum ho ke gayab ho
Laksh in teary voice: nahi mujhe bukhaar tha
Ragini: please aa jao tumhare bagai yeh shaadi kese ho gi
Laksh closes his eyes in pain: theek hai Ragini me abhi aata hoon
Ragini: achey se kapdey pehan kar aana. Blue sherwani tum par suit karey gi
Laksh smiles: theek hai meri maa
Ragini: thanks for everything Laksh
She hangs up...
Shekhar gets a call...
Man: ji aap ke betey ki car ka accident ho gaya hai
Shekhar: kya? Varun ka accident?
Man: pata nahi par wo baar baar Ragini naam liye ja rahey hain aur dulhey ke kapdon mein hain
Shekhar: kya? Kaunsey hospital me hai wo?
Everyone is in a shock and Ragini starts to cry
Anna tries to calm her down and they reach the hospital... Varun is seen in the ICU full of blood in hospital clothes.
Doctor: unh ki haalat bohat critical hai magar wo Ragini aur Laksh ka naam liye ja rahey hain
DP calls Laksh and he comes running to the hospital in his sherwani...
Varun: mera... Bachna mush... Mushkil hai
Mag...ar me chahta hoon ke t..tum dono mer..re janey ke
Ragini: please varun essa mat kaho
Varun: waqt boh..at kam hai R...Ragini tum dono ek ho jao... M..me ne L...Laksh ki aankhon me tumharey liye w...wo pyaar dekha hai jo meri aanhon mein tha...
Laksh: bhai yeh tu kya keh raha hai hum tujhe kuch nahi honey dein ge
Varun: meri aak...hri icha samajh lo
He gives her hand in the hands of Laksh and passes away
Ragini: Varuuun!!!! Tum nahi ja saktey please wapis aa jao
Laksh and Ragini cry and the song "tum bin jiya jaye kese" plays
Ragini is shattered and says: hum ne jin logon se sab se zyada pyaar kiya wo humari wajah se iss duniya me nahi rahey hum manhoos hain Laksh
He hugs her tight and says: nahi Ragini essa mat kaho
He feels very guilty too because he thinks his bad'dua went to Varun
They both cry out loud
Shekhar cannot move and thinks there is nothing left in Ragini's life...
Shekhar: meri bachi ka kya ho ga?
Ragini is still in her bridal attire but breaks her bangles and Laksh stops her but she breaks down
They are all crying and DP and Shekhar do the antim sanskaar
In the evening, every goes back to the baadi and the wedding set up in there. They hear some guests: arey yeh ladki to bohat hi manhoos nikli
Others: haan yeh to kissi ko bhi le doobey gi
Some people: iss se kaun shaadi karey ge yeh to kaali billi se bhi zyada manhoos hai
Laksh hears them and is furious: iss me bichari Ragini ka kya kusoor hai ke Varun ki maut ho gayi? Haan uss ke janey ka hum sab ko dukh hai magar iss me Ragini ka koi dosh nahi nahi
Ragini is standing still and does not move
Guests: arey yeh to apni maa, dada aur dadi ko le doobi thi yeh jiss se bhi pyaar karti hai wo mar jaata hai kahin yeh dayan to nahi
Laksh: kitni giri hui soch hai aap sab ki
Laksh goes to the mandap, takes the bottle of sindoor and looks at DP and Anna... They nod at him saying yes and then he looks at Shekhar... Shekhar with teary eyes says: r u sure?
Laksh nods. His hand is ready to fill Ragini's maang but she stop him: Laksh hum se shaadi kar ke aap ki bhi jaan chali jaye gi behtar ho ga ke hum akeley hi marr jayein
Anna: nahi beta essey mat kaho
Laksh: kya tum bhi in sab me yakeen karti ho kya Ragini inh ki baaton par dehaan do gi to poori zondagi roti raho gi
Ragini: ek baar soch lo please Laksh me tumhari bhi jaan nahi lena chahti
Laksh without listening to her fills her maang...
Then there is complete silence and they both go to the mandap... Ragini is still not in her senses
They do the pherey and also he makes her wear mangalsutar...
They all are in shock of whatever happened in the house that all of a sudden everything changed... It is evening time and DP says to Shekhar: aap ko bhi humarey saath chalna ho ga yahan akeley rehney se aap ki pareshani barhey gi Shekhar ji
Laksh: haan papa please
He agrees and they all take Ragini home with them. Kalpana, Adarsh and Parineeta's daughter asks a question: Maa yeh Ragini Aunty humarey ghar ki dulhan bani hain?
Parineeta: haan beta yeh tumhari chachi hain ab
Kalpana touches her feet and says: welcome chachi
Ragini hugs her and starts crying loudly... Parineeta says Ragini mat ro sab theek ho jaye ga... They enter the house and Adarsh goes to decorate Laksh's room...
DP: Ragini tum humari bahu nahi beti ban kar aayi ho koi bhi pareshani ho to humein zaroor batana
Anna: haan aur hum jaantey hain ke itney badey sadmey ke baad sab kuch bohat jaldi ho gaya magar please bacha bhoolney ki koshish karna aur hum sab tumhari madad karein ge
Ragini has teary eyes and cannot say anything
Anna: fikr mat karo beta kuch kehney ki zaroorat nahi hai
DP: chaliye shekhar ji hum aap ko aap ka kamra dikha detey hain
Parineeta also takes Ragini to her room and makes her sit down on the bed...
Kalpana asks innocently: maa yeh aap kya kar rahi ho? Chachi aur Laksh chacha kya karney waley hain? Yahan itney flowers kyun hain?
Parineeta: bohat bolti ho tum chup raho aur chalo
Kalpana: bye chachi kal milein ge
Ragini smiles at her
After some time, Laksh comes in his room and locks it. Then he pulls the curtains and Ragini gets very nervous... The she remembers her promise made to Varun of her and Laksh uniting... But then the words of those ladies calling her manhoos come back...
She thinks: agar Laksh aur humein ek doosrey se pyaar ho gaya to kahin inh ki jaan ko khatra ho gaya? Nahi me essa nahi honey de sakti...
Laksh sits in bed and says: Ragini dekho me jaanta hoon ke yeh sab aasaan nahi hai
Ragini: mujhe maaf kar do Laksh
Laksh looks on shocked

Precap: RagLak wake up and Kalpana knocks on the door... She asks them: mummy papa ki tarah aap dono ka kab baby aaye ga? Both of them feel embarrassed...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
New RagLak fanfic by Shazi part 8

Laksh looks on shocked and says: kyun kya hua Ragini
Ragini: me aisey hi zabardasti aap ki zindagi me aa gayi iss liye
Laksh: me jaanta hoon ke tumharey liye yeh sab asaan nahi hai magar agar zabardasti essi hoti hai to me chahta hoon ke essi khoobsurat zabardasti mere sath har roz ho
Ragini: me hi wo ladki thi na jiss ne aap ka dil toda?
Laksh: Ragini purani baaton ko bhool jao ab humari zindagi ki ek nayi shuruwat hai
Ragini: haan aap theek keh rahey hain Laksh magar jo kuch aaj hua uss he baad yeh sab
Laksh: don't worry Ragini me jaanta hoon hum apni zindagi ki shuruwat aj nahi karein ge jab bhi tum tayaar ho to... Me tumhara intezaar karoon ga
Ragini smiles
Laksh says: arey me to bhool hi gaya tha yeh tunharey liye
Ragini: yeh kya?
Laksh: meri taraf se munh dikhayi ka gift
They laugh and Ragini opens the box... Its a diamond ring! Ragini gets very happy to see it but them suddenly thinks that if she starts to love Laksh his life might be in danger so she has to control her feelings...
Laksh makes her wear it and she says: thank you Laksh magar mere paas aap ko dene ke liye kuch nahi hai
Laksh: tum jo ho to mujhe aur kya chahiye
Ragini hugs him and Laksh feels guilty because he gave the bad'dua to Varun
Laksh and Ragini both change and Laksh is about to take his pillow on the sofa when Ragini remembers Varun's last wish of Laksh and Ragini being together and happy.
Ragini holds Laksh's wrist and says: kahan ja rahey hain aap
Laksh: wo me sofa pe adjust
Ragini: sofa pe hum dono kese adjust karein ge bed hai to sahi
Laksh: r u sure Ragini me so loon ga
Ragini: i am sure Laksh please mujhe bura feel mat karwao ke aap ke room se aap ke hi bed par se aap ko bhaga diya
Laksh laughs and says: yeh aap janaab kab se hona shuru hua? Humari dosti khatam ho gayi hai kya? Aaj bhi me tumhara wohi Laksh hoon iss liye chill
Ragini smiles at him
Laksh falls asleep whereas Ragini thinks about Varun and cries a lot... She tries not to make noise then she eventually falls asleep.
In the morning, Laksh and Ragini are still sleeping when someon knocks on the door...
Laksh in sleepy voice: kaun hai
Kalpana opens the door wide and sees Ragini sleeping: Ragini chachi kitni sundar hai na
Laksh: wo to hai
Ragini wakes up and sees her there then smiles
Kalpana comes near her and Ragini gives her a hug... And Kalpana gets very happy
Kalpana: chachi aap sotey huey bohat sundar lag rahi thi
Ragini: magar tum se kam meri choti si princess
Kalpana sits on the bed and asks Laksh loudly: Laksh chachu kya aap dono ka bhi baby aaye ga jesse mein aayi thi mummy papa ke liye?
Laksh: bohat shaitan ho gayi ho tum
Kalpana: batao na chachu mujhe chota bhai ya behan chahiye khelne ke liye
Parineeta and Adarsh enter the room and see kalpana there
Parineeta: tum subha subha inh dono ko kyun pareshan karney aa gai
Ragini: arey nahi bhabhi koi baat nahi Kalpana bohat pyaari hai
Ragini gets up and goes to freshen up with parineeta
Adarsh: bhai tu bohat thaka thaks sa lag raha hai sab theek ho hai na?
Laksh: haan wo kal thoda late soya
Adarsh: haan samajh sakta hoon late sona and all
Laksh: arey nahi bhai essi koi baat nahi
Adarsh: bas bas itna to me bhi nahi jaaga tha abhi suhag raat pe
Laksh: bhai kessi baatein kar rahey ho Ragini depressed thi
Adarsh: oh sorry me bhool gaya tha ab wo kesi hai
Laksh: bhai time to lagey ga
Adarsh: hmm chal fresh ho kar aa ja neechey
Laksh: ok bhai
They all go down to have breakfast and RagLak come together... Shekhar gets happy seeing them like this
During breakfast Ragini gives food to Laksh and he smiles at her
Shekhar: tum dono ko essey dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai main bata nahi sakta... Laksh beta tum ne jo hum pe ehsa..
Laksh cuts him off: papa please ab kabhi essey mat kahiye ga beta bhi kehtey hain aur essi baatein kartey hain
Shekhar and Ragini smile
DP: dekhiye shekhar ji hum soch rahey hain ke ab aap humarey saath rahiye kyun ke itna sab ho jaaney ke baad aap ka akela rehna thek nahi
Shekhar: yeh aap kesi baatein kar rahey hain DP ji mein essa nahi kar sakta yeh meri beti ka sasural hai
Laksh: beti ka sasural nahi betey ka ghar hai papa
Shekhar and Ragini remember Varun then Ragini goes in the kithen saying she wants water but instead she cries a lot... Laksh goes after her
Laksh: mene kuch ghalat kaha kya
Ragini: nahi Laksh aap bohat achey hain wo bas
Laksh: me jaanta hoon mujhe bhi varun ki yaad aa rahi hai
Ragini: nahi essi baat
Laksh: Ragini hum dost hain na phir mujhi se baatein kyun chupa rahi ho
She breaks down in his arms. They share a cute hug then Ragini slowly moves away from him realising they are in the kitchen
Parineeta: arey tum dono yahan? Chup chup ke kya kar rahey ho (she giggles)
Ragini: kuch nahi bhabhi wo
And she tuns out of the kitchen
Laksh is standing and Parineeta teases him then he goes too
Kalpana: maa aaj mein chacha aur chachi ke saath so jaon?
Parineeta: tum hamesha pagalon wali baatein kyun karti ho
Laksh: arey bhabhi koi baat nahi aaney dijiye
Adarsh: nahi bhai teri nayi nayi shaadi hai ek do saal baad sula lena abhi meri beti choti hai kahin wo
Laksh: bhai!! Aap kuh bhi boltey ho
Laksh runs after Adarsh and they throw cushion at each other and Ragini feels shy
Shekhar agrees to stay here until Ragini feels better and he remembers Varun's words and thinks: mujhe Ragini aur laksh ko ek karna hi ho ga warna Varun ki wish nahi poori ho gi
He goes to Adarsh and pari is there too
Shekhar: me andar aa sakta hoon
Adarsh: ji uncle iss me poochney wali kya baat hai
They both sit and pari goes to prepare tea.
Shekhar: beta me soch raha tha ke Ragini aur Laksh ko shaadi ka gift honeymoon trip deta
Adarsh: bohat aha idea hai uncle main iss barey mein soch raha tha
Pari: haan yeh to bohat acha ho ga wo dono ek dusrey ke kareeb aa jayein ge aur Ragini ka mind bhi change ho haye ga
Shekhar: magar kahan bhejein unh dono ko?
Pari: Switzerland?
Adarsh: nahi zyada door gaye aur koi problem ho gayi phir? Abhi inh dono ka rishta bohat nazuk hai
Shekhar: theek kaha
Pari: goa?
Adarsh: haan yeh theek rahey ga one week yeh dono saath bitayein ge to theek ho ga
Pari: oh god yeh sab bohat exciting ho ga na
They all go in the hall of the house and RagLak are there talking to the parents...
The three of them tell them about the idea and Laksh refuses: nahi papa yeh abhi achanak kaam bhi bohat hain hum kese chutti pe jaa saktey hain
Ragini: haan Laksh theek keh rahey hain
DP: kaam main aur adarsh sambhal lein ge tum fikar mat karo
Shekhar: mene sab booking plan kar li hai me abhi sab kuch final kar ke aata hoon
Ragini: magar papa?
Pari: agar magar kuch nahi
Kalpana: hum chutti par ja rahey hain?
Pari: hum nahi beta sirf chacha aur chachi
Kalpana: ohhh wo wala holiday
Ragini and Laksh laugh
Kalpana: mere liye ek chota bhai ya behan le kar zaroor aana
Ragini gets very shy and she looks at Laksh but he is already looking at her then they both look away
Pari: Kalpana tum bohat shaitan ho gayi ho tum yeh sab seekhti kahan se ho? Tumhari teacher se baat karni ho gi mujhe
Shekhar: tum dono ki kal ki booking ho gayi hai
Anna: beta tum dono packing kar lo
They both go in their room and Ragini takes the suitcase thak Laksh is about to take and their hands are on top op each other... There is an eyelock. They both come back to their senses and Laksh says: sorry yeh sab kuch essey ho raha hai
Ragini: nahi Laksh yeh humarey liye theek rahey ga thoda sa mind divert ho jaye ga
Laksh gets happy thinking that Ragini wants to go with him

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New RagLak fanfic by Shazi part 9

Ragini and Laksh are about to leave the house when everyone is very tensed and even Ragini
Shekhar: beta please dihaan se jaana aur apna khayaal rakhna
Laksh: papa aap fikr mat kijiye hum dono ko kuch nahi ho ga
Anna takes their aarti and they leave...
Anna: mere bachon ki raksha karna god
DP: iss ke baad Ragini aur Laksh kareeb aa jayein ge to hum bhi bohat khush hon ge
Anna: theek kaha ji aap ne mere bachey khush hon ge aur phir se humara ghar hansta khelta hua ho jaye ga
Shekhar: aap logon ne humarey liye jo bhi kiya hai uss ke liye me aap se kese shukriya karoon? Aap meri Ragini ko mujh se bhi zyada pyaar de rahey hain
Anna: wo humari bahu nahi hai Shekhar ji beti hai aur betion ke saath to essey hi kiya jaata hai na
Shekhar nods and looks up: ek maa cheeni to dusri de di kitni kismat wali hai meri bachi
Meanwhile RagLak are in the car approaching the airport and Ragini is very nervous and Laksh also is
Ragini looks through the window and her eyes are filled with tears thinking about Varun and their future plans
Laksh is looking on the other side and feels very bad he thinks that he might be the reason behind Varun's death after cursing him so many times... Both of them reach the airport and they go to the security check
Receptionist: Mr and Mrs Laksh Maheshwari these are your boarding passes
Ragini smiles at Laksh but they do not exchange a word... Then they go and sit in the departure area and finally Laksh breaks the silence
Laksh: Ragini yeh sab tumhare liye uncomfortable ho ga kyun ke tum ne apni zindagi ke sapney Varun ke saath dekhey they magar me zabardasti
Ragini: Laksh please essa mat kahiye aap hi humarey pati hain aur iss ke aagey hum kuch nahi jaantey
Laksh: dekho Ragini yeh holiday hum doston ki tarah spend kar saktey hain
Ragini: kya aap hum se pyaar nahi kartey?
Laksh: yeh kesa sawal hai Ragini
Ragini: phir aap baar baar humarey dost honey ka daava kyun kartey hain hum aap ki patni hain aur phir Varun bhi to yahi chahta tha na?
Laksh: r u sure ke tum ready ho Ragini? Me tum par koi pressure nahi daalna chahta
Ragini: mujhe apni purani zindagi ko bhula kar aagey barhna hai Laksh
Laksh: theek hai Ragini jessi tumhari marzi
Ragini holds his hand and lies on his shoulder
Laksh is very happy from inside and a tear drops from his eye
Ragini: Laksh?
Laksh: hmm?
Ragini: aap kab se hum se pyaar kartey they
Laksh: jab se tumhe dekha tha yeh sab ek mazaak se shuru hua magar me har waqt tumhare baare mein sochta tha aur phir tum se pyaar ho gaya
They board the plane
Ragini: phir aap ne humein bataya kyun nahi
Laksh: bataney wala tha magar phir Varun aa gaya aur uss ke baad sab kuch bohat jaldi hota chala gaya aur mene socha ke tum khush ho iss liye me peeche hat gaya
Ragini has teary eyes
Laksh: mat ro Ragini warna me bhi ro doon ga
They both smile and Laksh passes his fingers through her fingers.
Ragini: humein dar lagta hai ke kahin aap bhi hum se
Laksh: shhh humein koi nahi juda kar sakta Ragini
Ragini feels relaxed with him
They reach the hotel and when they enter the room, the lighing is dark and Laksh looks on... There are candles and the bed is filled with rose petals...
Laksh: yeh sab zaroor Adarsh bhaiyya ne kiya ho ga... Bhai thakawat to kam honey detey
Ragini laughs and points towards the table where Laksh sees a glass of milk covered
Laksh puts his hand on his forehead: Adarsh bhaiyya aap ka kuch nahi ho sakta
They both laugh out loud
Ragini goes to freshen up and Laksh calls Adarsh
Laksh: bhai yeh sab kya hai
Adarsh: passand aaya surprise?
Laksh: yahan pehley hi meri haalat kharaab hai bhai aur aap ko mazaak sooj raha hai
Adarsh: chotey ab tu bada ho gaya hai to mene socha... Patni hai wo teri koi gf nahi jo tu sharma raha hai
Laksh: bye bhai mujhe to lagta hai kalpana aap se sab kuch seekhti hay
Adarsh laughs: bye
Ragini comes out in a beautiful turquoise and pink saree with her hair open and on the side. Her blouse has a deep back with a dori and she looks stunning... Laksh cannot get his eye off her! She brings him milk and he drinks it but he thinks is he dreaming or all this is real?
Ragini pinches him
Laksh: aaouch
Ragini: ab to yakeen ho gaya na ke yeh sabreal hai... Humein papa ne sikhaya tha ke life me aagey barh janey me hi acha hota hai kyun ke jo chaley gaye hum unhein bhool to nahi saktey magar wapis bhi nahi bula saktey...
Laksh looks at her and holds her shoulders then he nods. He goes to freshen up and when he comes back, no one is in the room
Laksh: Ragini? Kahan ho tum?
He turns and Ragini scares him and he gets shocked... He then starts to laugh and runs after her. At a point Ragini is against a wall and Laksh blocks her from both the sides then he realises that maybe Ragini is not ready for all this and is about to go away when Ragini holds his arm
Laksh looks straight into her eyes and she looks down... He is about to kiss her and she closes her eyes when someone knocks on the door...
Both of them get scared and laksh goes to open the door
Laksh: ji?
Hotel manager: sir kal shaam ko party hai hotel ki taraf se aap zaroor aaiye ga yeh hain aap ke invitation cards
Laksh: thank you
Then he leaves and Ragini is still standing at the same place. Laksh looks at her with passion and comes near her... They have en eyelock and Ragini pushes him away and is about to leave when he holds her hand... He kisses her hand, her shoulder then is about to kiss her on her lips but his phone rings.
Laksh: ab kaun hai?
Ragini laughs and he picks up
Laksh: ji boliye
DP: beta tum log theek se pohanch gaye
Laksh: oh papa aap hain sorry woh... Haan hum pohanch gaye
DP: theek hai Ragini ko khush rakhna beta
Laksh thinks koi khush rakhney de to na
Then he switches his phone off and Ragini's phone too...
Ragini goes near him and puts her hand on his cheek... Laksh holds her face from both sides and kisses her with passion... This lasts for 10 sec the Ragini gets shy and turns around... Laksh goes to her and kisses her neck from the back a couple of times on both sides while giving her a back hug...
The song tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hai plays
Laksh gets a bit nervous and so does Ragini... He holds her hand and says: me tum se bohat pyaar karta hoon tumhe kabhi dukh nahi doon ga
Ragini comes near laksh and slowly says: I love you Laksh
Laksh looks at her and has teary eyes...
Ae mere humsafar ik zara intezaar
Sun sadayein de rahi hai manzil pyaar ki
Ragini holds Laksh's collar and pulls him close... Laksh holds her shoulders and pulls her even closer
Laksh unties the dori of Ragini's saree and she gets tensed (love wali tension lol) then Ragini unbuttons his shirt and kisses his cheek
Laksh runs his fingers through her open back and suddenly someone knocks. Laksh looks around when Ragini says: iss lamhe ko adhoora mat chodo Laksh... He hugs her and her saree's pallu falls on the floor. Laksh removes his shirt and Ragini takes him to the balcony (no one can see them because the floor is v high) it is raining and they get wet
"Yeh saazish hai boondon ki
Koi khwaahihs hai chup chup si
Dekho na... Dekho na"
Laksh touches Ragini's lips and sees her wet
Laksh: tumhe sardi ho jaye gi
Ragini turns around and enjoy the rain
Then she looks back at Laksh thinking that he looks very handsome. Ragini has fallen for him and she is very happy... Laksh picks her in his arms and takes her to bed. He looks in her eyes and they both are wet. He falls on Ragini but she hugs him... Then he kisses her and finally they consummate their marriage with passion and love. When they wake up they are covered in blankets and Ragini goes to take a shower without waking Laksh up
When she comes back she kisses his forehead and he feels wet hair on his chest...
Ragini is about to go when he pulls her closer
Laksh: subha subha tayaar ho gayi ho jaan?
Ragini: arey ghoomney nahi jaana hai kya
Laksh: tum ne raat ko hi saari energy le li ab ghoomney kese jayein
Ragini feels shy and looks down then Laksh says: i love u abhi aata hoon
Ragini says in slow voice: i love u too
Laksh: mene sun liye
Ragini laughs and remembers they have to go to a party tonight
Laksh gets ready and they go sightseeing then they come back in the evening to attend the party...

Precap: drunk Ragini is upset with Laksh not spending time with her in the party. Fun moments...

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Edited by Shazi_rajpoot - 9 years ago
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New RagLak fanfic by Shazi part 10

Ragini says: mere paas to koi achey clothes nahi hain party ke liye
Laksh looks at her and laughs
Ragini: arey yahan mere paas koi dress nahi hai aur aap hans rahey hain
Laksh: aankhein band karo
Ragini: kyun?
Laksh: bharosa nahi hai kya mujh pe
Ragini: ok ok bataiye ab
He gives her a gift wrapped and she opens her eyes. She gets very excited and then Laksh asks her to open it
Ragini: humarey liye?
Laksh: nahi saath waley room mein ek bohat sundar ladki hai uss ke liye hai socha pehley tumhein dikha doon
Ragini: haww (she punches him in his arm) agar kissi aur ko dekha bhi na toh!!!
Laksh laughs and Ragini looks at the dress... Its a beautiful black gown and fully covered for Ragini to feel comfortable...
Laksh: jaldi karo party me nahi jaana kya?
Ragini: aa rahi hoon
When Ragini comes out, Laksh looks at her face and says: aaj zameen pe chand utra hai
Ragini gets shy and says: sach?
Laksh: haan dekho na aishwarya rai hai tv pe
Ragini gets upset
Laksh hugs her from the back and says: magar mera chand uss se kayi zyada sundar hai
Ragini: ab koi zaroorat nahi jhoot ka pyaar dikhaney ki
Laksh makes her spin and she feels dizzy and holds her head. Then she pulls him closer to her and Laksh says: mera rape karna hai kya
Ragini leaves him and goes away... Laksh is in the mood to tease her and he also changes his clothes, when he comes out in his black suit, he looks at Ragini and she is not talking to him... He holds her hand and says: chalein?
Ragini: humein nahi chalna
Laksh: arey humein special invitation hai chalo late nahi hona
They reach the party and laksh is surprised seeing his friends there. They tell him that they came for a night in goa... Laksh gets busy talking to them and the whole time, he speaks to them and forgets about Ragini but she gets frustrated
She goes to the bar and orders for a mocktail but someone else orders for an alcoholic cocktail and the barman gets confused between both. Ragini accidentally drinks alcohol and is tipsy
She goes on the stage: humarey pati hum se pyaar nahi kartey hain dunya walon. Bhaiyo aur behnon... Agar aap ka boyfriend aap se pyaar karta hai to shaadi mat karo shaadi ke baad sab khatam... Finish! Yeh vadey aur kasmein shaadi se pehley
Laksh turns around and it is Ragini who is on the stage... He thinks what happened to her and goes near her. He holds her hand and says: Ragini baby please chalo tum ne kya piya hai
He sees her drink and sees that they accidentally gave her cocktail and holds his head
Laksh: arey yeh kya ho gaya
Ragini: logon mene pi nahi hai mujhe pila di gayi hai
She starts laughing and Laksh takes her off the stage... She gets annoyed
Ragini: chodiye na Laksh yeh koi jagah hai kya romance karney ki
Everyone in the party laughs
Ragini: arey humara pati hum se pyaar nahi karta aur aap log hans rahey hain? Not fair
Laksh: ragini me tum se bohat pyaar karta hoon aaj ke behaviour ke liye sorry plz chalo
Ragini: sab ke saamne kehna pade ga
Laksh: ok theek hai
He goes on the stage and his friends are looking at her but Ragini is furious and waiting
Laksh starts singing:
tujhe sochta hoon main shaam o subha
Iss se zyada tujhe aur chaahoon to kya
Tere hi khayaalon mein dooba raha...
Ragini gets very happy and claps then he tries to take her home. She is very drunk and says: aaj aap ne humein bohat sataya
Laksh: sorry Ragini mujhe nahi pata tha ke tim mujhe se itna naraz ho jao gi
Ragini: yeh aap ka aur humara honeymoon hai yah aap ka aur aap ke friends ka? Hum bohat naraz hain
Laksh: acha tumhe jo saza deni hai de do kaan pakadta hoon ab essa nahi ho ga princess
Ragini gets teary eyes: Varun? Tum ho? Tum hi humein princess kehtey ho na? Varun tum fikar mat karo hum theek hain Laksh bohat achey hain humari fikr mat karna
Laksh gets shocked and hugs Ragini very tight and she cries out loud
Ragini is about to faint when Laksh picks her up in his arms and takes her to the room. Ragini is sleeping while Laksh is sleepless thinking that he shouldn't make Ragini feel sad because she is still weak from inside. Then he thinks about Varun that he would have never neglected Ragini this way and thinks: kya meri aur Ragini ki shaadi ek sahi choice thi? Varun Ragini ko bohat khush rakhta yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai
He then cries a lot
In the morning, Ragini wakes up and remembers whatever she said and feels very ashamed. She sees Laksh sleeping but his eyes are swollen and she understands that he cried overnight.
She runs her fingers through his hair and kisses his forehead then says: sorry Laksh
He wakes up and says: good morning Ragini
Ragini: kal raat ke liye sorry wo humari deink pata nahi kese
Laksh: pagal ho kya? It's ok Ragini mujhe to bohat maza aaya tumhe iss haalat me dekh kar
Ragini: mat karo hum se itna pyaar Laksh he hum sambhaal na payein
Laksh: uff oh Ragini pata nahi tumhe kya ho gaya hai chalo get ready aaj hum water sports par jayein ge
Ragini happily nods
Laksh thinks he should keep her happy and not tell her that anything even happened the previous night
Laksh and Ragini have fun doing various activities and their bonding becomes stronger...
Ragini sometimes remember Varun and how his face was damaged because of the incident. She tried to be happy with Laksh and was in love with him but obviously Varun was her first love...
One week passes and RagLak get back home. Everyone gets very happy seeing them and they bring gifts for everyone.
Sarees for maa and pari bhabhi, souvenirs for DP and shekhar, shirts for Adarsh bhaiyya and toys for Kalpana... They all get very happy seeing this and Ragini is talking to bhabhi and maa while Laksh can't get his eyes off her and Adarsh goes to him
Adarsh: bhai teri hi biwi hai baad me dekh lena
They both laugh and Laksh hits him
Adarsh: Bhai honeymoon kesa raha? Bore to tu hua nahi ho ga
Laksh: haan jesse aap nahi hue they apney honeymoon pe
Adarsh: me to soch raha hoon phir chala jaon
Laksh: sharam kijiye bhai aap ki itni badi beti hai kessi baatein kar rahey hain
Adarsh: haan to ek do aur bachey bhi honey chahiye ya nahi?
Laksh: sirf ek do? Me to soch raha tha merey aur Ragini ke 6 ya 7 to kam se kam honey chahiye
Adarsh laughs and says: chotey terey parr nikal aayein hain
Laksh laughs and realises what he said: mera wo matlab nahi tha bhai me to bas
Adarsh: me tujhe bachpan se jaanta hoon yeh nautanki kissi aur ko dikhana
They have a great moment while laughing and even Ragini is very happy...
Anna: mere sab bachon ko kissi ki nazar na lagey
They all are living a good life and a week passes by... Ragini starts vomitting and faints in the kitchen... Everyone gets scared and think that Ragini is unwell whereas Laksh smiles
Anna: beta Ragini bimaar hai aur tum hans rahey ho
Laksh: nahi maa
Doctor: dekhiye mujhe lagta hai aap ko Ragini ko dusrey doctor ko dikhana chahiye
Laksh smiles looking at Ragini
Laksh: theek hai doctor me chala jaon ga aaj hi
They all leave the room tensed and Ragini says: hum yahan itney bimaar hain aur aap ki hansi nahi ruk rahi hai?
Laksh: pagal tum samjhi nahi kya?
Ragini: nahi kya hua?
Laksh: mujhe lagta hai tum maa aur me papa ban'ney waley hain
Ragini: sach? Hum bohat khush hain laksh magar hum ne to yeh socha hi nahi hum kitney budhu hai
Laksh: haan Ragini magar abhi hum kissi se kuch nahi kahein ge pehle aaj doctor ke paas chalein
Ragini: ok Laksh abhi chalein mujh se to wait nahi ho raha
Laksh: ok tayar ho kar aata hoon me
Laksh gets Ragini up, helps her getting ready and they both have an eyelock full of tears
Ragini: hum apney bachon ko wo sab pyaar dein ge jo humari maa ke baad hum ne paana chaha
Laksh: arey nahi unh ko bigadna thodi na hai
Ragini and Laksh have sweet talks and downstairs everyone is happy
Anna: ab ja kar humara parivaar poora ho ga humari Ragini maa baney gi to apney sab dard bhool jaye gi
Shekhar: sahi kaha aap ne annapurna ji
DP: abhi hum unh dono se kuch nahi kahein ge pehley unhein doctor ke paas se aaney do
Adarsh: theek keh rahey hain aap
RagLak go to the doctor and meanwhile the house gets decorated with kids toys and balloons
Pari: yeh surprise dekh kar wo dono kitney khush hon ge na!
Doctor's clinic
Ragini: doctor meri situation essi hai aur humein lagta hai ke me maa ban'ney wali hoon
Doc: let me check and we have an advanced technology to aap ke results ek ghantey mein aa jayein ge magar maa aur baap ke tests hain so Laksh aap ko bhi karney parein ge
Laksh: ji zaroor doctor
They undergo a series of tests and they are waiting outside in the waiting area
Laksh: Ragini mujhe lagta hai humari duniya poori ho gayi
Ragini: sach kaha Laksh hum bohat khush hain ke humein itna pyaar karne wala pati mila aur ab yeh khushi
Receptionist asks them to go in because the tests reports are there
Doc: baithiye
Ragini: kya hua doctor
Doc: dekhiye me aap se koi jhoot nahi bolna chahti iss liye jo hai wo saaf saaf bata deti hoon
Laksh gets tensed and asks: kya hua doctor
Doc: Ragini abhi yeh pata lagana mushkil hai ke aap pregnant hain ya nahi yeh symptoms food poisoning ke bhi ho saktey hain kyun ke abhi bohat jaldi hai phir bhi aap ki tassali ke liye aap agley haftey phir aa jaiye ga
Ragini: ji doctor par iss me pareshani ki kaunsi baat hai
Doc: well Laksh aap ke tests ke baad humein pata chala hai ke aap kabhi baap nahi ban saktey
Laksh: kya? Magar doctor
Doc: kabhi kabhi essa hota hai magar Ragini aap ka koi problem nahi hai
Ragini cries that they cannot have a child
Doc: ho sakta hai ke fast test ka result ghalat aaya ho aur iss liye yeh hua ho... Kyun ke aap ke symptoms pregnancy ke bhi hain
Me suggest karoon go ke laksh aap phir se tests karwaiye aur next week tak intezaar kijiye
Laksh has teary eyes and looks at Ragini who is crying and he thinks he cannot keep her happy and failed in his mission
When they go home, they see the decorations and everyone screams surprise
Kalpana hugs Ragini and says: humein sab pata hai
Then Ragini starts crying and Laksh explains everything to them
Anna breaks down and says: mere parivaar ko kis ki nazar lag gayi
Laksh: maa abhi bhi umeed hai mene tests phir se karwaye hain aur dosh mera hai Ragini ka nahi
Anna: nahi beta mera wo matlab bilkul nahi hai me bas chahti thi ke... And she cries
Everyone is in a position of shock
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Oh hello madam Shazi..

Plz yaar waiting. .post jallldddiii..
Plz
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Wow kitna achha likha hai..
Never expected that varun would die..😭 but happy to see RagLak together. .
Poor Laksh..I hope nothing that sort happens..

Btw I love u..no no I hate u..
I just hate u badly..
Itne saare parts update kr liye n u even didn't tell me..
Bad thing..

Next tym plz pm me..
Plz..
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Just read all ur chapters
wow it's awesome
please pm me
are you the admin of swaragini fb page?
Edited by gopikashalu93 - 9 years ago
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Nice One .. loved it 👏
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i just found this ff and i must say its brilliant please do pm me when u update the next time

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