SwaSan FF : Dhokha Ya Daam Tha (Part 4 updated on Page 25) - Page 4

Nice sonu. Loved the prologue. So most past moments will cum. Pls continue

Intresting..
Plz continue..
If possible plz pm me

It's nice yaar
And what about your Daastan
Update it soon otherwise I am d
Best enemy in this form 😡

Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice sonu. Loved the prologue. So most past moments will cum. Pls continue

thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: sadhana.np

Intresting..
Plz continue..
If possible plz pm me

thanks sadhna😃

Originally posted by: whity.007

It's nice yaar
And what about your Daastan
Update it soon otherwise I am d
Best enemy in this form 😡

thanks dear😃

Dhokha Ya Daam Tha

Part 1

(at Maheshwari Mansion)

Aarav-dad where is mumma

Sanskaar-beta how do I know

Saloni-buddhu she said na that she is coming so why r u asking again n again

Aarav(in acomplaining tone)-dad see dida is calling me buddhu

Saloni-because u r buddhu(she made a face infront of aarav n starts running...aarav starts chasing her)

(Dadi enters...she is sanskaar's daadi)

Dadi-sanskaar ur kids r just like u ek number ke shaitaan

Sanskaar-dadi maa I used to be a shy kid

Dadi-shy(with a shocked face)who

Sanskaar-dadi maa

Dadi(she starts smiling)-waisey swara kahan reh gyyi

(swara enters)

Swara-sorry dadi maa(she bents to take her blessings)

Dadi-khush raho...kahaan reh gyyi thi

Swara-dadi maa woh ek important surgery(suddenly shonali n aarav came towards her n hugged her)

A & S -mumma...where were u

Swara-sorry baby...mumma was busy na(n she kissed their cheeks)

Sanskaar-swara change kar lo guests atey hi honge

Aarav-yep mom go n change

Swara-yess boss...mumma will be back...n dadi maa mom dad ka call aya

Dadi-Sujata aur Ram nhi a rahey...Ram ki Delhi mein koi meeting hai

Sanskaar-yeah dad is busy toh mom said ki she too won't come

Swara-ohh that's bad chalo then I'll go n change

(In SwaSan's room)

(swara was getting ready...she wore a black net saree because black is sanskaar's fav colour she was trying to wear her earrings suddenly she felt his arms on her waist)

Sanskaar(he rested his chin on her shoulder)-wow u r looking pretty...kon kahega that u r 33 n u have 2 kids

Swara(she smiled)-really waisey Mr Maheshwari what whould I do my hubby is so dashing ki unhein match up karne ke liye thoda extra mehnat karni padti hai...ohh god these earrings(she looks at him with pleading eyes)plzzz help na

Sanskaar(smilingly)-sure(he helped her in wearing those earrings)done

Swara-How M I looking

Sanskaar-stunning

(swara smiles n kissed him on his cheek)

Sanskaar-shona seriously

Swara-what

Sanskaar(with a plauful smile)-main shonali aur aarav thode hi na hoon jot um mujhe cheeks par kiss karogi

Swara-ohh(she gave a peck on his lips)

Sanskaar-arey bas itna hi

Swara-yeah its's enough(and winks at him)...neechey jakar arrangements bhi dekhne hain...lets go

(the party starts...they all cut the cake n enjoys the party)

(around 11 pm)

Dadi-swara tumne sab kitna acche se sambhal liya

Swara-dadi maa sab toh aapne karke rakha tha mainey sirf arrangements chk ki

Dadi-jo bhi hai but ghar aur hospital sab kuch kitney acche se manage karti ho tum...I must say my grandson is so lucky

Swara-nhi dadi maa I m the luckiest one jo mujhe wo miley

Dadi-bacche so gyye

Swara-ji dadi maa

Dadi-u also go n sleep tum bhi thak gyi hogi

Swara-good night dadi maa

Dadi-good night beta

(in swasan's room)

(sanskaar was sitting on the bed n doing something on his laptop...swara enters)

Swara-ohh god not again...u r again busy with ur laptop

Sanskaar(he smiled)-shona u always knew na ki I m totally workaholic...toh phir ab kya tension hai

Swara-i know Mr Maheshwari ki U r a workhaholic aur aap bohot bade businessman bhi ho but thoda sa time mere liye bhi nikala karo na n m going to change tab tak aap yeh sab close karo

(she goes to the washroom n sanskaar closed the laptop n placed it on the table n lay down on the bed...swara came back n smiles)

Swara-thank god(she too came there placed her head on his shoulder n hugged him they cuddled each othe)

Sanskaar-so again a critical surgery

Swara-yeah n it took almost 9 hours

Sanskaar-wow...I love my wife dil ki doctor hokar bhi uska khud ka dil kitna bada hai warna mainey toh suna tha ki doctors ke dil mein feelings nhi hoti

Swara-n the credit goes to u mujhe phir se jeena sikhaney aur pyar karna sikhane ke liye...thanks sankaar warna main toh zindagi se haar si hi gyi thi

Sanskaar-swara leave it don't think about past(he placed a kisss on her forehead)

Swara-i just hope mera past mere saamne kabhi na aye kabhi bhi nhi

SCENE CHANGES

Place - India (Mumbai) , In one of the biggest Mumbai hospital

(a doctor n nurse came)

Doctor - Dr Ragini Shekhawat n Mr Ved Shekhawat there is a bad news for u

Ragini-kya hua Dr Sharma...how is my daughter...Is she all right...Shall I go n see her

Ved(ragini's husband)-doctor meri beti Diya kaisi hai...Shall we see her

Doctor-not now Mr n Mrs Shekhawat her heart is too weak unka heart transplantation karna hoga

Ragini-yeh aap kya keh rahe hain meri bacchii sirf 5 saal ki hai

Ved-ragini stop it plzz

Ragini-arey but aap khud hi dekhiye na aise kaisey(suddenly he felt a hand on her shoulder n she turned)Laksh bhai

(she saw her brother laksh her mother AP n Father DP were standing there...she hugged laksh tightly)

Ragini-bhai my angel my diya

Laksh-ragu plzz calm down let him speak...tu khud bhi toh ek doctor hai samajh

DP-doctor sahib toh der kis baat ki hai kijiye operation

Dr Sharma-we can't...bohot critical operation hai...bohot kam doctors hai jo yeh kar sakte hain aur unme se ek hain Dr Maheshwari

Ved-who is he

Dr Sharma-ahaan not he she...she is from dubai n one of the best cardiologist...aap kahein toh main unse baat

Ved-go ahead Dr my daughter is dying plzz do something

Laksh-doctor plzz kuch kijiye meri neice ko bacha lijiye

Doctor-main kuch karta hoon...Mr Ved can u plzz come with me

Ved-sure doc

(ved n doctor goes from there...ragini sat on the bench n starts crying...laksh goes to her n hugged her)

Laksh-ragu plzz don't cry main hoon na tera bhai sab thik kar dega

Ragini-bhai log sahi kehte hain karma is a b***h hum jo kartey hain na uska hisaab toh humein dena padta hai

AP-ragini beta stop crying its not like that

Ragini-no mom this is the truth mainey job hi swara ke saath kiya yeh usi ki saja hai(after hearing swara's name laksh too felt a pain inside his heart)uski saja meri beti ko mil rahi hai...my daughter is suffering n that too just because of my sins...Plzz swara Plzz forgive me I am Sorry Swara I am So Sorry

Just started reading this FF. Intriguing.

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Wohoo Sonu! Loved the dhamekar 1st update!!

Story seems completely different here!! Ragya r bro n sis?! hehe Then Swara is laksh's sis too? Hmm I 'm thoroughly confused now! So plz update asap so I can get my answers! 😉

thanks nikk😃