SwaSan FF : Dhokha Ya Daam Tha (Part 4 updated on Page 25) - Page 2

Originally posted by: manasie23

Sonal this sounds interesting! And haan u better update your other stories or else mera tujhe haunt karna pakka hai... please update jaldi kariyo and pm me

Originally posted by: Shikha022

M looking forward for ur ff..

Firstly I seriously gt confuse with the title n was abt to ask what's this daam ?? But then I guess u knew that already...

that ur readers gonna ask this question !! ;)

Coming to the prologue..

Loved it..

Swara is on peak !!

N sawasan cute kids..

Now what ragini did :/

Waiting for next chap curiously..

Originally posted by: harshsriti

Omg... sonal... yeh kya hei? kya kia tumne? tumne acha nahi kiya sonal.. this is not fair... tumne ek 20 saal ki swara ko 33 year wali women bana diya tumhare story mein? sonal I was kidding yaar. . is this swaragini ff? tum sawsan fandom chodkar swaragini fan bangayi? jo bhi ho Mr. Laksh Maheshwari ko nahi boolna.. uske alawa meri zindagi complete nahi hogi.. I will kill you if you forgot him.. The main suspense is that where is Ragini.. can I guess? she is behind the bars.. am I right? .. chodo mere bakwass... sorry dear.. after reading a new story my analysis is weird. . your concept is superb dear.. I love your ff daastan. I was a silent reader and admirer of that ff.. I love your stories.. but I have a request please update earlier. you are very lazy to update the ff.. and I think you have to update Ts also na? Please update fastly.. meim tumhara kahaniyom ka deewani hoom... this concept also fantastic as others.. so continue soon.. sorry dear if I said anything wrong or affect you.. you are an excellent writer. . continue soon. . continue the pm also.

Originally posted by: rerose

Wow Awesome Sonu,loved it a lot dear👏👏

SwaSan having kids that's so sweet yaar,awesome work😊😊

Pls do update soon and notify me through a PM whenever u update😛😛

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

interesting prologue