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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Love it and love how madly in love with Sanskaar Swara is! I particulary like the line where it says that Swara loves falling asleep in her husband's arms listening to the sound of the rain. That last sentence is the icing on the cake though!


hey Bloomy thanks!!!😛

I thought it was a nice touch.
and speaking of cakes...I would not say no to a bit of that in the rain either😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Owww so sweet
rain n khichdi - a perfect combo! Jst lovd it.
Bt i lov 2 watch rain only frm my balcony.


Hey Suja...

yes, rain and kchichdi are a mindblowing combo aren't they?😉 ummm...

me too. when it rains..I go inside firmly.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Medha, you are just mindlowing!! Lovely would be a very small word for this fantastic OS.

The rain pellets forming a curtain to the window is something i enjoy and you put SwaSan in there.. how can i resist that!!

Most emotional and reflecting lines were Cool and hot and comfy and fearless all at once. Invigorating.

Keep writing!!👏


thanks Sharon.😃
I want Swasan here too someday. Although dancing in the rain is not much of something I do myself(next day Doc alert)😭

But still its called wish fulfilment.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Gosh! That was so beautiful 😳

And that description of kissing in the rains ☺️ and barish mein sanskaar jaise pati ke sath bhigne ke baad, agar agle din bimar padne pe usi pati ki TLC mile toh life mein aur kya chahiye 😉😆


Hey Shruti😛,

Glad you liked it.

Yes, this is called vicarious wish fulfillment.😉😆
and that Doctor thing is totally me. It rains and I sneeze...don't ask me how...i don't know.😭


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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: iam-in-love

awww... Its a awsm os yaar... Ur OS made my morning beautiful.

SwaSan phn cnvrsation was nyc . Swara lyk rain & Sanskar dont. And Sanskar's memmory about his first rain expetiance...
SwaSan kiss in rain ❤️
Swara cought sick bcoz of rain & Sanskar driving her to doctor...

The OS is really so cute & nyc . Thnk u for d PM 😊


Hey Silpa...
Glad you liked it.

I wnted something light hearted and funny.😊
Glad it came across.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

Medha this is such a cute, romantic one! ❤️

Love it, keep writing more!


thanks.
Was in the mood for it.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: medhasankar


Viji,

No, I am not exactly a Gene Kelly fan...although Fit as a fiddle and Good morning are a few of my Mom's favourites.

Where I live...July to September is the monsoon season...and getting wet in the first shower is a tradition Mom firmly believes in. It used to be mostly with me, though, until I turned about 8-9 and firmly protested because, I am like a cat. When things get wet in rain..I would like dry firesides.😆

@bold...Certainly, you should try.😉
I wrote this one mostly inspired by one of the best couples ever...Nathan and Haley...from OTH. Kissing in the rain was something of their regular foreplay.😆


You used to watch OTH is it? I used to, too. 😊 though my fave pair where Peyton and Lucas. Kinda lost interest after a while. Then Started seeing "The O.C" and Prison break. Really loved Prison break seasons 1 and 2. Have you seen it?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
It is such a cutest, loveliest and fantastic write up Medha 😳
I am fond of such cute writings and of course rain 😳 😳
"Umm...power blackouts. Traffic jams, mud, Fungus, puddles...and musty weather" Swara could well imagine the faces Sanskaar was making, thinking of these. 😆 Sanskaar will be always Sanskaar
😆 😛
SwaSan enjoying the rain so romantic and their kiss ❤️ 😳
Sanskaar did not get more than a few licks off her fingers of chaat 🤣
And last line
😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Medha, WOW 👏
I love rain, the sound is so relaxing. Specially in winter, a cup of chai, some pakodas and a warm blanket while outside it's raining. Day made
Such a cute and beautiful piece of writing 😳
And then the kiss in the rain ☺️
Mindblowing👏
Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
beautifully written .👏. very descriptive.. could see swasan in front of my eyes..

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