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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was pouring outside. Eight in the evening and dark as doom. The clouds had completely ambushed the Moon and the stars had fled. Black sheets of rain pelted themselves...tapping at the windows as though they would quite like to come in.

Swara loved the rain. Pitter-patter. It reminded her of carefree childhood...of warm coffee, cosy snuggles in her Ma's lap and tasty snacks her Dida baked for her.

Khichdi---khichdi...the Bongs' special menu for rainy nights.. Swara could almost relive those smells. Pity, Sanskaar hated it and she did not feel like having it, without him.

Her phone rang.

"Hey Gorgeous. Whatcha doing?"

"Looking at the rain. Thinking of childhood. Ummm" Swara sighed.

"You like rain?" Shocked Hubby alert.😲

"you don't?" Even more shocked Wife Red alert.😲

"Not much. Are you a Pluviophile?"

"What is that, a homicidal maniac🤢?' Swara asked.

"No. A Pluviophile gets peace of mind in the rainy weather"

"Well maybe. Depends on my mood I suppose. Why don't you like rain?"

"Umm...power blackouts. Traffic jams, mud, Fungus, puddles...and musty weather" Swara could well imagine the faces Sanskaar was making, thinking of these. He hated all forms of dampness.😔

"Haven't you ever danced in the rain?"

"Not much. Why?" Sanskaar frowned at the thought.

"Not even when you were a kid?" Swara face-palmed.😲

"No. I tried it once. Caught my death of cold...and of course, Uttara and me slipped and nearly broke both of our legs. Dad gave me such a dose on that" Sanskaar remembered, laughing.

"Hmmm. Where are you?"

"About two streets away from home. Near theChildren's Park. Where I have been parked for the last 45 minutes. Traffic has not moved an inch because of the goddamn potholes" Sanskaar said impatiently.

"Chalo, park it there..and get out...I am coming"

"Hain? Why? its dark Swara" Sanskaar vexed.

"Arre park na. Back the car and side it. I'll run to you. There's no one about"😃

Swara came running with an umbrella, taking a beeline shortcut through the children's playground which separated their home from the highway, where Sanskaar was parked.

Swara was covered from the knee downwards with muck..and God knows what..with a red umbrella held aloft...which apparently had done nothing to shield her from the whipping showers. Sanskaar was about to pull her into the car...and rebuke her..but of course...Swara yanked him out.

"What!?"

"Arre chalo na!!"

And straight dive into a huge puddle behind an Oak.😆

"Swara...my suit." Sanskaar exclaimed rather cross.

"We'll send it for Laundry." Swara was already dancing. Now she had her favourite rain and her favourite person to share it with.

"We will both get Pneumonia. You are crazy" Sanskaar made futile attempts to drag his splashing Wife under the umbrella.

"No baba. What are you, ten years old? Kuch nahi hoga. See no ones watching." Swara jiggled her eyebrows invitingly.

Both their shoes were now full of puddle water.

"Toh?" Sanskaar started enjoying the fresh feel of the droplets swatting his face.

"Toh? Batana parega toh kya?" Swara enquired big-eyed and suggestive.😉

"You..? You actually want me to kiss you here? In the park? In this rain? Filmy Swara" Sanskaar teased.

"Uh-huh. Otherwise, I'll go to that chaatwala. I love chaatwalas. Especially baarish mein" Swara pouted.

"Come here, you" Sanskaar pulled his Wife close...and they kissed in the rain. Its a different feeling. Cool and hot and comfy and fearless all at once. Invigorating.

The streetlamps outside twinkled at the onslaught of precipitation...small wisps misting against the condensing effect of cool, on their scorching surfaces.

When they had had their fill of lovingly smoothing raindrops away from each others' faces...

Swara persuaded Sanskaar to buy her some chaat. Which she proceeded to chug away at, in the car. Sanskaar did not get more than a few licks off her fingers.😆

The Traffic Jam was over. They were going home. Swara loved falling asleep in her Husband's arms listening to the sound of rain.

Of course, the next day saw Swara in bed with a hot water bottle, and Sanskaar driving her to the Doctor's.😆

Edited by medhasankar - 9 years ago


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hp_2006 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Awww...such a sweet and cute OS..
loved it to bits..😳
swara thinks about coffee in rain..me too😉
and chaat too..😆my fav during rain..hot samosa chaat..woww😉
ok sanskaar doesnt like rain..loved the way swara was imagining him making faces through phone..😳
the rainkiss was mindblowing☺️
lovely OS Medha🤗
Edited by hp_2006 - 9 years ago
TurnThePage thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gosh!! This was so cute...
I would love to see a SwaSan rain scene...VaHe would kill it with their cracking chemistry...
Thanks for writing such an adorable OS...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm Singin' in the rain...I'm Dancin' in the rain...

😊 😛
Are you a Gene Kelly fan, Medhu?

Very nicely written, Medha. Beautifully captured a slice of life in the monsoon...Where I live, we have the monsoons twice a year---south west and north east. So I'm like the Swara in your story--I love the rain. Run out to play in the downpour given half a chance! Haven't yet kissed in the rain though 😳 but after your lovely description, that's on my bucket list for sure:

""...
and they kissed in the rain. Its a different feeling. Cool and hot and comfy and fearless all at once. Invigorating.

When they had had their fill of lovingly smoothing raindrops away from each others' faces...""


Hayeee...☺️ 😳

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Medhu 🤗
Sweet and funny at the same time, you have a real knack for this! I am a Virgo in this too- I love the freedom of the rain and the release but don't like the mess in the aftermath 😆. I loved the kiss in the rain, the lines there were so lovely. And the ending was fab- at the doctors the next day 😆. Lightened up my evening!
Love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Medha,
I love this one..
So cute love story..
You know, now it is raining outside.
Power gone, and I am going for sleep, listening to rain drops..
Perfect situation for me..
Except, a Sanskar nahi hein yahaan..😭😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hp_2006

Awww...such a sweet and cute OS..

loved it to bits..😳
swara thinks about coffee in rain..me too😉
and chaat too..😆my fav during rain..hot samosa chaat..woww😉
ok sanskaar doesnt like rain..loved the way swara was imagining him making faces through phone..😳
the rainkiss was mindblowing☺️
lovely OS Medha🤗


thanks naina😛
I love chaat and coffee as well in rainy season😃

and I strongly side with Sanky here. Hate the muck and damp. ewww.
me sits in a corner like a cat...and reads a book with hot pakoras in hand.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Onie...

Gosh!! This was so cute...
I would love to see a SwaSan rain scene...VaHe would kill it with their cracking chemistry...
Thanks for writing such an adorable OS...


thanks Onie.😊

yes, VaHe would won't they?
I want one too, in the show.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Medha! This was so adorable!
I am a true blue pulviophile! And reading this made me really happy and what more? It's raining here too!! I'm the kind of person Swara is in this story... keeps staring at rain for no reason what so ever! 😆

And loved the forward Swara, demanding a kiss! U go gal!! 🥳 But was it intended or is it just my GM thinking that she said she will go to chaatwala for a kiss if he doesn't kiss her to make him J? 😉 Or was the intention innocent and she really meant was only to eat chaat? 😳


-luv niks
Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love it and love how madly in love with Sanskaar Swara is! I particulary like the line where it says that Swara loves falling asleep in her husband's arms listening to the sound of the rain. That last sentence is the icing on the cake though!

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