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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: harshsriti
I love you dear. . 😊 swara is the snow queen. .. I loved the letter.. such a powerful letter.. the part of karna and duryodana friendship was mind blowing. . swara sanskar relationship is just like karna and duryodana. . what an imagination dear.. in your updates I like these comparisons. . in ice king you referred baratha to laksh na? . you are just brilliant. . in your stories all characters have their own strong personalities. . powerful thoughts and everything. this is the swara I want to see. . loved it very much... continue soon dear. .

Awweee Thanks😳

Actually I wanted to see Swara a little less Mahan here. I'm glad you liked her and her thought process. It would be hard to earn this lady's forgiveness. Yes dear, then Lakshya was Bharata, but here he'll be different I fear I'll continue soon.😊

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Take a bow!

Congrats dear writer on the sequel.
I feel I should give u a standing ovation cuz you managed to integrate two of my ever favourites into your fic.
Firstly the Mahabharata reference and next is the last line about winter, GOT Reference. Loved it.
Btw Karna and Sanskar fit so well to one another. I just wish u would somehow bring to context DP's Bhisma character too. It would be an amazing portrayal.
Swara is a much changed character. Neither she has the stupid Sister love blindness nor the absolute mahanta curtain unlike the show. However both the show and ur fic holds common ground on the fact that Swara's reasons always revolve around her family, her Maa-Baba in the show and her soul father DP in ur fic.

I am glad to see that u r one of those writers to explore Ram Prasad. This quiet character who has turned awfully humorous in the show seems to have loads of potential since his character isn't properly etched. Many dimensions can be figured out.
Annapurna... that lady is a volcano of interpretations. Her character has volumes underneath. It will be wonderful to see u explore them.

Lastly Sanskar. I am glad that Swara wrote that letter. She is quite clear on her terms. I want to see his brain of the fox plotting in the opposite path.

Lastly I have a request. Can u pen the part after Sanskar saves her from the bridge. I want to read about the confrontation.

-Niki

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: mistofshadows
Take a bow!

Congrats dear writer on the sequel.
I feel I should give u a standing ovation cuz you managed to integrate two of my ever favourites into your fic.
Firstly the Mahabharata reference and next is the last line about winter, GOT Reference. Loved it.
Btw Karna and Sanskar fit so well to one another. I just wish u would somehow bring to context DP's Bhisma character too. It would be an amazing portrayal.
Swara is a much changed character. Neither she has the stupid Sister love blindness nor the absolute mahanta curtain unlike the show. However both the show and ur fic holds common ground on the fact that Swara's reasons always revolve around her family, her Maa-Baba in the show and her soul father DP in ur fic.

I am glad to see that u r one of those writers to explore Ram Prasad. This quiet character who has turned awfully humorous in the show seems to have loads of potential since his character isn't properly etched. Many dimensions can be figured out.
Annapurna... that lady is a volcano of interpretations. Her character has volumes underneath. It will be wonderful to see u explore them.

Lastly Sanskar. I am glad that Swara wrote that letter. She is quite clear on her terms. I want to see his brain of the fox plotting in the opposite path.

Lastly I have a request. Can u pen the part after Sanskar saves her from the bridge. I want to read about the confrontation.

-Niki

Hi Niki,

Thanks and BTW you can call me Sakura.

Well I was GOT fan when song of ice and fire was going, later however I lost interest. Let's keep that aside I see what you mean about Karna, Bhisma and Sanskar and DP.

RP will have a lot to do here, I'm glad you liked him.😊 AP, well she is another candidate for SQ here. We'll see more of her too.

Tahnks for appreciating the letter part. And Swara's difference from the show I'm happy to find another who shares my opinion on her. Sanskar and Swara's that certain memory is already a part of one of the next updates. You'll have to wait for that.

I have a request too, if you won't mind dear, please empty your inbox. I can't PM you because it is full at the moment. I hope you're not upset with this request, if you're I am so sorry😔 Thanks again.😊

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Hey Sakura

Could not control myself when I saw your pm when I should be studying hard for my test

Your stories are so addictive

"My own personal brand of heroine"

Loved the letter

Who is actually the Snow queen

Swara, Ragini, Annapurna I am so confused

Loved the part where you added Swasan friendship related to different Mahabharata characters...I feel that Ragini is Dhritrastra who became so blind to gain throne (Lakshya) that she destroyed her whole family completely

Loved the way RP got a role to play

You are giving equal importance to all the characters instead of making them just eye candies

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Loved it. Looking forward to reading some more

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Kushimian89
super awesome wonderful👏

Thank you dear😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: princess_tara
superb update

thank you😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Hey Sakura
Could not control myself when I saw your pm when I should be studying hard for my test
Your stories are so addictive
"My own personal brand of heroine"
Loved the letter
Who is actually the Snow queen
Swara, Ragini, Annapurna I am so confused
Loved the part where you added Swasan friendship related to different Mahabharata characters...I feel that Ragini is Dhritrastra who became so blind to gain throne (Lakshya) that she destroyed her whole family completely
Loved the way RP got a role to play
You are giving equal importance to all the characters instead of making them just eye candies
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Hi dear😊 Oh😲 Don't take time from you studies, that would not be so good.but sometimes a break in between studies does help😃 I'm on vacation hence the writings will keep coming, but give your best for the tests, I wish you luck! And thank you very much for taking time and reading. I really appreciate the gesture😊 Snow Queen isn't one person but many, each have their SQ moments😊 Glad you found RP interesting. I'll continue soon.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8
Loved it. Looking forward to reading some more

Thanks😛

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: manasie23
Winter is coming this line always reminds of GoT and I dobt even know why
This was a mindblowing amazing update..
This time its the other way around and Sanskaar has try his level best to repent for his mistakes
The letter which Swara had written to Sanskaar literally made my heart burn for Sanskaar even though I know that he might actually deserve some intially cold shoulder from her...
I am in love with this winter series of yours...
Update soon 😳

I initially had song of ice and fire in mind when I wrote that, so your reminder is justified dear😊

Thanks, Swara will warm up later and Sanskar deserved some punishment. I'll update soon😛