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bald

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

I am in love with this story and your writing

pls pm me next time

waiting for next part

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
This one is just too beautiful !! Though the winter is coming in this FF , it has sent me chills down while reading some parts as well the warmth spread out in the pits of my stomach while reading the pysche conversation between Sanskaar and Swara
AP and RP characterizations are too good. Good to see Ram speaking up for what he feels right with his unflinching faith in his elder brother;s decisions even if it is to go against his bhabhi.!!

Would love to see this unfolding !!

Winter although cold sometimes gives warm happiness too😊 Thank you dear, you'll see more of everyone here😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: bald
I am in love with this story and your writing
pls pm me next time
waiting for next part

Thanks😊 I will PM you😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Amazing update Sakura!
I was waiting for your update only... I am always waiting for you to update...
Though yes Lakshya's' pov was a little too much too read for me! It just shows that he is a fool to believe and fall into Ragini's trap soo easily but then everything he has seen aandthe way it has unfold maube thats whathas made Lakshya blind.
Adarsh does not seem to be happy with the Maheshwari reigns going to either of the parties.
And I love RP in your story dude... atleast here he understands his son and supports him.
And Lakshy's last line to Swara well it was gut wrenching... it made me feel so bad for both Swara & Sanskaar
And also Swara's assumption that Sanskaar's has experienced more pain than she can imagine and also has the remedies is soo true... hopesSwara gets to know soon why Sanskaar ddi everything he did before knowing the truth...

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abika

@abika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Awesome update
Every emotion iis described so nicely

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Lovely update, Saku.

The way you have woven the Swara--Sanskaar--Lakshya--Ragini quadrangle, into a tale of corporate intrigue, with boardroom battles and strategic planning enough to rival the game theory 😊, is splendid. Just loved the role you have given to the supporting cast--AP, RP of course, and even Adarsh. Really wish the serial took time to flesh out these characters more.

Apart from the delicious Machiavellian machinations, this update was of particular interest to me, as it contained your lovely description of how Sanskaar & Swara are redicovering each other, in a sense. There is enough of their old selves still, for that odd sense of familiarity, but a lot has changed, and they do need to understand one another, inside out almost, to ultimately fall in love again. 😊 Very well done.

And before I forget, your last para was very, very moving.

""She cried in to his chest, and cried until the last drop of painful humiliation was squeezed and extracted away. Laksh could hurt her no more. There was one thing she discovered about Sanskar. He knew of pain more than she did and of cause, its remedies. Unknown to her one tiny piece of her broken heart was lost.""

Very evocative, indeed.

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arohijsp

@arohijsp

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Thank you for the awesome update!
Brilliantly written! I could visualize all the emotional turmoil going through each and every character infront of me , just like watching a tv show! Loved it!

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: manasie23
Amazing update Sakura!
I was waiting for your update only... I am always waiting for you to update...
Though yes Lakshya's' pov was a little too much too read for me! It just shows that he is a fool to believe and fall into Ragini's trap soo easily but then everything he has seen aandthe way it has unfold maube thats whathas made Lakshya blind.
Adarsh does not seem to be happy with the Maheshwari reigns going to either of the parties.
And I love RP in your story dude... atleast here he understands his son and supports him.
And Lakshy's last line to Swara well it was gut wrenching... it made me feel so bad for both Swara & Sanskaar
And also Swara's assumption that Sanskaar's has experienced more pain than she can imagine and also has the remedies is soo true... hopesSwara gets to know soon why Sanskaar ddi everything he did before knowing the truth...

Thank you dear😊 I know you wait for updates that's why I PM you.

Coming to Laksh his POV was needed, unless some of his future actions will be hard to explain. Adarsh has to held some end of the cake passing by right? Swara will slowly get to know more about Sanskar I can assure you😊