Snow Queen SwaSan SS complete - Page 6

Its superb. I dunno why...somehow I'm finding snow queen easier to decipher than i found ice king. Very sharply written ... full of intelligence! Can't wait for the next. ..

Awesome update Sakura just loved it👏👏

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Saku

Loved it. To be frank, I thirst for works where all characters are explored--AP, DP, even Ram, Sujata. There's only so much yarn you can spin with just Sanskaar and Swara mooning over each other in cutesy situations, no? 😊

There are many things in this chapter that I loved. The Mahabharata references---that's a surefire way of reeling me in, dear. 😉 BTW a book recommendation here, do read Dr Devdutt Pattanaik's "Jaya" when you get the chance. His retelling of the epic with a lot of lesser known tales included. Absolutely fascinating!

Anyway, this sentence grabbed my attention: ""but also a person that resembles some golden and poisonous combination of memories"" 😊 I am like that, certain sentences stay with me long after I finish reading. This one totally appealed to me, for some reason. Must be the bittersweet nature of that nostalgia.

And Oh yes, your characterization of AP and RP, was too good. I could actually picture them walking on eggshells around each other after their rare argument!

The last conversation between Sansku & Swara--did I read it right, that it was their psyches doing the talking and not a verbal one? Was just too good--another hint to their "cosmic connect" in a way.

Waiting for more! 😊

So how will swasan live move forward
Waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: jisa

awesome...!!
the story is gearing up..!!
w8ng for next..

I love you dear. . 😊 swara is the snow queen. .. I loved the letter.. such a powerful letter.. the part of karna and duryodana friendship was mind blowing. . swara sanskar relationship is just like karna and duryodana. . what an imagination dear.. in your updates I like these comparisons. . in ice king you referred baratha to laksh na? . you are just brilliant. . in your stories all characters have their own strong personalities. . powerful thoughts and everything. this is the swara I want to see. . loved it very much... continue soon dear. .

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Its superb. I dunno why...somehow I'm finding snow queen easier to decipher than i found ice king. Very sharply written ... full of intelligence! Can't wait for the next. ..

Originally posted by: rerose

Awesome update Sakura just loved it👏👏

Brilliant piece of writing😊😊

Originally posted by: MusicMyLife.

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Originally posted by: swa291

So how will swasan live move forward
Waiting for the next update