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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Its superb. I dunno why...somehow I'm finding snow queen easier to decipher than i found ice king. Very sharply written ... full of intelligence! Can't wait for the next. ..

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome update Sakura just loved it👏👏

Brilliant piece of writing😊😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hi Saku

Loved it. To be frank, I thirst for works where all characters are explored--AP, DP, even Ram, Sujata. There's only so much yarn you can spin with just Sanskaar and Swara mooning over each other in cutesy situations, no? 😊

There are many things in this chapter that I loved. The Mahabharata references---that's a surefire way of reeling me in, dear. 😉 BTW a book recommendation here, do read Dr Devdutt Pattanaik's "Jaya" when you get the chance. His retelling of the epic with a lot of lesser known tales included. Absolutely fascinating!

Anyway, this sentence grabbed my attention: ""but also a person that resembles some golden and poisonous combination of memories"" 😊 I am like that, certain sentences stay with me long after I finish reading. This one totally appealed to me, for some reason. Must be the bittersweet nature of that nostalgia.

And Oh yes, your characterization of AP and RP, was too good. I could actually picture them walking on eggshells around each other after their rare argument!

The last conversation between Sansku & Swara--did I read it right, that it was their psyches doing the talking and not a verbal one? Was just too good--another hint to their "cosmic connect" in a way.

Waiting for more! 😊

Hi Viji😊

Yes, I share that thirst of yours for more wide spreading stories. Even though they have elegant dynamics SwaSan has a limit to what they can do to a story, very true that is.

I've already read that one dearest, early this year to be exact. My brother in law has a copy in his personal collection. True it held my attention at a different level

I know what you mean about sentences that stay with us, kind of have felt the same away about somethings I've read too. 😊

I'm glad you liked AP after your elegant portrayal of hers in fire I take that as a compliment.😊 I was worried how you'd find RP, but relieved now that you liked him.

Yes dear that conversation was not verbal, couldn't have been. They are so guarded up people to openly share their thoughts. Thanks again for the lovely words.

We'll meet again with pt 2 soon😊

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

So how will swasan live move forward
Waiting for the next update

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: jisa
awesome...!!
the story is gearing up..!!
w8ng for next..

Thank you😊

I'd try to keep you hooked with the story😊

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

I love you dear. . 😊 swara is the snow queen. .. I loved the letter.. such a powerful letter.. the part of karna and duryodana friendship was mind blowing. . swara sanskar relationship is just like karna and duryodana. . what an imagination dear.. in your updates I like these comparisons. . in ice king you referred baratha to laksh na? . you are just brilliant. . in your stories all characters have their own strong personalities. . powerful thoughts and everything. this is the swara I want to see. . loved it very much... continue soon dear. .

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Its superb. I dunno why...somehow I'm finding snow queen easier to decipher than i found ice king. Very sharply written ... full of intelligence! Can't wait for the next. ..

Thank you😊

SQ has a different accent than IK perhaps that's why you found it easy to understand. After all Sanskar is far more complicated than any of these queens. I'll be continuing soon😊