Snow Queen SwaSan SS complete - Page 5

Originally posted by: harshsriti

😕 I want swara as snow queen. . otherwise I will strike. . 😉

Okay, so I'm going to post now...brrr...the winter is coming🥱

Hey Saku,

Winter is coming this line always reminds of GoT and I dobt even know why
This was a mindblowing amazing update..
This time its the other way around and Sanskaar has try his level best to repent for his mistakes
The letter which Swara had written to Sanskaar literally made my heart burn for Sanskaar even though I know that he might actually deserve some intially cold shoulder from her...
I am in love with this winter series of yours...
Update soon 😳

It finally here, and i love it.

Hi Saku

Loved it. To be frank, I thirst for works where all characters are explored--AP, DP, Ragini, Lucky, even Ram, Sujata, apart from of course, our beloved Sansku & Swara on centerstage. There's only so much yarn you can spin with only Sanskaar and Swara, mooning over each other in cutesy situations, no? 😊

There are many things in this chapter that I loved. The Mahabharata references---that's a surefire way of reeling me in, dear. 😉 BTW a book recommendation here, do read Dr Devdutt Pattanaik's "Jaya" when you get the chance. His retelling of the epic with a lot of lesser known tales included. Absolutely fascinating!

Anyway, this sentence grabbed my attention: ""but also a person that resembles some golden and poisonous combination of memories"" 😊 I am like that, certain sentences stay with me long after I finish reading. This one totally appealed to me, for some reason. Must be the bittersweet nature of that nostalgia.

And Oh yes, your characterization of AP and RP, was too good. I could actually picture them walking on eggshells around each other after their rare argument!

The last conversation between Sansku & Swara--did I read it right, that it was their psyches doing the talking and not a verbal one? Was just too good--another hint to their "cosmic connect" in a way.

Waiting for more! 😊

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Hey Saku,

I love this. The letter was so well done. Now who is the snow queen re baba? **puzzled** I thought in the prologue it was Rags..now its Swara it seems. Well, are you giving them all a chance to show that facet?

The way you brought out RP and AP characterisation..take a bow.

Continue soon Saku.

Love--]]

Medha.

awesome...!!
the story is gearing up..!!
w8ng for next..

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

It finally here, and i love it.

I really get excited evertime i see you new updates , and i just cant move past without reading it, that much i am kind of addcited to ice king and now Snow Queen.

I loved Swara letter which was much more relatable then the ever forgiving Swara in the Show. I also loved the hospital Scene. And now they are together towards a common goal i cant wait to read the next chapters.

Ram Prasad is going to be more than a statue here and i like it.

Do continue soon and PM if possible when you update