SwaSan OS: FULFILMENT(Part 3 of Realisations 3Shot)

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This is the last part of my SwaSan 3Shot 'Realisations'.If you want to read, then:

1st Part Falling in Love

2nd Part Acceptance

With that, I welcome you to the third and final part,😊

3.FULFILMENT:

December in Kolkata was a mild affair. Of course it grew colder, but you could make-do with a jacket or a pullover or a shawl according to how much of a cold mortal you happened to be. The sun became rather lazy. The wind gave mild incentives, to think fondly of blankets at home. The weather reminded families and friends, of picnics and zoo visits and circuses. And steaming hot cups of tea.

Sanskaar came to his room that night..to find that his couch had been stripped bare of all its upholstery. Quizzically, he looked at Swara, who had just stepped in, dinner done.

"Where am I supposed to sleep?"

"Umm... on the bed?" Swara rolled her eyes.

"What happened to the couch?"

"It got plundered." Swara smiled. "I gave the covers for dry cleaning, it was filthy. What are you complaining about...you can get on the bed...we can sleep on the extreme edges. Anyway, you're soon going to develop Spondylitis from sleeping on that couch. You don't fit"

Left with no choice, but having to face pneumonia from sleeping on the floor mid-December, Sanskaar gave in.

Snuggling inside the blankets, Swara turned herself to face her husband. "So, how was your day?"

"Usual work...mostly advance tax matters. You?"

"I went to the library after ages. Got out a book. Have you ever read The Other Side of Midnight', by Sidney Sheldon?"

"No. I have only read his Master of the Game."' Sanskaar replied.

"I'll tell you the story, when I finish it." Swara smiled. "Goodnight, Sanskaar."

"Goodnight Swara".

Sleep did not come easily to either of them, both sensitive to the other's closeness...but the bed certainly felt warmer to Swara, with him in it. Sanskaar slept better than he had in months...because of the comfort of the mattress...and maybe because his dreams were better with his wife around.

Next morning, Sanskaar was getting ready. Having brushed his hair, he was about to free the dressing table for Swara, whom he had heard unlock the bathroom door just moments previously. Nowadays, his clothes were laid out ready by her, on the bed...and his and her cosmetics were kept arranged on the dressing table on two separate trays. Sanskaar had accepted the changes Swara made, without comment.

Swara closed the bathroom door, behind her..and stepped out. Attracted by the tune she was happily humming to herself, Sanskaar looked at her..and kept looking. Swara looked bright and rosy, with her wet hair streaming in couplets down her shoulders...and the midnight blue Kameez she wore..only helped to set her complexion aglow. Sanskaar had never seen anything so fresh in all his mornings till date. Or maybe not noticed it properly.

Towelling her tresses dry, Swara spied Sanskaar looking shyly away, as he sensed her gaze on him. Moving back from the table in haste, he snatched up his musk. Swara looked at him doubtfully.

"Sanskaar?"

"yeah?"

"Why are you, spraying yourself with my Jasmine scent?"

"With your..? ugghh!!" Sanskaar suddenly realised, in his distraction, he had grabbed her perfume instead of his deo.😆

"Your deo is on the bed, where I put it, with your clothes" Swara pursed up her lips to keep from smiling.

Replacing the female aroma where it belonged and hastily whiffing himself with the correct one, Sanskaar hurried out.

Smiling to herself, Swara got busy applying her vermillion to her forehead, like every day.

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NEW YEAR'S EVE.

Sanskaar's Staff wanted to throw a party on the last day of the year. They had arranged for dinner and some musical performances. Of course, the Director and his wife had to go. The Staff, had certainly been curious about their newly-wed Mrs. Boss.

Swara had been getting ready in front of the dressing table. Make up was almost done. She had to just put on her Lipstick and her bangles. And one of them slipped from her hands, rolling under the bed. Grumbling, Swara knelt, trying to coax it out. Her hands were way smaller than necessary, to reach it at it's vantage point.

"What are you doing?" Sanskaar asked from the doorway.

"Meri churi...its gone under that bed..I need a broom or a newspaper to get it out"

"Let me try." Sanskar knelt down beside her..and his hands being longer, fished it out. "Here you are"

Swara offered him his forearm. "Pehna do"

Sanskaar gazed into her face..and slowly slipped the bangle on to her wrist. The mauve of the Sari she had chosen for the occasion, perfectly framed her clear complexion. It made her prettiness even lovelier...morphing into actual beauty. Swara put her hand on his dark blazer pocket, straightening the edge of the kerchief peeking out. Her hand resting directly over his heart..revealed that their heartbeats pulsated the same crescendo. Neither seemed to want to move away. The heat between them started getting even warmer. Inviting somehow.

"Are you going to kiss me?" Swara asked softly, looking up into his eyes. She loved looking at them.

"Do you want me to?" Sanskaar cocked his head eyes ardent, in response to hers.

"Yes"...Swara did not hesitate with her reply.

She quivered, as Sanskaar haltingly moved his face closer to hers...and placed his much tougher lips on her soft ones. His stubble rubbed against her cheek..thrilling her. Both stopped breathing in anticipation...as their lips opened for each other...and moulded together. They pulled apart after long moments...Sanskaar's hands still holding Swara's nape..in the position he had adjusted it for the kiss; Swara's still clutching his shoulders...and both breathing rather hard.

She had never known anything could be so heady and yet so tranquil at the same time.

It was sweet, meaningful and full of promises, as first kisses should be.

It certainly had the effect of a dozen blushers applied at once to Swara's cheekbones. Feeling the scorch of Sanskaar's stare...she finally looked up shyly into his eyes.

I have never kissed anyone before" she smiled.

"So?"

"Its... beautiful. Well, beautiful is an understatement..but my head is too muddled to pick out better words. I'm just glad, that you are my first...and last" Swara's eyes brightened in the reflection of his.

"Swara..." Sanskaar suddenly realised, Swara had tears sparkling in her eyes.

"I love you Sanskaar. I know how much I have hurt you, in the whole long time it took me to understand my own heart...but, I am ready to make it up to you..." Sanskaar shushed her...placing his finger on her lips.

"You got our entire lives for that Swara...and we'll never speak of this again. Its over. We are going to be ok. We both need to learn a lot about each other. And we will learn it, together. And I love you, you know that"

Swara nodded happily.

"Chalo, if we don't leave now...we'll miss the function" Swara said busily sniffing away her tears.

"Umm that..."

"What?" Swara was puzzled, at how Sanskaar was looking at her sheepishly.

In reply, he placed his hands on her shoulders and turned her profile towards the mirror. To Swara's besotted view...she seemed complete somehow...with his well-built form standing behind her. Like a wedding picture clicked together.

But then she realised what he meant. Sanskaar looked as debonair as ever...but her bun now hung loose and lop-sided, stray tendrils escaping their confines. His hands had run through them...and disarrayed her set.

Well, his hands had the right to, of course.

"I think you look gorgeous Swara...but maybe you would need a few more minutes?" Sanskaar suggested, a wicked grin spreading slowly over his face. This was a sight only for a husband's eyes.

Swara looked at him in mock anger...and said "Wait for me."

"Will do" Sanskaar left her, to take the car out.

Swara bubbled with happiness and contentment...re-arranging her hair..and putting on her Lipstick.

Its time , Swara and Sanskaar attended the event as Mr. And Mrs. Sanskaar Maheshwari.

Its New Year. Time to make new beginnings.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Medha...🤗 🤗

Poignantly beautiful. 👏 This whole series was awesome Medha...I admit, I still have a huge weakness for your "Letter from Sanskaar to Swara" and "Unspoken", and the earlier "Black & White" and "Confessions", but this series was just awesome as well.

My favorite part was the "discussion" before the kiss. 😉 So realistic. Real-couple like. 😳

""
"Are you going to kiss me?" Swara asked softly, looking up into his eyes. She loved looking at them.

"Do you want me to?" Sanskaar cocked his head eyes ardent, in response to hers.

"Yes"...Swara did not hesitate with her reply...

She had never known anything could be so heady and yet so tranquil at the same time.

It was sweet, meaningful and full of promises, as first kisses should be."""


And the later sentences in the same para, about their promises to be by each other's side forever:


"I love you Sanskaar. I know how much I have hurt you, in the whole long time it took me to understand my own heart...but, I am ready to make it up to you..." Sanskaar shushed her...placing his finger on her lips.

"You got our entire lives for that Swara...and we'll never speak of this again. Its over. We are going to be ok. We both need to learn a lot about each other. And we will learn it, together. And I love you, you know that"""


24 kt gold, my dear! 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally the 3rd part
And its really beautiful!!
Loved it👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey , thanks for the pm


that was indeed a funny secene when sanskar spray himself on jasmine spray ... swara become bold she directly asked him for kiss ... its the point that sanskar want that she should meet him in half way of his love...today she make a move towards her love and life and sanskar met her in there


very nice conclusion



i wish u write more and pm me
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Medha...🤗 🤗

Poignantly beautiful. 👏 This whole series was awesome Medha...I admit, I still have a huge weakness for your "Letter from Sanskaar to Swara" and "Unspoken", and the earlier "Black & White" and "Confessions", but this series was just awesome as well.

My favorite part was the "discussion" before the kiss. 😉 So realistic. Real-couple like. 😳

""
"Are you going to kiss me?" Swara asked softly, looking up into his eyes. She loved looking at them.

"Do you want me to?" Sanskaar cocked his head eyes ardent, in response to hers.

"Yes"...Swara did not hesitate with her reply...

She had never known anything could be so heady and yet so tranquil at the same time.

It was sweet, meaningful and full of promises, as first kisses should be."""


And the later sentences in the same para, about their promises to be by each other's side forever:


"I love you Sanskaar. I know how much I have hurt you, in the whole long time it took me to understand my own heart...but, I am ready to make it up to you..." Sanskaar shushed her...placing his finger on her lips.

"You got our entire lives for that Swara...and we'll never speak of this again. Its over. We are going to be ok. We both need to learn a lot about each other. And we will learn it, together. And I love you, you know that"""


24 kt gold, my dear! 😊


Viji 🤗,

I'm damn happy that you commented first on this. 😃
This was the part where I feared I would overdo it, coz, I do not write a whole lotta romantic scenes..and i certainly have no experience of couple time. So more or less, from whatever I have gathered about first kisses from books and movies.

I am grateful to that Saudade OS of yours for reminding me, that the guy is likely to get lipstick on himself, if he kisses a girl wearing it. Would never have crossed my mind otherwise.😳

I am at peace about this now, Viji likes my OS..means its not OTT. Thanks for the lovely review...its made my day.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow,Medha the last part was soo awesome dr,loved it soo much,wonderful writing👏👏👏
Pls do keep on writing😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhasankar


Viji 🤗,

I'm damn happy that you commented first on this. 😃
This was the part where I feared I would overdo it, coz, I do not write a whole lotta romantic scenes..and i certainly have no experience of couple time. So more or less, from whatever I have gathered about first kisses from books and movies.

I am grateful to that Saudade OS of yours for reminding me, that the guy is likely to get lipstick on himself, if he kisses a girl wearing it. Would never have crossed my mind otherwise.😳

I am at peace about this now, Viji likes my OS..means its not OTT. Thanks for the lovely review...its made my day.😃



Medha my dear...your writing is never, ever OTT. Concise, yet wonderfully, sometimes almost painfully lovely, yes. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres

loved it very much... Its jst awsm. U wrote is very beautifully. I loved SwaSan kiss vry much

😊 "Are you going to kiss me ?" Swara asked softly , looking up into his eyes . She loved looking at them.

"Do you want me to ?" Sanskaar cocked his head eyes ardent, in response to hers.

"Yes..." Swara did not hesitate with her reply . 😊

Loved dis vry much... The way hw u describing each and evry moment of SwaSan is jst awsm . Write more about them . Really love to read it. PM me also...
Edited by iam-in-love - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prizi

beautifully written


thanks prizi.😊
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Medha what a wonderful piece of work!
Your story made me fall in love with swason even more.The thing that I love most about them is that they don't need words to communicate with each other.One look at each other and they know what's brewing in others mind .Swara's confession was simple and perfect;considering the kind of comfort level they share with each other we can't expect a OTT scenes between them.You have kept the essence of their relationship intact.I just loved that
The swason moments u described were simple beautiful and so natural.You kept me glued to my screen right from the word go till the end.
The whole story was so lyrical.You describe emotions too well.
" Her hand resting
directly over his heart..revealed that their
heartbeats pulsated the same crescendo.
"
How beautiful!
Usually people fall in love but for swason ...they would rise in love.
Love one another, but make not a bond of
love: Let it rather be a moving sea between the
shores of your souls

Keep writing such beautiful stories
Loved all the three parts equally.Sorry wasn't able to review the second part but trust me it was equally beautiful
You are an awesome writer
thanks for pm

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