DILWALE DULHANIYA LE JAYENGE- Swasan OS *Karvachauth spl*

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: a_uma
awesum OS.. really waiting for this to happen.. both breaking their fast by feeding each other kheer ...

Thank u! 😳 N Oh my shipper hear too wishes the same dear! ❤️

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice os..

Thank u yar. 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: anju10
amazing os dear
wonderfully written
loved it
😊

Thank u so much dear! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: kubare
Loved it dear...beautifully written...

Thank u so much dearie!! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: dhaakshu
This is my first post on this forum, and I think this deserved it 😉
This was such a well-written OS
Simple and sweet OS, yet awesome!
And I too smiled when Swara said that she was still hungry 😆
The characters were '
Good job ❤️

Aww thank u so much for the honour dear!!😃 I'm genuinely touched. 😳😳 And thnk u for ur kind words dear, I'm really happy u enjoyed reading this. 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sanabmw
Its wonderful...❤️
Awsome⭐️
And so beautiful😳

This is for u 👏

Thnk u so much dear!! 😃😃

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vaishnavi77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

This was just too cute and sweet.

The piece seems to contain certain small gestures that makes one feel "aww". 😊

The Swara portrayed here, seems a mature and understanding one😃

Loved the last line on how the winter is making way for the spring, the ice melting into water and the seed of love sown long ago, is springing back to life! Those lines were just very poetic 👏
Enjoyed reading it👍🏼

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: vaishnavi77
This was just too cute and sweet.
The piece seems to contain certain small gestures that makes one feel "aww". 😊

The Swara portrayed here, seems a mature and understanding one😃

Loved the last line on how the winter is making way for the spring, the ice melting into water and the seed of love sown long ago, is springing back to life! Those lines were just very poetic 👏
Enjoyed reading it👍🏼

Thank u so much for ur kind words dear. 😳

I'm genuinely glad you liked all the little nuances in this story and enjoyed reading it. 😃

And yeah I'm really happy that you liked those closing lines too.😳

Thank u once again for reviewing! 😃