DILWALE DULHANIYA LE JAYENGE- Swasan OS *Karvachauth spl*

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

The feel of the entire story was so good...

End part and kheer scene was lovely...

Totally beautifully written update...

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Love it! Such an awesome piece of writing. Both of the are so adorable. As much as I would love for something like this to happen in the show I doubt it would what with Helly having Dengue. These fics are our only solace right now.

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Awww..

Just loved it,..

Wish it would happen in real

👍🏼

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

awesome..😃
aisa kyu lag raha hai k show me bhi aisa hi kuch dekhne ko milegaaa...!!😉😆
loved it..😳

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Anu

@swasanluv

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Loved the way u described each & every moment. Please write more stories. 👏

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a_uma

@a_uma

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

awesum OS.. really waiting for this to happen.. both breaking their fast by feeding each other kheer ...

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

WoW! Thank u all so very much for such an overwhelming response!! 🤗

Will reply individually to each and everyone who took time to comment in a short while. 😳 Once again THANK U ALL! 😃

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anju rana

@anju10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

amazing os dear
wonderfully written
loved it
😊 😛 😛 😊

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

This is my first post on this forum, and I think this deserved it 😉

This was such a well-written OS

Simple and sweet OS, yet awesome!

And I too smiled when Swara said that she was still hungry 😆

The characters were '

Good job ❤️

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very ethereal, romantic, and incandescently beautiful. 😊 I loved it. Really liked that imagery you inserted, about Sanskaar's love being like water that eats through stone! 😊

Viji! 😃 Thank u dearie! I'm glad u read and liked this. 😳 And yeah I truly feel that's how his love will work its magic on her... slow and persistent, without actually letting itself known.