SwaSan OS : First Dance & First Kiss

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viva_rockzz

@viva_rockzz

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Its awesome!!!! I hve no words hw it is!!!

Sanskar accept his love in front of laksh wooww n dat to nt in drunken state😉

So laksh can understand very well😆👏👏

Jst loved it!!!

N ya plz pm me nxt time as i m new here!!!😊

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Very well written Anna.
and thanks for reminding me of arshi...used to be a fan.

the whole development was brilliantly portrayed. Claps.

love--
Medha.

Thank you so much Medha! 🤗

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -damon-
Superb Superb Superb..Loved it lot!!

Thank you so much! 🤗

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Love it, love it, love it!

Swara clinging to Sanskaar even after she saw her ma-baba

Sanskaar being an absolute gentleman and asking her for a dance, even though he's fighting a battle inside. 😳

Swara's fitting reply to Laksh- you go girl! 👏

Sanskaar's "Dard hota hai" 💔

And my most fav part- Swara madam cornering Sanskaar babu & replying in the most appropriate manner! ☺️

Actions do speak louder than words! 😉😳

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Kelly08

@Kelly08

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

may i know whether u r making an os on swara wooeing sanskar. this one was beautifully scripted .loved it.if u r making another os plz pm me

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

First dance & kiss mk me fall all over again in love with swasan.
I hv no words.its so beautiful.

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

That Kiss. 😳

I can see nothing but Kiss.

You are making us dream all this, which will not happen so soon. :(

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Aww..

thats' awesome..

Dance in MM..

Thats something news..

Swara feel safe with sanskar..

Lovely..

Swara Sanskar bedroom scene was awesome..

Feel for them again..

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Anna! How had i not read this?! Did we not pm each other? Very confused and therefore sad to be so late to comment! Lovely piece! I love the evolving emotions and the suppresses sexual tension was so exciting. That dance- haiii! And then the confrontation with Laksh, I loved that and Sanskaar initially ignoring Swara after that- as you know yeh toh hamari always ki khwaish hai! Finally that torrid but still very sweet kiss!!! I sooo yearn now for a changed track and full on romance!
I'm off to find your other writing- I feel like a prize idiot but really didn't know!!
Lots of love xxx