SwaSan OS : First Dance & First Kiss

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ayushi

@ayushi1993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

🤢🤢 No words am dead sachhiii 🤢🤪

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milisaini

@milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Omg...it was so pure...so magical. .so intense. ...😳

Moi faint ho gayi...all lost in a dreamland. ..

I read all ur 3 os 2day nd guess wat u really made ma day...

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Right now i'm in SwaSan dreamland Your OS took me in an another world, a magical world .
Wow Anna 👏 This was truly beautiful❤️
Their first dance and first kiss❤️ The dialogues were excellent😳 Especially when Swara joined Sanskar and said to Laksh that they are giving a chance to their relationship. That was a slap on Laksh's face 😆
Everything was perfect and mesmerizing
Looking forward to more stories from you Anna 🤗

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

You have made me speechless! This was so adorable and I so want Swara chasing after Sanskaar in the show. Will you continue this? Please do!

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awee...

So cute. And LuX well lets forget him, Swara finally gave in to sanskar's charm Yippie!!! That was one awesome OS, good job!!

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Sonakshi Sharma

@sonal36

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Amazing one

Swasan dance was superb

Swasan kiss aww

Hopefully laksh ll realize nw

Cont soon

Waiting

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rithika2012

@rithika2012

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

beautiful os dear.. that was a very good continuation of the previous one.. loved it totally..

possessive and protective swasan. hayee when will we get to see that in the show.

laksh jealous and angry. he is perfect only for that..

thank u for such a lovely os dear..

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ipkkndbarun_fan

@ipkkndbarun_fan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Read all three OS of yours at a go... beautifully written as I was reading I could imagine the scene in front of me.. loved it😊❤️

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Miracle_sweet

@Miracle_sweet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Loved it so much!
I read the other two OS's as well and I have to say, this is what needs to happen. Swara has hurt Sanskar far too much for him to trust and accept her easily! And I think the way you have portrayed it is amazing!

Keep writing,
Love,
Mihika.