SwaSan SS-Rab Ne Banaa Di Jodi- Final update Pg 74 - Page 52

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen


Aww soo cute!
Waiting for the epilogue!


I am glad that you loved it..
I will post the epilogue now..thank you dear😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll


Part-3
Wow dear...
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Kids were so cute and adorable...
Swasan moments were so wonderful...
Specially there dance...
Both feel attracted towards each other...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm



Thank you sooo much megha..I am glad that you loved their dance😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishri1


Thanks for the pm
I don't want this story to end
It is better than what is being shown in serial. It is frustrating.
Please update




Aww..😳😳 thank you soo much Mishri..😃
Hope you love my other on going stories too like this one..🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Part-4

Wow dear...
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Loved swasan moments...
Kids were so adorable...
Aww sanskar kissed on swara cheek...
Omg he met kavita...
Sanskar was drunk...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...



Thank you soo much megha..😃😃
Read on for more surprises..
I am glad that you loved so much of the story😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I Thank you all from my heart for supporting and loving this SS🤗

FINAL CHAPTER--PART 10

Months passed. And now Swara was 7 months pregnant. Her belly was bigger than ever. She was sitting on her bed leaning on to the pillows and was reading a book based on babies and pregnancy. Sanskaar was also there in the room and he was doing some paperwork sitting by a table in a corner. Suddenly Swara called out.
Sw:Sanskaar!!
Sa:(startled) What is it ..?
He found that she was touching her belly and smiling.
Sw:(excitedly) Look here, Sanskaar..It is kicking my insides...Come on...Touch and see...(and touches here and there on her belly)
Excitedly Sanskaar got up from his chair and sat beside her. As she was wearing a sari, she shifted it off her belly and Sanskaar could see the foot prints of his baby kicking on the surface of her round belly. He became curious and touched the area. He could feel the small pressure of the kicks. He placed his face lightly on her belly and received one kicked on his face. He felt a tickling sensation and took off his face. Then he started talking to the baby.
Sa: Hello...You are kicking on your Papa's face...Very bad, huh..!!Very bad..
Sw:(laughs)Sanskaar!!
Sa:(looks at her and smiles..Then again to her belly) Your Papa is eagerly waiting to see you, baby..Come out soon.. So that I can shower you with my kisses...(and starts to kiss all over her tummy)
Sw:(starts laughing) What are you doing, Sanskaar..Your beard is tickling me..(continues laughing)Ok my dear wife..(stops kissing and sits up facing Swara ) I can place a kiss on your cheek na..
And then he gave a sweet kiss on her cheek. But then looking at his wife's glowing face, his face turned romantice.
Sa: No..It's not enough..
Then he started nuzzling her neck side.
Sw:(laughs) Stop it Sanskaar...(slaps lightly on his face) And finish off your work soon..I need to sleep..
Sa: Wait... I want to give one more kiss..
Sanskaar raised his face, softly sucked in her lips and she closed her eyes. He caressed her cheek with one hand and the other hand stroked her arm. He deepened the kiss and put his tongue inside and she sucked it with her mouth. He caressed neck with one hand and laid her down on the bed gently. He buried his face into her neck and rubbed his lips along its side. She murmured his name and her hands clutched on the back of his night t-shirt , squirming in his arms. Sanskaar kissed her cheeks and forehead again. He whispered in her ears.."I love you Swara.." and touched her round belly and stroked it..''And I love you too my little baby.."
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After 2 and a half months :
Swara was sitting in the hall with Sanskaar, Ayaan and Navya, all were watching T.V. Sanskaar and Swara were sitting close to each other on the sofa. He had put his arm around her shoulder. Ayaan and Navya were sitting on the floor in front of them. Since they couldn't notice, Sanskaar started to nuzzle her face and neck. Swara gave a nice pinch on his arm.
Sa:Ouch!!
The kids turned backwards.
Sw: What happened, Papa..?
Sa:Err..a mosquito bit me...
Na:(giggles) We know who that mosquito is..(looks at Swara )
Sw: (widens her eyes) Navyaaa...!! You are so naughty now-a-days..Aaarrrgghhh...
Suddenly Swara clutched her belly with a painful expression
Sa: What happened, Swara ..?(concerned)
Sw: It's paining...Ouch!!(closes her eyes)Sanskaar, do something...Aaaghh...
Sa: Maaa...Swara is having some pain..
Annapurna came running from the pujaroom where she was praying.
An: Sanskaar..Oh no..Let us take her to the hospital..
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Life line Hospital, Kolkata :
The Maheshwaris were waiting anxiously in a corridor. Sanskaar was standing at the window and praying inside his mind for his baby and his Swara. Ayaan noticed him and he nudged Navya who was sitting beside him.
Ay: Look at Papa..
Na: He is tensed about our Mumma and the baby..
Ay: Hmm..Let's go to him..We will try to cheer him up...
Na: O.k..
Ayaan and Navya walked to him.
Na:(slowly) Papa...
Sa:(turns and asks slowly) What happened, beta..?
Ay:(smiling) Papa..Don't worry..God will take care of everything..
Na:(cheerfully) Yes, Papa..Mumma always says that God will take care of our every worry..
Sa:(smiles and puts a hand around shoulder of each)Thank you my sweet hearts..
Suddenly the Nurse came out of the operation theatre. Annapurna asked her.
An: Is everything alright..?
Nurse(smiles): Everything is alright. The mother and the baby, both are fine. There's nothing to worry..
Sa:(goes to her)Thank you...Thank you very much..(tears of happiness in his eyes)
Na: Mr. Maheshwari, It's a baby girl..
Sa:What..?!!(excited)
Sanskaar turned around and looked at his family. Everyone's face shone with happiness. Ayaan and Navya hugged each other and jumped in excitement. Sanskaar hugged Annapurna.
Na: It's a girl..It's a girl..
Ay: I have got one more sister..Yayyy...
Nurse: After sometime we will shift them to a room and then you all can meet both of them.
Sa: Ok..(smiles)
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Later, Annapurna, Sanskaar and the kids walked into the room. Swara was lying on her bed with a sweet smile on her exhausted face.
Sa: Swara..(smiles) How are you feeling now..?
Sw: I am alright..(smiles)
The kids went closer, and kissed her cheeks.
Ay: Mumma, where is the baby..?
Sw: There..(indicates a cradle on the other side of her bed)
Sanskaar got up and went to the other side. Their little daughter was lying wrapped in white cotton cloth. Its little eyes were tightly shut. Sanskaar was delighted to see the cute little thing. He took it in his arms and his eyes filled with tears of happiness. He kissed its forehead and it squirmed cutely. He smiled wider and placed it into Annapurna's arms. Annapurna laughed seeing its cute face and held it closer to her heart. Then Sanskaar bent and took Ayaan and Navya in his arms and kissed their cheeks one by one. He was feeling the utmost joy in a lifetime, being the proud father of three cute little kids.
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EPILOGUE

Five Years Later:
Ayaan and Navya were 12 years old now. They were sitting down and doing their homework in their room when little Anaya came running into the room. Her lovely eyes stared at both her elder brother and sister who were doing their work seriously.
An: Ayaan bhaiyya, Navya didii..Please play with me na..Look here..I have brought my ball with me..
Navya and Ayaan looked at each other and smiled.
Ay: Annu baby..Is Mumma somewhere around..?
Na: If she sees us playing with you now, she will scold us. We have so much homework to do na..
An: No No..She is down in the kitchen with Daadimaa..
Ay: Ok then..Come Navya..Let's play with Annu.
The brother and the two sisters began to play now with the ball. They loved playing with their darling sister. They could never say "No" to Anaya. She was the apple of their eyes.
Just then Swara came storming inside the room from somewhere.
Sw: What is going on here..?(stern look)
The kids stopped playing abruptly. She narrowed her eyes and glared playfully at little Anaya.
Sw: Annu..Why are you disturbing your bhaiyya and didii..?They have a lot of work to do..
An: Sorry Mummaa..But I have no work to do..(pouts innocently)
Na: Mumma..I will get her colors and coloring book. Let her do it sitting here.
Before she could complete Ayaan searched the room and came up with them. Swara loved the way Navya and Ayaan always took care of their little sister.
Ay: Annu..You sit down with us and do the coloring work ok.
Sw: Annu..Promise me that you will do your work without disturbing bhaiyya and didi.
An: Promise Mumma..
Swara smiled at them and she left the room. Just as she was walking along the corridor, a pair of arms hugged her from behind.
Sw: (blushing) Sanskaar..
Sa: My wifey never misses me these days. She is always busy taking care of the whole house, Maa and the kids. Not a glance at her handsome husband.
Sw: It's nothing like that Sanskaar. You know that I love you.
Sanskaar pulled her inside his room and locked the door. He turned her around and hugged her tightly. He nuzzled her earlobe and whispered "You have become more beautiful now a days. I never knew you could look even prettier than you were before. "
Sw: (blushes) Stop making fun of me, Sanskaar..
Sa: (huskily) No..I noticed it while we were having dinner. And I just wanted to kiss you then and there. But I had to control my urge. Now I won't leave you..
He sucked her lips with much need and she surrendered herself to his passion. She hugged him around his waist and dug her fingernails into his skin at the back. Sanskaar brought his hand to her navel and clutched the pleats of her sari pulled it outside in a swift move. The sari fell down in a second and he scooped her up in his sturdy arms. Within seconds she was on the bed and he flopped down upon her petite body which was covered only by the orange blouse and her orange petticoat. He buried his face into her neck and nibbled the skin there. Swara was squirming and moaning below him and it only aggravated his manly vigor. He unhooked the blouse and threw it aside. The lacy inner which she was wearing was transparent and he let it be. He moved down and trailed kisses along her tummy, while his one hand loosened the string of her petticoat. She now lay in her lacy and transparent set of orange coloured lingerie and Sanskaar admired her beautiful body. He hugged her and continued exciting her by caressing and kissing all over her body. After some time, he pulled off her remaining clothing. As they made love with each other, rhythmic thrusts led into non-rhythmic moans and gasps. Swara and Sanskaar reached the peak of excitement. She was overwhelmed and pulled him towards her to hug him tightly. Sanskaar whispered into her ears "You will never cease to excite me Swara..My hot wifey", to which she smiled widely and kissed his lips to silence him.
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So this was the epilogue..
Hope that all of you liked it..😃
Love,
Naina😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow part 5 is so awesome...
So sanskar don't remember anything...
Loved swasan moments with kids...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
And a happiley ever after.
It was a wonderful story and loved the way the story ended.
Keep writing dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Naina
Awesome update..
So loved sanskar saying baby you are hitting your papa..very bad..
Cuteness overloaded..
btw my name is Shreya
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic SS !!!!
Loved the epilogue 😳
Keep writing more 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Suprb update naina.
Lvd it.. Bt really sad it got ended...😭😭

Thnk u so much dear 4 d pm 4 all parts...😛

Lvd d way sanskar cared swara in her pregnency period.
Again 1 more girl..
Navya and ayan s vry cute n matured..
Was awsum how dey assured a tensed sanskar..
Lvd d family moment... Last part was awesum...😊

Coming 2 epilouge, both navya n ayan is pamperin their little sister a lot. For her dey wil do everythng.. So cute n wow momnt.. Finally swasan romance... 😛😛😛

Feelin really sad dat d ss cum 2 end..lvd d story vry much even though know d story already.. U added some more essense in it n it became so fantastic dear...lvd it..👏

Do continue with your other works...👏👏

Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago

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