Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Nimmi.. loved the third part. The connection between SwaSan and the mock salute really brought a smile.

Dragon Dadi🤣 You go Girl!!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update

eagerly waiting to read about their next meeting.

Story is going awesome

Originally posted by: Jamina96

Awesome dear
PM me when you update

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Dragon Dadi 🤣

Probably would've been more of a cruel punishment if he had let Laksh marry into that family! 😆

He recognised Swara's voice. 😳

His mixed emotions when Laksh hugged him, and his panic when he saw Sujata..

Swara's concern for him- Rab ne bana di jodi

Really nicely written 😃

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

What is this sanskar??

U liked both Swara and ragini...

tough his target is Swara he is also with ragini...

Wah Wah!!

So Swara has heard about SAnkar for lucky!!!

Great..

I really wanna see SwaSan friendship next...

imagining how Swara will handle this Sanskar..

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Lol dragon Dadi 🤣 This was too funny 😆
He recognised Swara's voice aww 😳 They have a connection ❤️
Lovely update Nimmi (right?) 👏
Btw i'm Preet 😆

Originally posted by: JazzyM

My dear ... you are portraying wonderful emotions, circumstances in your update...I'm really really astounded.

For once, Laksya has been brought into character in a wise manner...his pain and happiness seeing Saksnkaar...very very brotherly...siblings in arms.

In a way, even though Sanskaar was behaving like a child or mad person...his thoughts of the dragon grannny, about this duppata wali friend...it all sounds very youngish...it gives a kind of feeling that the guy who has been portrayed as 'the legendary Sanskaar' is actually a young man...this I really appreciate...Laksya and Sanskaar are of same age but somehow it has been made to feel as if Sanskaar is more mature, saintly ...come on give the guy some space...you gave him that...👏

For me, reading the below mentioned line, made me gruff, I walked into a meeting with a smile on my face... I wonder what my leadership team thought of me... 😲

And he really should let Laksh be part of this mad hatter family of saintly young sisters and Satan's mommy for granny.

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

WoW dear!!! U hv gotta winner here! A very very interesting read! Especially the subtle humor laced dialogues are the cherry on top! And those dragon daadi lines just cracked me up! 😆

Grt work! Do continue soon and plz do PM me! 😳

- luv Niki

Originally posted by: lucky.m

ohh ..I love it..All 3 parts in a go ..👏

Your title pulled me here ..anything to do with sanskaar u know😳 😆

but this is awesome..It's like giving a entire new perspective to the whole drama ..from POV of sanskaar which makes it even more intriguing..The 3rd part its like I can imagine the scene I watched in serial but it feels like different version

I will stop here I think I am going round round .😆.but reminds me of midnight Sun ( Twilight From edwards POV) ..Could nt help mentioining it ..

Ok In short cant wait for coming parts..to peep more in sanky's mind ofcourse when heart comes into picture ..I am sure it gonna be like ..WOW

Grt Job👏 ..Keep the chronicles coming👍🏼