A Sanskaar OS 'Emptiness'

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Very nicely described Purbi, took me back straightaway to the pain I felt watching today's epi and my Sansku 😭. Some great touches like the handkerchief! Good work!

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

nice os
it was emotional

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

It was awesome...The feel was good...

Plz cont and complete with a happy ending. ...

If ur continuing do pm me...

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Really nice and descriptive..
Do write more.

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Purbi

@Purbishona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: RAONE8
Nice OS😃

thank you..

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hi dear .
Its Harshada .
Awesome os.
Loved it .
Very well written .
I loved the dialogues ...they were seriously too good.
Especially to that handkerchief ..." you are too unlucky like me ...ab to swara teri kismat me bhi nahi "
And
" In papers she will become Swara gadodiya but for me she will always be Swara sanskar Maheshwari till my last breath "
It was lovely reading it.
Continue with swara's POV

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Hi Purbi dear.😊
Beautiful OS dear.👏 Loved Sanskar's dialogues.😳 Felt really sad for him.😭

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Purbi

@Purbishona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Hi dear .
Its Harshada .
Awesome os.
Loved it .
Very well written .
I loved the dialogues ...they were seriously too good.
Especially to that handkerchief ..." you are too unlucky like me ...ab to swara teri kismat me bhi nahi "
And
" In papers she will become Swara gadodiya but for me she will always be Swara sanskar Maheshwari till my last breath "
It was lovely reading it.
Continue with swara's POV