A Sanskaar OS 'Emptiness'

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys, this is Purbi.😊
.I am a big SwaSan fan.. It is my first OS on this forum.. So, the story starts after Swara left mm like yest. Epi.. SORRY, for typo and grammatical mistakes..
so, here it goes..

EMPTINESS


He was standing in front of their room..But it was no more their room! It is only his now..He entered inside and watched the empty bed, recalling their moments or only his!

He was so used to it, watching Swara sitting in that bed and dropping her precious tears..

UNCONSCIOUSLY, his hand went into his pocket for handkerchief.. He found one. But, There is nobody to use it..

He laughed on his fate and told to the handkerchief "You are too unlucky like me, ab to Swara tere kismat me bhi nahi hai"

Some teardrops crossed the boundary of his eyes and fell on the hanky.. He remembered this was the same hanky he used to remove Swara's tears on her mehendi night..At last he sighes and thought
" Our tears became one, but we could not"

He put it on table and went towards thd cupboard to change.. As soon as he opened it he looked at the empty hangers on which Swara's dresses were kept before..

He closed it with a thud! He felt his throat was chocked and he may breakdown at any moment..He watched the whole empty room with horror and felt that the emptiness would engulf him.. He felt like a Bird in a Cage! Breathing heavily finally he stormed out of the room..
He needed peacet but can't find a little..He came to the garden and looked at the twinkling stars..

"Congratulations! You are finally all alone and empty Sanskaar Maheswari. "
he laughed sarcastically..

"You deserve it..You are a stupid, you did the same mistake by falling in LOVE again.. Now you have to pay for it rest of your life" said a lookalike Sanskaar to him..

Sanskaar- I know it.. No need to remind me..

Another Sanskaar - Of course you need, why are you crying then?

S- Bcoz I need to cry..

AS- You can't become weak for that girl who does not love you..

S- Crying is not a sign of weakness! Only strong persons have the courage to cry.. So, don't lecture me.

AS- Oh yes! You only want lectures from Swara.

S- Bcoz I love her and she has the right to give lectures being my wife (smiles)

AS- No more wife bro! She is going to divorce you..

S- So what? After signing those papers my love would not die.. I will love her all my life. My love is enough for both of us.. In papers she will become Swara Gadodia again, but for me in my heart she will be always SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESWARI till my last breath.

The imaginary Sanskaar vanished in air...

Sach hai ki dil to dukha hai,
humne magar socha hai,
dil ko hai gam kyun,
aankh hai nam kyun,
hona hi tha jo hua hai,
iss baat ko jane bhi do,
jiska nishaan kal ho na hoo..


How was it??
Plz, hit like buttons and give ur valuable comments.. And tell me should I continue to write stories..?ALL types of comments are acceptable.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice os dear... you are talented.. I like sanskar's dialogues... I feel sad for him.. very good job... write more...
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Nice OS dear.😳 Waiting for your OSs😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice 👏 write about Swara's feelings too 😊
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Superb yaar..seriously u SHOULD write more..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshsriti

very nice os dear... you are talented.. I like sanskar's dialogues... I feel sad for him.. very good job... write more...


Thanks dear, I will write about Swara's pov.. But still confused about Swara's feelings..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pressu

Nice OS dear.😳Waiting for your OSs😉


Thank you dear 😳 I will surely write more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: missfilmy

very nice👏write about Swara's feelings too😊


Thank you for your appreciation dear.. I will write about Swara's feelings 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -damon-

Superb yaar..seriously u SHOULD write more..!!


Thanks dear.. Surely I will write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing work Purbi...
loved it...

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