SwaSan OS:UNSPOKEN - Page 6

Originally posted by: swa291

'Even when she acknowledges that I'm her sole support and her best friend..she still has never tried to return the favour Kavi. Defend me yes. But that she does for everybody.
I am still everybody to her Kavi. I am nobody. Yet we are married. Told you its funny.

This i guess describe how swara sees him now perfecy. Atleast i feel so

Good job dear

Keep writing

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

u mde m cry
beautifully penned snaskaar's pov
it was emotional

Originally posted by: SupriyaG96

Fabulous and outstanding write up ⭐️
Sanskaar's pain and emotions all in the letter is potrayed brilliantlybrilliantly 😳 😳 👍🏼
Loved the last para 😃
Thanks for the PM 😳

Originally posted by: anu91

Oh god the letter was so painfull. ...

Loved it so much. ...

If possible do write with confession...

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Wowww Medhaa..Lovely OS..👏
Very touching and heart wrenching words 😭 Poor Sanskaar..He had no one to share his pain, and so he was pouring out his woes to Kavita.😲
But I was happy in the end, when I came to know that Swara was seeing the letter after 3 years of happy marriage. ❤️ Lucky Sanskaar, he got the love of his life
Thank you Medha for such a brilliant piece of writing🤗

Originally posted by: rerose

Wow ,it was a fantabulous OS after reading it now I am remaining Unspoken u made me speechless through ur OS ,lovely job👏

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Eeehhh.. This was a sheer treat to my eyes.. I so wish, Sanskar would say all these to Swara atleast once.. Please Cvs.. U need to tell tht woman,that in order to give happiness to everyone around her,She is ruining the very foundation of the man who loves her with all his being !

Keep writing please :)

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Hey medha :) u can call me shab .

I love to read ur wrk .and it is my duty to leave a comment orelse m the one who is restless :P *selfish *

TBH your wrls makes me comment.and all credit goes to ur beautiful writing

And the couplet. Well I have a weird habit ? Of writing these Urdu poetry.i Love writing POV poems ;)

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

Absolutely breathtaking Medha!

Finally got around to reading this & well I'll just say, out of all your works I've read till date, this IS my favorite! ❤️ The journal entry was so brutally shattering, I've no words. You know you are alone when there is nobody to listen to you & care for your feelings & you have to take solace in writing to someone who understands you but is dead. Sanskaar is going exactly through that phase. This is SO close to canon, I can't even. No words, this is overwhelming.

My favorite bits-

I am still everybody to her Kavi. I am nobody. Yet we are married. Told you its funny.

^ That was brutal Medha. I am sure it'll pierce Swara's heart if she reads it even NOW. It certainly did to me.

I told you, both the sisters need psychiatric therapy. One is a murderer, another has a built in guilt and greatness complex.

This made me chuckle & I was like, In yo face Swara! 😆

I am no longer a boy. I wanted to take her responsibility and see that I never caused those tears in her eyes. See that even if they were, I would be there to wipe them away. That she would let me. I wanted her to lean on me, when she needed a shoulder. I wanted to make her smile. I wanted us to be happy together.

^ Awww Sanskaar 💔 Let him be your shore Swara. The guy asks for nothing in return, please for godsake give him a chance!

But Kavi, no matter how much I love her..and want to make her happy, she does not love me. I am nothing but a symbol. She does not agree with my way of doing things..calls them heinous. Of course, she never gets things done when she does them her way...but that useless righteous path is infinitely preferable to Swara. My ways of survival in the hungry world outside, is certainly a depraved concept to her. Her utopia of course, should be the perfect fairyland...and its rules of course would have taken me to the heights of success. They would of course, have prevented the sadness which befell her. God.

^ SO EFFING TRUE! Good Lord, Swara & her utopia :/ Sometimes she's so contradicting. Scoffing at Sanskaar's twisted ways while going along a whole fake murder twisty plot to prove Ragini's crimes. Err you bundle of contradictions :/ I am just a symbol to her broke my heart. Love the sarcastic tone in this para ⭐️

I think if I continue listing my favorite parts any further, I might just post the whole OS again 😆😳 That bit about Swara being the most selfish, OHMYGOD truer words have NEVER been spoken. All hail Medha!

I totally love the twist at the end about them being happily married for 3 years. That made me sob a little, I'll be honest with happiness ofcourse :P Thank god & you for small mercies 😆

You're probably my favorite writer on the forum along with Viji. Keep up the brilliance girl ⭐️❤️

Originally posted by: rithika2015

superb os medha.. big hug for this wonderful piece of work..🤗

u wrote what exactly we feel while watching sanskaar in pain. all those were simple and powerful. just loved it to bits. i had tears by the time i came to the end of the one shot.

ohh.. poor soul he cant share his pain with any one else too..so he was sharing with kavita..😭

and the end made me happy again.

swasan were happy for 3 long years and no hurting after that and so no more entries after that.

i hope some day either sansku or someone in show should say all these things to swara devi. she really needs to get a reality check of what she is doing to sansku. and im pretty sure that sanskaar himself will give that to her.

thanks for the pm dr..

keep writing more..