SwaSan OS New Beginning - Page 6

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Awesome OS,well written loved it a lot👏👏

Originally posted by: Kelly08

Really loved it ..best thing about ur OS u really sketched their character .swara acceptance wasn't hasty one .at this stage it's obvio she is confused whether it's love . Will u b making continuation of this OS ??

Originally posted by: Fairy...

Nyc os

Originally posted by: SanaHolic

lovely Os
loved it
thnkss 4 pm
and srry 4 late reply

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Beautiful os

Originally posted by: .IPKKND.

🤗👏🥳

Originally posted by: achu2610

Nice OS 👏

Originally posted by: Nehageet.

Nice dear

Originally posted by: rithika2015

this is really and awesome os dear..

i started reading it in my class and it just lifted up my mood..

the end of it was awesome.. u perfectly showed the position of swara in it..

i really liked how she explained him that she is not totally in love with him but even cant stay away from him and wanted some time for their relation.

i hope the swara in the show also to be sensible like this but no cvs will never show that and always show her blaming and using sanskaar with her mahaanta crap..

keep writing more and more and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: sneharay

Very nicely written.. 👍🏼