Swasan ff - the judgement part 15 on pg 28 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
That's awesone..
Nakalchi bandar..

And the pinch wali fight was too good..
Thank you for the PM>..
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
amazing update
I will go with options 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
thank you for the PM..nice update..👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Swasan scene was cute...
Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Hey guys I also have question for all of u

1)Do u want lucky negative along with rags in this ff?
Or
2)u want him to be positive and I want to pair up him with Komal?
Or
3)u want him positive also and also single
or
4)u want him to be negative but independent of rags
Pls comment and tell me


Will go for optn 2 but just a suggestion : I want lucky to be negative n then to realize what he is doing.. After that komal n Lucky's love angl !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Ragini 😡 I hope she won't be able to harm anyone.
SwaSan were so cute 😳 Their lovely nok-jhoks 😆
Precap, poor Komal She was not able to save her marriage 😲
Update soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Nice update
I ll go for option 2
Make sure that laksh realise his mistakes nd also ragini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Part 8

The family entered the bus. Sanskar went at the last and sat in the corner,he was any ways not interested in this picnic. Swara sat with dida. Ragini sat with lakshay which irritated him.
Dida- swara ja sanskar k saath Beth. Mere saath Tera dadi bethega Dada ji nahi aaye na
Swara reluctantly got up and sat beside sanskar
Bus started moving towards the destination, swara was bored.
Swara- sanskar Mai bore ho rahi hun
Sanskar - toh Mai kya karun swara? Pls Mai vaise bhi irritated hun. Mere Ghar wale kyun yeh baat nahi samaj saktein ki hum dono kabhi ek nahi hongey. I mean u don't love me par phir bhi zabardasti yeh rishta bachana chahtein hai. Aur upar sai yeh Komal ufff Har Jajah pahauch jati hai bade papa ko Behlla phusla liya hai. Aur tumhari behn ek no ki Pagal hai Pagal Aur Mera bhai bhi uske saath reh kar satak gaya hai.
Swara- sanskar just relax Tum itni stress kyun ke rahe ho?
Sanskar- patah nahi swara par kuch bohat galat honey wala hai. Mughe bohat bechaini ho rahi hai. I just hope yeh sab khatam ho Jaye.
Swara didn't know why but she didn't wanted it to be over. She wanted to be with him, always and forever.
Sanskar- swara? Swara? Mai kabse boltein ja raha hun Aur Tum ho ki...
Dp- chalo hum sab pahauch Gayye
Everyone got down to witness a beautiful cliff, it was the end. Nothing was there beyond it except the blue sky. It was green fully. There were benches to sit.
Pari- chalo hum San badminton kheltein hai
Adarsh - haan boys vs girls
Swasan Ragya joined them
Lakshay and adarsh started putting the net

Dp and Komal sat on the bench. They were seeing Swasan fighting for a badminton. Both of them wanted the blue one. They smiled looking at them.
Dp- beta Tum itni jatan sai yeh shadi kyun bachana chahti ho? Jis Tarah sai Tum humari madad kar rahi ho yeh sirf apne career k liye toh nahi ho sakta?
Komal- aapko kyun lagta hai ki mai sirf swara Aur sanskar ki councillor kyun hun? Divorce to laksh Aur ragini ka bhi ho raha hai par court nai mughe unko councillor nahi banaya kyun? Kyunki court janta hai ki mai shadi bachane Mai believe karti hun issiliye unhi cases Mai court mughe appoint karta hai jisko bachnai ki koi umeed ho
Dp- yeh mere sawaal ka jawab nahi hai beta khair nahi batana chahti toh thik hai, jao Tum bhi khelo
Dp stood from the bench to join the ram when he felt a tug on his finger. Komal stopped him
Komal- Maine phone pai Kahan tha na ki Maine apnai career Mai Har shadi bachayi hai sevaye ek k patah Hai woh ek kisski thi?
Dp shook his head indicating a no
Komal's eyes started watering and in shaky voice she replied
Meri khud ki shadi
Dp was shocked

Ap and sujata sat on the bench
Ap- patah nahi lakshay ki zindagi Kab sudhregi. Swara Aur sanskar saath Mai Kitna achhe lagtein hai. Mere lucky ka kya hoga?
Sujata - jiji?
Ap- Haan sujata samaj chuki hun Mai ki swara Aur lakshay ki Kahani khatam ho chuki hai, ab yeh baat Mai lakshay ko Kaise samjao? Dar lagta hai Kahin Mai usko kho na dun
Sujata- na jiji aap Chinta na Karon, mere sanskar ko agar swara mili hai toh bhagwan nai lakshay k liye bhi koi na koi bannai hogi jo uske saare Dard dur kardegi, jaisa swara nai mahre sanskar k kiye hai.

Dp - tumhari shadi?
Komal- Haan uncle. Haryana k ek chhote sai Gao sai hun Mai. 18 saal k hotey hi ma baap nai shaadi kardi. Mai padhna chahti thi kuch banna chahti thi, par betiyan toh bojh hoti hai. Mere pati Surjan Singh bohat achhe thai uncle kabhi apnai aap ko mugh par unhoney thopa nahi. Mughe padhaya likhaya. Par Mai unsai Aur apnai ma baap sai nafrat karne lagi thi. Gussa thi un sab se, kyunki unhoney mere saare Armaan Aur akankshayein khatam kardi. Par Mai khub padhi, aur dheere Dheere unhoney mere dil Mai ek dost ki Jagah bannai li. Mere best friend bann Gayye. Unko mere unse bhi jayada padha likhe honey sai bhi koi problem nahi thi. Apnai purey parivar k khilaf ja kar unhoney mughe support kiya. Mai unko samjhne lagi. Unke saath Rehna batein karna achha lagta tha. Mai jab councillor banni toh mughse jayada khush woh huye thai. Par Mai apni feelings ko samaj nahi payi. Samaj nahi payi ki I loved him all this while. Jab samjhi Maine unko office sai jaldi Ghar Bulaya yeh batane k liye ki I also love him. Woh jab uss din office sai laut rahein thai toh unka accident ho gaya uncle. Woh chale Gayye mughe chodh kar humesha humesha k liye. Mai apni feeling unko nahi batah payi Aur apni shadi bhi bachha nahi payi
Komal was crying now
Dp- bas beta mat roh, pls.
Komal- jab Mai swara ko dekhti hun toh usmai mughe wohi 18-20 saal ki Komal dikhti hai jo apna pyaar samaj nahi pa rahi hai. Usko sanskar ka pyaar ka patah Hai uncle par woh abhi bhi uske pyaar ko samjhi nahi Aur na hi apne pyaar ko.
Komal wiped her tears
Dp - hum inka rishta bachaa lenge beta
Komal smiled

Lakshay and ragini were playing, lakhshya was not interested so he lost
Pari and adarsh were next. Adarsh winked Pari and she dropped the shuttlecock.
Pari- arrey inhoney cheating ki
Adarsh- achha kya kiya Maine?
Pari blushed and left the field
It was Swasan turn now.
Swara- sanskar aaj toh Tum Gayye, dekhna Mai tumhe Kaise harati hun
Sanskar - dekhtein hai madam service karo
Swasan match was a long one both of them were not ready to loose. Sanskar looked at swara and noticed that she is tired. So he lost purposely.
Swara started dancing
Swara- yayyy I won I won
Sanskar smiled seeing her so happy
Sanskar(in his mind) - tumhari iss khushi k liye sau jeet kurban.
Adarsh and Pari noticed this and also noticed that swara yet again didn't noticed sanskar's gesture.
Komal noticed the same. So she decided to do something.
Komal- arrey sanskar Tum haar Gayye? Par ram uncle told me that u were a state level badminton player? Tum swara sai haar Gayye?
Sanskar was flustered
Sanskar- Haan toh state level player tha toh? Haar nahi sakta kya?
Swara looked at him she understood he lost purposely. She smiled at his cuteness.
Komal looked at her, she knew her work was done
Komal- kyun nahi sanskar, better luck next time
Sanskar relaxed
Sanskar- chalo chalo I am hungry now.
Everyone sat down to have lunch.

Precap
Swara looked at sleeping sanskar whose head was on her shoulder. She caressed his hair. She knew something was happening, but she was not sure of this weird feeling which was now bubbling inside her. Was it love? She wondered in shock.

Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Very beautiful update
Felling bad4 komal
Swara hopefully realise her love soon
Cont soon as soon as possible
Waiting

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