Swasan ff - the judgement part 15 on pg 28 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Wow..
that really nice swara to let sanksar share bed with her...
Kay Swara khud he Sanskar ke pass jati ho aur bad me yusse par gussa karti ho..

lovely update
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Wow DP, RP and Pari chupke chupke are keeping an eye on SwaSan 😆
I'm sure they will be able to save SwaSan's marriage ⭐️
Aww SwaSan sleeping on the bed
Cute update, continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Superb
Thanks for pm. Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Simply loved it..
But it was short :'(
Plz next update shd be fast..
Just can't wait..
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
It was so cute...
Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Part 6
The sun peeped into Swasan room to witness 2 love birds cooconed into each other's embrace.
Swara started stearing in her sleep and shifted more towards sanskar to escape the sunlight
Suddenly her eyes flew open and she realized that her source of warmth is none other than her husband
Swara- aaahhh
Sanskar woke with a jerk listening to her scream
Sanskar- kya hua subha subha kyun chilla Rahi ho?
Swara - Tum Kitna besharam ho. What are u doing in my side of the bed and where is the pillow wall. Disgusting chhheee
Sanskar- swara apni aakhen dangh sai kholo Aur dekho Mai tumhari side Mai nahi hun
Swara looked around to realise her position a blush rose up her cheeks
Swara - Haan toh? Issmai bhi tumhari hi galti hai Mr sanskar maheshwari
Sanskar - meri galti?
Swara - Aur nahi toh kya? Kisnai Kahan hai Kolkata ko shimla bannai ko
Sanskar - swara tumko na Mai...

Sanskar was interrupted by a knock
He closed his eyes in frustration and got up to open the door
Lucky was standing there sanskar was shocked to see him so early

Sanskar - Tum yahan iss waqt?
Lucky- mughe swara sai Akele Mai baat Karni hai
Swara got up listening to this idiotic demand of his and looked at sanskar who was standing there with painfull expressions
Sanskar - thik hai Mai bahar jaata hun
Swara was shocked and angry, here she was expecting protection from him and he is leaving. She ran towards him and held his hand for her dear life. Sanskar was shocked and looked at her.
Swara- sanskar please mat jao mughe Akele chodh kar
Swara was literally shivering and she started crying
Sanskar immediately held her and gave her side hug
Sanskar- swara relax jaisa tum chahti ho waisa hoga. Just stop crying. I am here only, with u I won't go.
Swara relaxed in his embrance and smiled
Lucky - par swara. I love u plss meri baat suno
Swara- lucky jo kehnai hai kaho sanskar k samnai
Sanskar - i am sorry lucky jaisa swara chahti hai waisa hoga I have promised her
Lucky was angry.
Lucky- swara mere Aur ragini ka divorce file ho gaya hai Aur tumhari Aur bhai ka bhi. Please uske baad hum apnai rishtein ko ek mauka denge pls
Swara - Kaunsa rishta? I don't love u any more lakshay. Jis din tumanai meri behn ka haath thama tha ussi din sai mere liye Tum sirf uskai pati ho. Tum uskai saath raho ya nahi usse mughe koi fark nahi padta. Please stop bothering me. Yeh Mera akhri faisla hai.

Sanskar was looking at swara all this while she was still clutching his arms in a deadly grip and he finally understood that she no more loves lucky. That she has moved on.

Sanskar- lucky pls agar swara sai pyaar karte ho toh respect her decision pls
Lucky - par bhai...
Suddenly lucky noticed lipstick on sanskar's neck and this made him furious and he raised his hand to slap sanskar
Swara noticed this and held his hand to stop him
Sanskar was confused he didn't know what exactly made lucky so furious
Sanskar- kya hua lucky?
Swara left lucky's hand and cluthed sanskar's arms again
Lucky- i hate u bhai. Tumne jo kiya uskai liye bhagwan bhi kabhi tumhe maaf nahi karega. I hate u
Sanskar was hurt he never expected lucky to hate him. Tears started falling from his eyes.
Lucky left the place
Sanskar- lucky meri baat sun lucky?
Just then parineeta bhabhi arrived there. Sanskar immediately wiped his tears before Pari can notice this.
Pari- Tum log jaag gaye. Achha hua get ready Hum log sab picnic pai ja Rahe hai
Sanskar- Sab log?
Parineeta - Haan
Sanskar- bhabhi Mai nahi...
Parineeta - bade papa nai Kahan hai Sanskar
Sanskar unwilling agreed
Parineeta noticed those lipstick marks and started laughing
Pari- oh toh isiliye nahi aana chahtein thai Tum?
Pari pointed towards his neck. Sanskar touched his neck to see lipstick there and Swara too noticed it
Sanskar realized why lucky reacted that way and Swara too
Pari - arrey jao jaldi tayaar ho jao
Pari went from there and Swasan looked at each other embarrassed
Swara realises that she was still holding his arms and left it and stepped back blushing
Sanskar - Mai Nahane jaata hun

And he literally ran towards the washroom
Swara looked at himand smiled but her expressions changed she was angry very angry on lucky
She thought that lucky really needs a piece of mind.she noticed those tears in sanskar eyes and her heart went out for him. She decided to talk to lucky and tell him that she and him are not together because of him not because of ragini or sanskar
She needs to make him realise his mistake. Marriage with ragini was his decision and only this decision is responsible for their break up nothing else.

Precap
Family getting ready for picnic but ragini has plans to destroy swara and sanskar


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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Amazing n lovely update..
I really love this part :
"Swara was shocked and angry, here she was expecting protection from him and he is leaving. "
Swasan scenes as always cute n lived them..
Swara developing feelings for sanskar.. !!
Curious abt next update..
Try to update asap !!
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Wah kya pyaar hain.
Laksh: creepy pyaar
Swara : confused pyaar
And
Sanskaar : maHan tyaagi pyaar.

Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome 😳
Thanks for PM 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Nice update. I loved swara's dialogue to sanskar not to go anywhere leaving her alone. I hate laksh. hw cum he try to slap his brother by seeing lipstick mark. And pari make swasan embarrass.I hate the precap ragini trying to destroy swasan.Continue soon.

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