Swasan ff - the judgement part 15 on pg 28 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice part..love sawsan scene..thx for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Woww...
That's nice...

Great
continue soon...

Thank you for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Superb
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Nice update...swara dialouge are good...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
A very well written update
Thank you for the PM

Enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Awesome Akanksha 😳
Glad Swara cleared everything with Laksh 😆 But poor Sanskar, he felt so bad seeing the way Laksh reacted
Picnic? Sounds a great idea ⭐️
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Lovely update, Picnic is a very good idea😳
Waiting of next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7
Ragini was on a trip of her own
She refused to leave lucky. She was desperate to prove that she was not wrong. Yes she agrees that she harmed people on the way but her objective was to get lakshay's love and according to her everything is fair in Love and war.
She always envied swara because her love loved her but now she envies her more because sanskar is also in love with her
Ragini ( self thought) - aisa kya hai tum mai swara kyun sab tumsai pyaar karte hai kyun? Aur lakshay unhoney humai dhoka diya humai? jo unse Kitna pyaar kartein hai, unke liye hum nai apne saare rishtein daav par laga diye par woh humai samaj hi nahi paye. Ab hum unko dikhanyenge ki kaisia lagta hai jab apna pyaar kissi Aur sai pyaar karta hai. Bohat pyaar kartein hai na aap swara sai? Par swara ab sanskar sai pyaar karti hai usko abhi tak yeh ehsaas nahi hai par jaldi ho jayega Aur woh sabko bataegi phir hum dekhunge laksh ki aap humai Kaise nahi samajtein. Aur swara hum tumhai Aur sanskar ko khushiyan denge zaroor denge par kuch dino ki. Jaisa hi tumhai tumhare pyaar ka ehsaas hoga, hum tumsai sanskar ko cheen lenge maar dalenge unhai maar dalenge. Tab tumhe patah chalega ki pyaar na pa panai ka Dard kya hota hai.
Lakshay enter disrupting her evil thoughts. He was frustrating. sanskar? His own brother? He is trying to snatched his love? Why? Aur swara? Woh sanskar ka saath kyun de rahi hai? Kahin woh bhi usse pyaar? Nahi nahi swara sirf meri ha meri.
Ragini was happy seeing him like this She could see see herself in him. She could see his restlessness and was happy.
Ragini- laksh tayaar ho jayiye humai picnic jaana hai
Laksha- pls ragini mughe Kahin nahi jaana baksh do mughe pls
Ragini- thik hai jaisa aap chahe . Lekin hum apne marriage councillor ko jhooth nahi bolenge . Hum keh denge ki iss shadi ko Inn 6 Mahino Mai apnai humare rishtein ko mauka nahi diya
Laksh - kyun kar rahi ho Tum yeh sab? I don't love u ragini Aur kabhi nahi karunga pls yeh zid chodh do pls
Ragini - soch lijiye laksh aapko hum kuch ghante k liye Akele chodein? Ya 6 Mahino baad humesha k liye?
Laksh was frustrated he got ready

Ragya got ready and went downstairs everyone was waiting for them and Swasan
Ragini- chale?
Sujata- humara bas chalta toh Kab ka tughe chalta kar deti chori
Dp- ragini yeh jo zabardasti ka rishta Tum jodna chahti ho kabhi nahi milega tumhe kuch kabhi nahi. Prayashchit karo beta khushi milegi tumko bhi Aur baki sabko bhi.
Ram- chodiye na bhaisa bhais k aage been bajane sai k hovega?yeh swara Aur sanskar Kahan reh gaye?
Ragini(self thought) - itni nafrat? Yeh sab tumhari vahjay sai hua hai Swara tumhari vahjay sai
Ap- lo aa gaye dono
Swasan were wearing casual clothes. Swara was in blue jeans and pink kurti without dupatta and sanskar was in a pink Tshirt and a blue jeans. Both were unaware that they were color coordinated.
Sujata- arrey waah ek jaisa rang
Both of them looked at each other to see that both were wearing same colors. Lakshay was fuming.
Swara- nakalchi Bandar
Sanskar pinched her on her arms and said- same pinch
Swara was fuming how dare he pinch her
Swara- sanskar Tum mughe pinch Kaise kar saktein ho?
Sanskar pinched her other arm and said - aisai
Swara - sanskar Mai tumhai chodungi nahi and she started running after him.
Sanskar ran for his life swara picked up a vase on her way to aim at him
Parineeta and Adarsh ran to stop them. They were shocked to see them like this they didn't know whether to laugh or be serious.
Swara was about to throw the vase at sanskar but dida shomi and shekhar entered at the same time along with Komal
Dida- shoru yeh kya karta hai?
Swara- dida isnai mughe pinch kiya do baar
Sanskar - dida isnai mughe Bandar Bulaya
Arre chup dono ka dono aisai Ladta hai jaisa kg Mai ho chalo ab picnic nahi jaana hai kya?
That's when Sanskaar noticed Komal
Sanskar - aap yahan?
Shekhar- arrey sanskar yeh mere dost ki beti hai use din badi Mai Milne aayai thi tab mughe patah chala Akeli hai bechari mere dost ka dehant ho gaya Aur meri family jaisi hi hai yeh toh issiliye I invited her too. I hope u don't mind?
Before sanskar Dp interrupted
Dp- arrey kaisi batein kar rahe hai shekhar ji aap humai kya dikat hogi? chaliye ab chahtein hai bahar bus kabse khadi hai
Sanskar - do minute ruko Mai shirt badal k aata hun
Sujata- arrey chore itni waqt na hai chal ab waise bhi Shyam ko toh Lautna hi hai humai farmhouse sai
Sanskar reluctantly went out with his mad house family with one more additional Pagal that is Komal
God bless me he thought

Precap
Dp- beta Tum itni jatan sai yeh shadi kyun bachana chahti ho? Jis Tarah sai Tum humari madad kar rahi ho yeh sirf apne career k liye toh nahi ho sakta?
Komal- aapko kyun lagta hai ki mai sirf swara Aur sanskar ki councillor kyun hun? Divorce to laksh Aur ragini ka bhi ho raha hai par court nai mughe unko councillor nahi banaya kyun? Kyunki court janta hai ki mai shadi bachane Mai believe karti hun issiliye unhi cases Mai court mughe appoint karta hai jisko bachnai ki koi umeed ho
Dp- yeh mere sawaal ka jawab nahi hai beta khair nahi batana chahti toh thik hai
Dp stood from the bench to join the family when he felt a tug on his finger. Komal stopped him
Komal- Maine phone pai Kahan tha na ki Maine apnai career Mai Har shadi bachayi hai sevaye ek k patah Hai woh ek kisski thi?
Dp shook his head indicating a no
Komal's eyes started watering and in shaky voice she replied
Meri khud ki shadi
Dp was shocked

Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Sach mein yeh Ragini Pagal he..
Pehle sirf voh thi pagal ab laksh bhi aagya usi category mein..

Swasan scenes was cute n funny...
Bachon ki tarah lad rhe the..

Awesome update..
Same colour n all...
Nice...😉😉

Komal bhi picnic mein..Ab toh maza aayega..

Precap seems interestin...

Dp n komal convo s interestin..

Waitin 4 nxt prt...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Hey guys I also have question for all of u
1)Do u want lucky negative along with rags in this ff?
Or
2)u want him to be positive and I want to pair up him with Komal?
Or
3)u want him positive also and also single
or
4)u want him to be negative but independent of rags
Pls comment and tell me
Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago

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