Swasan ff - the judgement part 15 on pg 28 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Hey guys I am so sorry that I am unable to update this ff my exam is on sat I will definitely update on Sunday
Pakka promise

Here is a teaser of the update
Sanskar moved towards swara and Swara stepped back, his eyes were full of passion and Swara could see that
Now she was trapped between him and the cupboard
Swara- sanskar yeh kya kar rahe ho?
Sanskar- pyaar kar raha hun I love you swara
His face was just 2 inch away from her face, she could smell the alcohol which was making him so bold
Swara - sanskar, tumnai sharab pi hai?
Sanskar- hmmm
Sanskar suddenly kissed her cheek, and started moving towards the other one to do the same
Swara- sanskar pls... Hato piche
Swara was blushing but she knew that this is not right, he is not in his senses and would regret all this in the morning
Sanskar's eyes filled up he stopped and looked in her eyes
Sanskar - why don't u love me swara? Kya Mai itna bura hun ?


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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Wow..superb teaser ⭐️
All the best for ur exams.. 👍🏼
Please pm me when u next update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Superb !!
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Best wishes for exam dear. ...
Awesome teaser...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 9

After lunch everyone was tired.
Dp- chalo ab chahtein hai, Shyam ho gayi hai andhera ho jayega toh safe nahi rahega
Sanskar- Haan thik hai bade papa
Everyone got into the bus. Swara unlike the last time very comfortably went and sat with Sanskar. Lakshay looked at them. He was realising that he is losing swara. Ragini looked at him with a smirk. She wanted him to realise how she felt when he rejected her love. Komal noticed this. Dp told her about Ragya too. He told her what ragini did and he told her that Lakshya is heartbroken. But Dp didn't know one thing which Komal realised that lakshay still wants Swara. His eyes has that passion to possess her. This is wrong she thought and she started thinking how to stop this. The bus started moving. Swasan slept. Suddenly swara woke up because sanskar's head fell on her shoulder. She smiled and adjusted herself to make him comfortable.
Swara looked at sleeping sanskar whose head was on her shoulder. She caressed his hair. She knew something was happening, but she was not sure of this weird feeling which was now bubbling inside her. Was it love? She wondered in shock.
The bus stopped and sanskar woke up to realise his position. He looked up to see swara in deep thoughts.
Sanskar- sorry swara, tumanai uthaya kyun nahi?
Swara came out from her thoughts and looked at him.
Swara- Tum itnai Abram sai soh rahe thai na isiliye socha ki na uthaya
Sanskar smiled at her
Sanskar- chalein
Swara - Haan chalo
They both got down
Swasan were the last one to get down
Sanskar - swara tum chalo Mai samaan Lata hun
Swara - ok
Sanskar started unloading his and swara's bags from the bus.
Swara was getting inside the house when lakshay blocked her way.
Swara got scared
Swara - lakshay pls leave my way
Lakshay- i love u swara. Why are u doing this to me? Meri kya galti hai Swara? Tumnai ragini ko bhi maaf kardiya phir mughe kyun nahi?
Lakshay was crying and Swara immediately felt bad for him. He was her friend afterall.
Swara- lakshay Mai tumsai Naraz nahi hun. Par Mai tumhari zindagi Mai wapas nahi aa sakti. Mai tumsai pyaar nahi karti lakshay. Tum merey dost ho lucky pls. I forgave you for everything but now the situation is different and my feelings for u is also different. I don't feel the same about u.
Lakshay- par kyun swara? Yeh sab bhai k wahjah sai hai na. I hate him. I hate him.
Swara- nahi lucky pls. Your brother loves u don't say that to him. His heart breaks everytime u say that to him. Aur lucky ragini bhi yehi kehti thi ki uski behn k wahjah se usko uska pyaar nahi mila par woh galat thi lucky usko uska pyaar isiliye nahi mila kyunki Tum ussai pyaar nahi kartein thai. Waise hi lucky I also don't love u now. Haan par dosti ho sakti hai
Swara forwarded her hand towards him for a handshake.
Lakshay smiled through his tears. He finally understood swara's position. He lost her as his lover. He looked at her hand and immediately grabbed it for a handshake. He can't loose a friend like her. Both of them were crying and smiling at the same time. Lakshay gave her a friendly hug and Swara reciprocated.
Komal looked at them. Her respect for lakshay increased. It's not easy to let go your love but he was brave enough to do that. She left both the freinds alone and went inside her room. She stopped to listen there communication, she thought lucky would pressure swara to accept him and she wanted to protect swara. But lakshay was mature enough to let go.

But there was someone else who saw them together and was not happy. It was sanskar. His timing was horribly wrong. He just saw them hugging and missed their conversation. He thought they are back together. He left the luggage near the stairs and went away crying.


Precap
Sanskar moved towards swara and Swara stepped back, his eyes were full of passion and Swara could see that
Now she was trapped between him and the cupboard
Swara- sanskar yeh kya kar rahe ho?
Sanskar- pyaar kar raha hun I love you swara
His face was just 2 inch away from her face, she could smell the alcohol which was making him so bold
Swara - sanskar, tumnai sharab pi hai?
Sanskar- hmmm
Sanskar suddenly kissed her cheek, and started moving towards the other one to do the same
Swara- sanskar pls... Hato piche
Swara was blushing but she knew that this is not right, he is not in his senses and would regret all this in the morning
Sanskar's eyes filled up he stopped and looked in her eyes
Sanskar - why don't u love me swara? Kya Mai itna bura hun ?

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
well written...can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Nice update
Sanskar always wrong timing
But no pblm swara ll handle it
Loved it
Thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Nice update.
Lucky is mature here.

Sanskaar timing was horribly bad.
I really felt bad fr Sanky in the precautions.

Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Superb
Precap is interesting can't wait for swara'a answer
Continue soon
Thank for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
nice update dear...eagerly waiting for the next chapter...👏

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