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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

It was a lovely story. I enjoyed reading it. Please do continue writing stories. Thank you for the PM.

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

That was some really marvelous work 👏 I truly liked the idea of swara accepting her love before the entire family just like sanskaar did 😳

The lines on Earth signs are so true and made me love sanskaar a bit more since they are so fitting for him. I am an earth sign too, so naturally liked all the tareef 😆

And now I am sad that this series is over. I hope you write more stories. Love your work and the amount of hard work and research you put in your stories is definitely commendable.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Viji,👍🏼

First of all i'm a bit angry...you PMed me and gave no link to this whatsoever. errr..why?

I joined India Forums, when i was in college, sometime during early 2012...my profile tells me, its January 2012; when I used to be a huge fan of Arnav and Khushi. Since then, I have briefly joined the D3 forum for another magical couple Swayam and sharon...and for the rhythm of dance, because thats my passion when I'm off work as a CA. From 2012-2015, for three years, this forum has been a part and parcel of my leisure..giving me free rein to continue freely with my creative side and to exult as the reader in me finds new stories to read everyday. Of course its also like having friends...because me being an only child and introvertish, there has not been a lot of those.

I have read a lot of stories by various writers; some of them could and should have been published and would have been well-admired But for whatever my humble opinion is worth, I think you managed to, in my eyes, surpass them with regard to this OS series.

Your thought process was certainly intriguing, yet the only thing which for me, has stood out most starkly throughout the series...is the art of writing. there is something very rhythmic about the way you write...its rather like a strain of one of Chopin's Nocturnes.

No matter what you write after this...and no matter whether i read any better stories in this forum in future, I will always remember that you were the one single writer in this forum, who has the most balance in their writings. Its a rare quality, so hold on to it...and use it. Its your greatest strength.

The plot and its execution, was brilliant, no doubt, but that we readers come across everyday.You wrote your prose in a poetic way---thats the best compliment I can give you.

and yes..me being a Virgo...I could relate to another typical virgo really well here. and the old love...young in spirit, when the boyishness had not gone out of the person, and the sudden. brutal hit which made him grow up...the memories and the moving on..and the final reception of the mature love, you said it all.👏

love---

Medha.

Edited by medhasarkar - 9 years ago

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Cintila

@Cintila

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Viji..🤗 you're back !! It's an absolute pleasure to read your stories. You write sooo beautifully. There's a perfect mix of everything in your stories. I loved loved loved this one. I could picture sanskaar's face when swara declared she loved him😳. Also, I loved the flashback part too. You described sanskaar's personality perfectly. Not only your stories but also the way that you write, the words that you use...everything is just soo right. It's perfect. Always.

I loved this os. Though I'm sad the series is over. Looking forward to reading more of your amazing works. Oh and thanks a lot for the pm😃😳

Edited by Cintila - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Viii 🤗The real pleasure I felt in reading this was tinged with sadness that your series has ended- and I can't read more of it! However, it'll make me eagerly await yet more from you so there's such positivity there 😊.

As I've said time and again, the whole concept of this series really appeals to me and your execution of it has been pristine. It delves so deep into the characters, you genuinely see them totally shape right before your eyes and then it all just falls in to place with perfect rhythm.

To me,a fantastic writer, feels their characters and the events in that sense are somewhat redundant although of course the events unfolding are the real gloss, the absence of which relegates even a wonderfully written story to merely good. So it works to me- all entwined and you always manage to nail it with your stories.

As an Earth sign and a Virgo to boot, I have always related the most to Sanskaar from all the characters in this show and I absolutely loved how you described his growth from his earlier happy days with Kavita to when he stood, strong and unwavering with Swara, even if it was against his beloved Badi Ma. Us earth signs do have that implacable practicality I think and despite however events around us shift, we try to stay grounded. Here, I felt that come from Sanskaar but without making him lose any of the passion and depth he is capable of.

Once again, the whole series is pure class for me and thank you for giving it to us 😃

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

The conclusion...the earth portion was very earthly.

The calmness of mother earth, smothered the raging fire...that's my take...AP and Sanskaar were raging fires...Swara with her down to earth attitude brought the whole drama to a smooth conclusion...

Loved how you made DP equate Sanskaar to himself...that was a superb compliment.

Thank you for this wonderfully crafted OS series...

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Prionti26

@Prionti26

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awesome 👏👏👏

You are a amazing writer you feel the characters and the events unfolding are the real gloss, the absence of which relegates even a wonderfully written story to merely good.