SWASAN - SECOND CHANCE {UPDATED}

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HERE IS THE INDEX SO YOU DONT GET LOST IN ALL THE COMMENTS :

PART 1 - PAGE 1 ( BELOW THIS )
PART 2 - PAGE 3


HELLO EVERYONE MISS-SWASAN AKA. ZAINAB HERE. I WAS BORED SO I WROTE A SHORT STORY ABOUT SWASAN BECAUSE THEY ARE TOO FREAKIN CUTE,


SO WE ALL HEARD THE RUMORS ABOUT HOW RAGINI TRUTH WITH BE REVEALED AND ALL THAT SMULA SO THIS IS AFTER ALL THE STABBING IS DONE AND ALL THE DRAMA...

SWASAN ROOM ...

RAGINI TRUTH WAS OUT SO THAT MEANS SHE WAS OUT AS WELL. SWARA WAS PACKING HER STUFF AND WHILE SHE WAS PACKING SHE THOUGHT ABOUT HOW THE HOUSE SHE WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE HELD SO MUCH OF HER MEMORIES. HARSH CRUEL ONES THAN ON THE OTHER SIDE HAPPY JOYFUL ONES. HER MISSION WAS ACCOMPLISHED FINALLY SHE CAN GO BACK HOME.

SUDDENLY THE DOORS OPENED AND IT REVEALED SANSKAR... ( THE GUY THAT WAS WITH HER IN THE DARKEST TIMES, HER BEST FRIEND, HER STRENGTH, HER WEIRDO, HER GENTLEMEN SHE COULD GO ON FOREVER, BUT THE LIST STOPPED BEFORE IT GOT TO HER LOVER BECAUSE THAT IS ALL THAT HE WAS FOR HER EVERYTHING BUT A LOVER) BUT THAN AGAIN WHAT DOES SHE KNOW ABOUT LOVE

SANSKAR LOOKED AT HER LOST IN HER THOUGHT, BUT HE HAD TO DO IT HE JUST HAD TO BECAUSE IF HE WAS EMOTIONAL WHEN SHE LEFT BECAUSE THAN SHE WON'T FORGIVE HERSELF SO HE HAD TO MAKE HER THINK SHE MEANS NOTHING TO HIM anymore.

SHE BROKE HER TRAIN OF THOUGHT AS HE SNAPPED HIS FINGER IN FRONT OF HER

" SO ... THIS IT'S OVER You're MAA BABA ARE TOGETHER NOW" HE SAID WITH A BLANK FACE

" YEAH, I AM LEAVING" SWARA SAID

" I CAN CLEARLY SEE THAT" SANSKAR SAID COLDLY HE COULDN'T SOUND WEAK

"YEAH WELL AREN'T YOU GOING TO MISS YOUR BEST FRIEND, " SWARA ASKED TO LIGHTEN THE MOOD WHICH MADE IT EVEN WORSE

HE FELT A PERCE AT HIS HEART BECAUSE THAT IS ALL THEY WILL EVER BE " YEAH FRIENDS " HE MURMURED

"kya bola tum ne"

" NOTHING I SAID I WON'T HAVE TO SLEEP ON THE COUCH Anymore", HE SAID AS IF HE WAS RELIEVED WHICH WAS FAR MORE THE OPPOSITE

" WELL THAN MR, CRANKY PANTS YOU CAN ENJOY YOUR BED TO YOURSELF," SHE SAID AS SHE WAS ABOUT TO STORM OUT 'THE MOMENT HE COULDN'T Continues HIS PLAN HE COULDN'T SEE HER HURT.

HE HELD HER AND PULLED HER BACK AND PUSHED HER TO THE WALL HIS BREATH TICKLING HER FACE

SHE STARED AT HIS EYES AND SHE KNEW WHAT HE WILL SAY BUT SHE WANTED TO HEAR IT FROM HIS MOUTH.

" LISTEN TO ME AND DON'T TALK UNTIL I AM DONE OK"

SHE GULPED

" I CAN'T DO THIS Anymore I HAVE TO TELL YOU EVEN IF YOU STILL WALK OUT THE DOOR AFTER THIS I WILL STILL FEEL BETTER THAT I TOLD YOU HOW I FEEL. I KNOW I TOLD YOU THAT I LOVE YOU ONCE I WILL SAY IT AGAIN I LOVE YOU SWARA AND I ALWAYS WILL LIKE YOU I COULDN'T HAVE A HAPPY EVER AFTER WITH KAVITA THE GIRL I LOVED THE MOST BUT THEN I REALIZED WHEN YOU CAME INTO MY LIFE THAT IF SOMEONE WALKS OUT OF YOUR LIFE THEY ARE MAKING MORE SPACE OF SOMEONE MUCH BETTER TO WALK IN .. AND IT IS TRUE YOU HEALED ME SWARA YOU REALLY DID BUT YOUR HEART HASNT HEALD ITSELF BECAUSE IT CANT IT NEEDS SOMEONE THAT IS WHY I AM ASKING YOU TO GIVE ME A CHANCE TO HEAL IT WITH MY LOVE FOR YOU. IF YOU WANT TO LEAVE AFTER WHAT I SAID YOU CAN BUT JUST REMEMBER IF YOU WALK OUT WITHOUT GIVING ME A CHANCE THAN MY HEART WILL SHATTER INTO PIECES ONCE AGAIN AND IT won't BE ABLE TO HEAL ITSELF. DONT DO IT FOR ME OR YOU DO IT FOR YOUR HEART" SANSKAR SAID AS HE LET GO.

SANSKAR WAS SHOCKED AT HER NEXT MOVE

WITHOUT SAYING ANYTHING SWARA WALK AND GOT HER LUGGAGE AND ...


WHAT WILL SHE STAY OR LEAVE ...


WELL YOU HAVE TO READ SO ANYWAY THANKS FOR READING PART ON HOPE I DIDN'T BORE YOU OUT I AM STILL GETTING USED TO THIS AND IF WANT ADD ME AS YOUR BUDDY I WILL BE HAPPY TO BE YOUR FRIEND ..

AND MAKE SURE TO LIKE AND COMMENT SO I CAN USE YOUR SUGGESTIONS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Please make sanskar a passionate and protective lover in this ff
We get only glimpse of it in the serial at least your ff can give me the pleasure of seeing a full fledged passionate and protective sanskar 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You have left ...with a cliffhanger...Gosh I;m really curious.
Do continue soon...
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nice start dear...pm me pls...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...
Waiting for next part. ...
Do pm me while updating further. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start. What she will decide. Hope she will give him a second chance. pls continue soon. pls pm me too
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I like this story😳

But A cliffhanger😲 I don't really like cliffhangers😕😆
So let me please finish the sentence for you😳
Without saying anything Swara walked to her luggage and toppled her bag onto the bed, scattering clothes and jewellery all over. Her heart was beating like a drum her mind worked furiously, thoughts rushing in a blur. Sanskar's words reverberated in her head. Her hands shook with unspoken emotion as she turned and walked towards the door.
Sanskar watched Swara's actions with fear and confusion. He feared that she was about to walk out of his life and leave emptiness once again but suddenly confusion overtook as he watched her belongings float on the bed. He was emotional drained and his throat had clogged with emotion, the words wanting to be uttered could not find a voice. He looked at Swara emotionally not understanding her erratic behaviour as she made her way out the room. Tears starting to well in his eyes, he clenched his fist and turned away, unable to watch her walk away.
"Don't get to comfortable on the bed Sanskar, the couch is still yours" she whispered cheekily.
His body stilled with those words as he turned to face her. Hope beginning to bloom once again. He looked at her wonderingly almost unbelieving.
"I was always taught to believe in second chances and new beginnings, so here it is, your second chance and my new beginning. And anyway, I can't leave you to brood by yourself, someone should keep you company and knock sense into you whenever it's needed" she said with a laugh and walked out the room...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Interesting start
Continue soon



Thank u so much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NAVI55

<font color="#0000ff">I like this story😳</font>


<font color="#0000ff">But A cliffhanger😲I don't really like cliffhangers😕😆</font>

<font color="#0000ff">So let me please finish the sentence for you😳</font>




Without saying anything Swara walked to her luggage and toppled her bag onto the bed, scattering clothes and jewellery all over. Her heart was beating like a drum her mind worked furiously, thoughts rushing in a blur. Sanskar's words reverberated in her head. Her hands shook with unspoken emotion as she turned and walked towards the door.


Sanskar watched Swara's actions with fear and confusion. He feared that she was about to walk out of his life and leave emptiness once again but suddenly confusion overtook as he watched her belongings float on the bed. He was emotional drained and his throat had clogged with emotion, the words wanting to be uttered could not find a voice. He looked at Swara emotionally not understanding her erratic behaviour as she made her way out the room. Tears starting to well in his eyes, he clenched his fist and turned away, unable to watch her walk away.


"Don't get to comfortable on the bed Sanskar, the couch is still yours" she whispered cheekily.


His body stilled with those words as he turned to face her. Hope beginning to bloom once again. He looked at her wonderingly almost unbelieving.


"I was always taught to believe in second chances and new beginnings, so here it is, your second chance and my new beginning. And anyway, I can't leave you to brood by yourself, someone should keep you company and knock sense into you whenever it's needed" she said with a laugh and walked out the room...😉





That was really good dear but my one will be alittle different than your but sort of the same storyline
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVED THE START AWESOME CONFESSION FROM SANSKAR LOVED HOW HE WAS EASING HER CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE .

Edited by dumas - 10 years ago

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