SwaSan OS-- 'Water' - Page 5

Originally posted by: dundumol96

Sooo nice ... and i wish to read more... On this pls write more parts

i want to lucky realisation and repentance on the hurtful words that he told swara

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Gosh...roller coaster for sure, each and every character had different facets shown in the piece. Loved how you made Sanskaar to be positive even when faced with Swara's ambiguity.

Lakshya you kept him in his current state but for a second you gave hope that he might have changed...That was really really good...

Each para was well crafted and the way you blended the 'quotes' into the situation...superb...

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

Amazing!

Lovely work!

-Nisha

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10

Hii😊

This is such a well thought out piece of writing that's related to the wedding track. I hope we get to see something like this. I'm not enjoying Swara's cold shouldering on the show so reading such brilliant compositions certainly helps to lighten my mood. I really love your approach and handling of the Swasan relationship and I think your stories have a huge influence on all the Swasan shippers of this forum. They make us readers fall harder for Swasan and especially Sansakar😃

Hoping to read more of your wonderful stories😊

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Very nice👏

really very well written👏

I hope they become friends again in show also.😊

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Awesomme Viji !!

u expressed a beautifull significance of water though !! ;)

n again I wish that this wud happen in the show as well

n once again I wud tell u that cvs must get some suggestions from u !!! ;)

Originally posted by: patralekha24

really very well written👏

I hope they become friends again in show also.😊