SwaSan OS-- 'Water' - Page 4

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Loved it. Especially the part of swara finally agreeing to be friends with sanskaar again. Waiting for the other two parts.

Do you have an index? Where can I find your other works?

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

An artfully written piece u have got here! I loved the roller-coaster emotions of both Swara and Sanskar... Esp Sanskar... I can't imagine how much it hurts him and must say U have tried to capture his tumultuous feelings to a really great extent that it's very satisfying to read ...

And I love reading ur quotes... Kudos to u to find the appropriate ones every time, it is a rare skill in itself... 👍🏼

And the last para... it's a very beautiful quote... But I dunno why it kept reminding me about Air more than Water... Something I just can't explain... hmm...

And thnx a lot for the PM dear. :)

Originally posted by: drooler

Hey...i m new on this forum and recently started watching the show and now totally hooked to swasan.

I have read your other works too and would like to applaud you for your wonderful skill of writing so so beautifully.Every line seems to be written so thoughtfully with deeper life lessons and every scene seems to be unfolding right before your eyes

Sankars pain and thought process is awesomely etched and one can surely feel the pain he is going through. ..

Thanks for this wonderful OS...waiting eagerly for the next part..😊

Originally posted by: swa291

Beautifully written .Will be waiting for your update

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Preet...😳 🤗 Thanks so much yaar. Seriously, you are among the fellow writers & readers who have been motivating me so much, right from the time I started my first SS, little over a month back now.

Thanks so much for your comments yaar, they make my day. Coming from a writer as gifted as you are, it means a lot.

The other major credit I want to give my work, is, to who else--SwaSan. That intense, magical, wonderful pair that is driving us all crazy! Yesterday, in that small scene where they are staring uncomfortably at each other when she's serving him food...I was like 🤪

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey, thanks for the lovely comment 😊 I started thinking of this "Water" themed OS when I heard about Swara possibly meeting Lucky near that river. The Julius Caesar quote I referred (Shakespeare) is an absolute favorite of mine. The Arthur Golden one, too. You felt that resembled air more than water, huh? 😊 Well perhaps its because water once it evaporates, becomes vapor 😉 Sorry for the PJ!

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

oh yeah dat fotu near the bridge was indeed very beautiful nah?😳 N hmm its frm JC? I thought it's frm Merchant of Venice... Err u can see I have pathetic memory frm this btw! 😆😆

@Bold :😕😕 😆😆😆

Hii😊

This is such a well thought out piece of writing that's related to the wedding track. I hope we get to see something like this. I'm not enjoying Swara's cold shouldering on the show so reading such brilliant compositions certainly helps to lighten my mood. I really love your approach and handling of the Swasan relationship and I think your stories have a huge influence on all the Swasan shippers of this forum. They make us readers fall harder for Swasan and especially Sansakar😃

Hoping to read more of your wonderful stories😊