SwaSan OS-- 'Water'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Nice update
Thanks for the PM

Thanks so much Mansi. Means a lot, coming from a writer of your caliber. BTW I also share your obsession with Arnav--Khushi. 😊 They used to be my favorite on screen pair back when IPPKND was airing. Now of course now its SwaSan all the way. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -.Aphrodite.-

Same here, I love such stories. Basically, the trust friends share can lead to such an amazing relationship with love, I would love to have Swara Sanskaar's friendship back rather than their love story to start right away. CVs need to put an end to this whole fiasco before starting SwaSan's story.

I am turning into a big fan of yours. Sometimes, I feel like writers on the forum are much more capable.

Will be waiting for "Earth" and "Fire" too.

Thanks again for the praise yaar 😳 Yeah, I do hope and pray the CVs restore SwaSan friendship very soon.

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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Lovely os Viji !!!!

Keep writing more 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Cintila
Hey! You're back !🤗
Whenever I come to the forum I always hope you've written something new so that I can read and enjoy😃( selfish na ? I know😆) I was glad when I got your pm😳

Now this os that you've written is something that I desperately want to see in the show aswell. Swara's behaviour in the show has been annoying me slightly and she definitely should apologise to sanskaar (waise we know she won't 🥱) I LOVED reading this. The swasan moment after the mehendi was soo cute😳.
I guess you'll be continuing this, please do pm me whenever you update.😃

Hey...Tuhina, right? 😊 Viji here, BTW, we have exchanged so many comments but I forget if we've "introduced" ourselves.

Thanks so much for your comment. Yeah, I've been wishing too, that Swara drops the anger and just tells Sansku they will be friends but she can't feel for him more. (Of course, we know she will fall deeply in love with him, but that'll come later) 😉

I do plan to continue this as an OS series with "Earth" and "Fire". But will take some more time as I am completely out of ideas at the moment. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Annei123
Lovely os Viji !!!!
Keep writing more 😃

Hey...thanks so much for reading and your comment.

I know I've promised you a very romantic OS with loads of SwaSan scenes. I'm still working on that one. 😊

But in meantime, my earlier OS "Their future together" is kind of like that. So you could read that one till I write the new one. 😉

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Viji 🤗
I'm your huge fan yaar 😊
You are the BESTEST WRITER in the forum 😳 👏
I can't tell how much i loved this
You are a brilliant writer 👍🏼 The way you describe everything is amazing 😳
It seemed i was reading a novel, wow 👏
*standing ovation*
Beautifully written 😊

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Loved it. Especially the part of swara finally agreeing to be friends with sanskaar again. Waiting for the other two parts.

Do you have an index? Where can I find your other works?

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

An artfully written piece u have got here! I loved the roller-coaster emotions of both Swara and Sanskar... Esp Sanskar... I can't imagine how much it hurts him and must say U have tried to capture his tumultuous feelings to a really great extent that it's very satisfying to read ...

And I love reading ur quotes... Kudos to u to find the appropriate ones every time, it is a rare skill in itself... 👍🏼

And the last para... it's a very beautiful quote... But I dunno why it kept reminding me about Air more than Water... Something I just can't explain... hmm...

And thnx a lot for the PM dear. :)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Viji 🤗
I'm your huge fan yaar 😊
You are the BESTEST WRITER in the forum 😳 👏
I can't tell how much i loved this
You are a brilliant writer 👍🏼 The way you describe everything is amazing 😳
It seemed i was reading a novel, wow 👏
*standing ovation*
Beautifully written 😊

Preet...😳 🤗 Thanks so much yaar. Seriously, you are among the fellow writers & readers who have been motivating me so much, right from the time I started my first SS, little over a month back now.

Thanks so much for your comments yaar, they make my day. Coming from a writer as gifted as you are, it means a lot.

The other major credit I want to give my work, is, to who else--SwaSan. That intense, magical, wonderful pair that is driving us all crazy! Yesterday, in that small scene where they are staring uncomfortably at each other when she's serving him food...I was like 🤪

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drooler

@drooler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Hey...i m new on this forum and recently started watching the show and now totally hooked to swasan.

I have read your other works too and would like to applaud you for your wonderful skill of writing so so beautifully.Every line seems to be written so thoughtfully with deeper life lessons and every scene seems to be unfolding right before your eyes

Sankars pain and thought process is awesomely etched and one can surely feel the pain he is going through. ..

Thanks for this wonderful OS...waiting eagerly for the next part..😊