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Part 4
Next morning at MM
Laksh was getting ready to join everyone for breakfast. He was setting his hair when someone knocked the door. He kept the comb down on the table and went to open the door.
Ma(Annapurna), I was just going to come down.
Laksh, I want to talk to you about something.
Of course Ma, come in. Laksh closed the door and made Annapurna sit on the bed. He sat on his one knee held her shoulders and said - tell ma, what happened?
Annapurna looked at her son, he looked exhausted. His charm, has been lost. But, she can't let her son take away the happiness of her family. She looked him straight in his eyes and asked-
Why did you come back Laksh?
Laksh was surprised, Ma, aren't you happy I came back? Your Laksh is back, I have come back to my family after 3 years.
I was happy Laksh, but now..
What happened Ma?
Annapurna told him what she saw
**flashback***
Yesterday at night when Annapurna saw lights still on in Laksh's room, she thought of talking to him.she went inside to find Laksh sleeping peacefully. His eyes were swollen, he looked sad and there was a photo lying beside him. She took that frame and turned it to see Swara and Laksh together. It was a photo were Swara was having this cute and shocked expression and Laksh kissing her on her cheeks. Annapurna kept the photo there, switched off the lights and as she left closed the door behind her.
Flash back ends
Laksh was shocked. He got up and turned the other side. Annapurna got up from the bed and placed a hand on his shoulder.
Laksh?
He turned. Ma...I ..
Don't Laksh. I know your past. You have told me everything and I had kept my promise of not telling anyone about it. I know you loved Swara. But, that was past. today Swara is our family's DIL. She is your brother sanskar's wife and your bhabhi(in a stern voice) I saw love in your eyes Laksh. But, I want you to know, Swara is no longer yours. Saying this she left leaving a speechless Laksh behind.
As Annapurna was leaving she saw ragini standing outside, ragini just nodded, Annapurna smiled at her and left. Ragini went to Laksh..
Everything will be fine Laksh...
Nothing is going to be right ragini. Nothing.
He held ragini by her shoulder and said
You know right, you know about me and shona. Our love, our dreams, our ...he felt choked..
Laksh..
You know what ragini...I am going to win her over. I know she is there, my shona. I am going to get her back in my life. Saying this he left from there leaving ragini behind.
In swasan room
Swara was making her hair when she heard a knock in the door.
It must be Sanskar. He must be back after his jogging. She smiled thinking at her husband's obsession with fitness. She opened the door to find Laksh. She took 3 steps back and turned around, not wanting to look at him. Laksh came in and closed the door behind him.
Swara please stop avoiding me. Please talk to me. Please Swara look at me.. Please.. Please shona...look at me...
Shona..shona...this name made Swara turn and look at Laksh. The moment stopped there. They froze. Swalak remembered their first fight,
**Flashback**
MUMBAI
After their stint in exchange program, swalak got jobs in Mumbai. Mumbai, the city of dreams, opened its arms to the love birds to create their own world of love and happiness. Swalak moved in together on certain T&C.
Condition 1- they will stay together but in different rooms.
Condition 2- only hugs and kisses allowed they would never cross their limits till they get married.
Condition 3- they will both contribute equally in managing the house.
As Swara laid the conditions, Laksh happily agreed. All he wanted ever was her beside him, nothing more. Are her conditions were accepted coz he loved her unconditionally. He smiled and agreed. Swalak were happy with their work and after a tiring day they would fond each other at home which got them out of all the stress and make them happy. And like in every relationship they too had their fights. The first fight-
Swara... Please talk to me Swara. Please look at me...please...shona...shona..look at me..
Swara turned still looking down. Laksh held his ears and said - I am sorry shona. I know I should have told you about me and radhika..but that was long time back. I was about16-17 that time. She was just a passing cloud. Swara gave him a look. And Laksh bit his tongue , OK, I didn't mean that. That wasn't love. Ok, I mean..god!! Shona and he put his head down. Swara smiled looking at despair to convince her. She held his chin and made him look at her. She cupped his face, stood on her toe and kissed his forehead. Laksh was moved by this gesture. She looked at him and said - Laksh we have fallen in love with each other but without trust and respect our love will be incomplete. And to trust you, I want you to tell me the truth always. Whatever you feel, all that you want to share with me you can and I will be there with you no matter what. Okay?
Okay. Laksh smiled and took her in his arms.
Flashback ends
Laksh was about to say something when uttara came running in the room.seeing uttara like this Swara asked
What happened uttara?
Bhabhi woh... Sanskar bhaiya, he had an accident..he ...
Swara left the room and ran down to the hall. Uttara and Laksh followed her. In the hall, everyone was gathered including ragini. Sujata was scolding Sanskar. Swara came and saw sanskar's elbow bleeding. Tears started flowing. Swara sat down on her knees and then looked up at Sanskar again. He gave a faint smile. Parineeta got the first aid kit and gave it to Swara. Swara was doing the dressing and tears were not stopping to fall
Swara, I met with an accident and you are crying. So romantic.
Sanskar you joke about everything. What if something major would have happened? Tell me how did this happen?
Sanskar narrated that while he was jogging, a small girl who was cycling lost her balance and hit him, there were some bricks here and there due to the construction of road happening on the other side. He slipped coz of some stones an the way and this happened.
Sanskar, why do you have to go jogging everyday?
Swara asked making a pout face. Sanskar cupped her face and said - I am fine Swara. Everyone was in awe of their love for each other. Annapurna prayed - keep their love safe. Let their love keep their bond strong.
Laksh's POV - so much love shona, you loved me as well right? You loved me more than your life shona and today I saw in your eyes feelings for me. And I am not going to loose you again. I love you shona.
After a while in swasan room.
Sanskar came out in his tracks after having shower. He tried to put on the T-shirt but his elbow was paining too much. Swara helped him wear the shirt. Just as she was about to leave, he held her wrist and moved her closer to him. He held her, his arms around her waist.
Sanskar now your elbow doesnt pain?
Sanskar shook his head in sideways.
Swara you are my life's biggest happiness. And when i have my happiness in my arms, i feel no pain.swara blushed and hugged him. He held her close to his heart and all his pain vanished.
To be continued
Part 4
Next morning at MM
Laksh was getting ready to join everyone for breakfast. He was setting his hair when someone knocked the door. He kept the comb down on the table and went to open the door.
Ma(Annapurna), I was just going to come down.
Laksh, I want to talk to you about something.
Of course Ma, come in. Laksh closed the door and made Annapurna sit on the bed. He sat on his one knee held her shoulders and said - tell ma, what happened?
Annapurna looked at her son, he looked exhausted. His charm, has been lost. But, she can't let her son take away the happiness of her family. She looked him straight in his eyes and asked-
Why did you come back Laksh?
Laksh was surprised, Ma, aren't you happy I came back? Your Laksh is back, I have come back to my family after 3 years.
I was happy Laksh, but now..
What happened Ma?
Annapurna told him what she saw
**flashback***
Yesterday at night when Annapurna saw lights still on in Laksh's room, she thought of talking to him.she went inside to find Laksh sleeping peacefully. His eyes were swollen, he looked sad and there was a photo lying beside him. She took that frame and turned it to see Swara and Laksh together. It was a photo were Swara was having this cute and shocked expression and Laksh kissing her on her cheeks. Annapurna kept the photo there, switched off the lights and as she left closed the door behind her.
Flash back ends
Laksh was shocked. He got up and turned the other side. Annapurna got up from the bed and placed a hand on his shoulder.
Laksh?
He turned. Ma...I ..
Don't Laksh. I know your past. You have told me everything and I had kept my promise of not telling anyone about it. I know you loved Swara. But, that was past. today Swara is our family's DIL. She is your brother sanskar's wife and your bhabhi(in a stern voice) I saw love in your eyes Laksh. But, I want you to know, Swara is no longer yours. Saying this she left leaving a speechless Laksh behind.
As Annapurna was leaving she saw ragini standing outside, ragini just nodded, Annapurna smiled at her and left. Ragini went to Laksh..
Everything will be fine Laksh...
Nothing is going to be right ragini. Nothing.
He held ragini by her shoulder and said
You know right, you know about me and shona. Our love, our dreams, our ...he felt choked..
Laksh..
You know what ragini...I am going to win her over. I know she is there, my shona. I am going to get her back in my life. Saying this he left from there leaving ragini behind.
In swasan room
Swara was making her hair when she heard a knock in the door.
It must be Sanskar. He must be back after his jogging. She smiled thinking at her husband's obsession with fitness. She opened the door to find Laksh. She took 3 steps back and turned around, not wanting to look at him. Laksh came in and closed the door behind him.
Swara please stop avoiding me. Please talk to me. Please Swara look at me.. Please.. Please shona...look at me...
Shona..shona...this name made Swara turn and look at Laksh. The moment stopped there. They froze. Swalak remembered their first fight,
**Flashback**
MUMBAI
After their stint in exchange program, swalak got jobs in Mumbai. Mumbai, the city of dreams, opened its arms to the love birds to create their own world of love and happiness. Swalak moved in together on certain T&C.
Condition 1- they will stay together but in different rooms.
Condition 2- only hugs and kisses allowed they would never cross their limits till they get married.
Condition 3- they will both contribute equally in managing the house.
As Swara laid the conditions, Laksh happily agreed. All he wanted ever was her beside him, nothing more. Are her conditions were accepted coz he loved her unconditionally. He smiled and agreed. Swalak were happy with their work and after a tiring day they would fond each other at home which got them out of all the stress and make them happy. And like in every relationship they too had their fights. The first fight-
Swara... Please talk to me Swara. Please look at me...please...shona...shona..look at me..
Swara turned still looking down. Laksh held his ears and said - I am sorry shona. I know I should have told you about me and radhika..but that was long time back. I was about16-17 that time. She was just a passing cloud. Swara gave him a look. And Laksh bit his tongue , OK, I didn't mean that. That wasn't love. Ok, I mean..god!! Shona and he put his head down. Swara smiled looking at despair to convince her. She held his chin and made him look at her. She cupped his face, stood on her toe and kissed his forehead. Laksh was moved by this gesture. She looked at him and said - Laksh we have fallen in love with each other but without trust and respect our love will be incomplete. And to trust you, I want you to tell me the truth always. Whatever you feel, all that you want to share with me you can and I will be there with you no matter what. Okay?
Okay. Laksh smiled and took her in his arms.
Flashback ends
Laksh was about to say something when uttara came running in the room.seeing uttara like this Swara asked
What happened uttara?
Bhabhi woh... Sanskar bhaiya, he had an accident..he ...
Swara left the room and ran down to the hall. Uttara and Laksh followed her. In the hall, everyone was gathered including ragini. Sujata was scolding Sanskar. Swara came and saw sanskar's elbow bleeding. Tears started flowing. Swara sat down on her knees and then looked up at Sanskar again. He gave a faint smile. Parineeta got the first aid kit and gave it to Swara. Swara was doing the dressing and tears were not stopping to fall
Swara, I met with an accident and you are crying. So romantic.
Sanskar you joke about everything. What if something major would have happened? Tell me how did this happen?
Sanskar narrated that while he was jogging, a small girl who was cycling lost her balance and hit him, there were some bricks here and there due to the construction of road happening on the other side. He slipped coz of some stones an the way and this happened.
Sanskar, why do you have to go jogging everyday?
Swara asked making a pout face. Sanskar cupped her face and said - I am fine Swara. Everyone was in awe of their love for each other. Annapurna prayed - keep their love safe. Let their love keep their bond strong.
Laksh's POV - so much love shona, you loved me as well right? You loved me more than your life shona and today I saw in your eyes feelings for me. And I am not going to loose you again. I love you shona.
After a while in swasan room.
Sanskar came out in his tracks after having shower. He tried to put on the T-shirt but his elbow was paining too much. Swara helped him wear the shirt. Just as she was about to leave, he held her wrist and moved her closer to him. He held her, his arms around her waist.
Sanskar now your elbow doesnt pain?
Sanskar shook his head in sideways.
Swara you are my life's biggest happiness. And when i have my happiness in my arms, i feel no pain.swara blushed and hugged him. He held her close to his heart and all his pain vanished.
To be continued
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