SS- No conditions applied part 13..page 25...(completed)

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Hello people...I just now updated my swaragini ff- now that we are together...due to time constraints...I am not able to update my ff regularly...days before I came across a love story for laksh-swara-sanskar and ragini as a supporting character.

So here is the first part

The MM was full of hustle and bustle. Annapurna was looking at the food preparation. Uttara was checking the main door every now and then. Parineeta and sujata were setting up a bedroom. They were making sure everything was in its right place..just as they were leaving and coming downstairs. Uttara exclaimed - everyone come down...he is here...come fast.
All the maheshwaris went to the main door and there came the car and got down a guy in a white shirt ,black jacket and jeans. He removed his sunglasses.he went on the other side to open the car door and stepped out a girl in a blue colored full sleve kurta and legging.she looked like a definition of beauty. The maheshwaris were shocked seeing a girl with laksh.
Laksh asked the girl to come with him..he could read their expression.he said
Ma, papa,she is ragini my business partner. I am working with her in Australia.she greeted everyone and took everyone's blessing.the maheshwaris blessed her. They then did the arti and welcomed their son and ragini home.

After sometime they all sat for lunch.ragini sat beside Lakh.
Dp asked about the business to which ragini replied and laksh was quiet.just listening to their talks.ragini praised Laksh on his business skills and knowledge. Annapurna could see in ragini's eyes that she had feelings for laksh. She looked at her son and his eyes were full of hurt and pain.she sighed.

Uttara said-laksh bhaiya , not fair you didn't come in last 3 years to meet any of us...why bhai... You even didn't come for sanskar bhai's wedding.

Lakshya. Came a voice from far...and all looked to the entrance to see Sanskar.

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5-8
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7-13
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9-18
10-21
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow sanskar married swara na. Pls continue soon
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Interesting start! 👍🏼
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A wonderful start. Keep up the flow. Cant wait to read more.
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curious...curious...curious...all the way...
Ragini coming to Maheswari house in dressed in kurta, not saree, curious...

Sanskaar married...to whom...curious...

Brother does not attend another brother's wedding...curious...

So, need you update soon...if not the curiosity is going to drive me up the wall...
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Hi everyone thanks for liking the chapter...I can't quote on your comments coz that option is not available as I am updating through my mobile. The next part will be up tomorrow...I know you guys are curious to know what happens next...tomorrow you will have the answers..once again thank u all the readers for your support.I really appreciate your efforts that u take to read , comment and like the writings. Take care everyone 😊
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I finally found the quote option...
Thank u dear
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Good morning everyone...thanks once again for your support.here is the next chapter. Hope you guys like it. Enjoy reading.


Chapter-2

Laksh and Sanskar walked towards each other and as they reached the centre of the hall, Laksh hugged Sanskar. Sanskar returned the hug.
Sorry bhai.. Sorry I didn't come on the most important and special day of your life. Laksh eyes became moist. Sanskar patted his head and said - its okay lucky. Now that you are back. I am sure all will be fine.they were still in their brotherly hug when Laksh saw someone coming towards them. A girl in a red anarkali was coming down the stairs.she was struggling with bags in her hand. He looked at her quite for sometime. She looked so pretty, open hair, her ever expressive eyes. But Laksh couldn't believe it was her.
Swara and Sanskar were back from the market. All the time Sanskar was busy romancing her and with his cheesy lines he used to make Swara laugh or angry. As they reached the main gate, Sanskar saw the car that had been parked in the entrance.Sanskar - Swara, he is here.lucky is back.saying so he rushed to the house eager to meet his brother ,leaving Swara behind with all the bags.Swara struggled with the bags and somehow she reached the steps that pay the way inside to the house. As she entered and looked up to call Sanskar for help, she froze. Laksh and Swara couldn't believe that they were once again in front of each other. All their moments together came rushing in to their mind. Laksh remembered their first fight...Swara thought about their first date...their confession...their love and just then Sanskar broke the embrace and looked at Swara. He walked up to her and took the bags. Swara looked at him and then back at Laksh. Sanskar held Swara's hand and took her where Laksh was still. Laksh was confused at what was happening. Sanskar placed his hand on Laksh's shoulder and this brought Laksh to his senses. He looked at Sanskar and then again at Swara.
Lucky , and then he went towards Swara placed his hand on either of her shoulders and said
Ye hai Swara. My wife and Teri bhabhi.
And Swara ye hai lucky.I mean Laksh my brother.
Laksh was shocked. He couldn't believe what he heard. He looked at Swara again and this time he noticed the mangalsutra and vermilion.
After all this. Dp asked them to join for lunch.Laksh took his seat beside ragini. While swasan sat beside Annapurna. Sanskar looked at ragini and was about to enquire about her when uttara spoke - bhai.what took you and bhabhi so long?
Sanskar looked at everyone and said - sorry we are indeed late. We didn't get the things you asked for ma(Annapurna). We had to search the whole market.
Parineeta spoke - are you sure that was the reason Sanskar ?
Sanskar smiled and said- bhabhi you are married. At least you should understand.. Adarsh bhai make bhabhi understand.
And they all were smiling and laughing. Swara was blushing hard and ragini was in awe of the family. She was a single child to her father. Her mother died when she was 6 due to cancer. Her world consisted of herself and her dad. She missed a family. And here in MM she saw what family was. Annapurna was happy looking at her children... Her family was finally complete with laksh's return. She looked at Laksh and he was staring at someone. She looked to see who that was and she was shocked. She panicked. Why is Laksh staring at Swara. She tried to look in his eyes and there was again that pain evident but there was something else as well love. Yes she could clearly see love for Swara in laksh's eyes. She thought - I will have to talk to Laksh.

After the lunch and their meeting and greeting everyone departed to their respective room. Ragini was given the guest room adjacent to laksh's room. She was happy where she was at that moment. Just then Laksh entered her room.she quickly ran to laksh and hugged him. Laksh didn't reciprocate. She broke the hug and started telling him about how happy she was.how lucky he is to have such a nice family. They are so full of warmth.Laksh took a seat on the bed and his head down. Ragini was blabbering her happiness and she failed to notice laksh's turmoil.
After few minuted Laksh shouted - enough ragini.
Ragini was shocked. His shout panicked her. Her eyes went big and she turned around to see Laksh who was all red. His eyes were moist. He was in pain. Before she could ask something, he decided to leave but she held him back and asked.
Kya hua Laksh? What's wrong? You just met your family. You should be happy. But, I can see pain in your eyes. Tell me what happened.
Laksh could no longer control his tears. He broke down and cried.ragini sat down as well and asked-laksh?
Shona...that's all Laksh said and ragini's eyes were wide with shock.
Shona kya Laksh?
Swara Sanskar maheshwari. She is my brothers wife...she is my bhabhi. Its not possible ragini. Swara ...my shona ..she is my love ragini. She loved me right ? Then how is it possible that today she is my brothers wife.
Ragini didn't utter a word. She couldn't believe that Swara was shona. She remembered their lunch together and she could easily say - Swara and Sanskar were in love. It was so evident. She then looked at Laksh and thought - but shona she loved Laksh. She has heard their love story which is overwhelming..so full of love and pain of course..but how could shona do this to Laksh.

In swasan bedroom
Swara was in her own thoughts thinking about Laksh... And then she looked at Sanskar who was busy in his laptop. She smiled. Walked up to him and said - Sanskar I love you..Sanskar looked at Swara and said - I didn't know that and chuckled.
Swara hit him playfully on his chest.
Ouch...
Sorry...laga kya?
Be careful. Its my heart. My Swara would have got hurt.
Swara blushed and hugged him. Sanskar took her tightly in his arms. Their romantic embrace was disturbed by uttara.
Bhai... I need bhabhi's help with my project.if your love sessions are over. I would like to have some of her time.
Okay...OK...take your bhabhi.
Swara smiled at her hubby and left from there...

To be continued soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story dear
Loved it
Continue soon
Just one question the story is about SwaSan na😕
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Thank you..
Glad you liked it

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