LAKSH OS: WEAK LINK

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

awesome one shot.

Thanks for PM

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Medha you are an amazing writer⭐️👏
I truly appreciate your efforts to write such a wonderful part
I liked the way you portrayed the whole story👍🏼
Keep writing such updates
Thanks for the PM

thanks so much mansi. glad u understood.😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: NabilaIslam
Awww you made me cry 😭😭,it's beautiful 😭😳

thanks nabila.😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: kaku17
Very nicely written medha...u hv done the unthinkable for me as in managed to bring out lakshya's vulnerability. ...he is a weakling who is so lost that he is unable to reach the shore, however hard he tries. ...earlier I used to feel sympathy for him but now I hate him more than ragini...

thanks kaku thanks for understanding😊

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Ok seriously I love the way u write Gal... u put so much soul in ur words... Kudos! 👏👏

But having said that I still think the character is hopeless one, more in the category of Parineeta... who I guess has become legendary with her blind trust in yesterday's GAL IN THE TRUNK EPISODE! 😆😆

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 9 years ago

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Medha, this is BRILLIANT 👏
You portrayed Laksh's feelings wonderfully 👏
Kudos to you 😳
I'm loving your works dear 😳

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Very nice 😊

I love all the analogies you've used, the quotes, everything fitted together perfectly

and kudos to you for writing an unbiased piece on such an irritating character :)

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
Ok seriously I love the way u write Gal... u put so much soul in ur words... Kudos! 👏👏

But having said that I still think the character is hopeless one, more in the category of Parineeta... who I guess has become legendary with her blind trust in yesterday's GAL IN THE TRUNK EPISODE! 😆😆

yeah well i wrote an os for all the main leads ...so i did not want to leave him out. plus ye apni insult khud karvata hai...so i pity him abit. not much. just a bit.😃 and parineeta..well i cannot manage her...i confess.

thanks dear😊