LAKSH OS: WEAK LINK - Page 3

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Medha, this is BRILLIANT 👏
You portrayed Laksh's feelings wonderfully 👏
Kudos to you 😳
I'm loving your works dear 😳

This is reading Laksh's POV without taking into consideration that he needs to think, sum up things rationally, not just based on emotion. If you take Laksh behaviour, situation at face value, then, what he says makes super sense...

ur os actually felt all wat is the reason behind lakshya's behavior...he was never evil...he is just too much in luv...beyond happiness bt the kind where it only gives pain...he is no idiot...he is blinded...
lakshya right now is behaving dumb nd we hv no second thoughts on that...bt if we consider since ragini's plotting to now nd place this monologue of him there...
things surely fit like a puzzle...
good job medha..keep it up

Originally posted by: Au_Revoir

ur os actually felt all wat is the reason behind lakshya's behavior...he was never evil...he is just too much in luv...beyond happiness bt the kind where it only gives pain...he is no idiot...he is blinded...
lakshya right now is behaving dumb nd we hv no second thoughts on that...bt if we consider since ragini's plotting to now nd place this monologue of him there...
things surely fit like a puzzle...
good job medha..keep it up

Medha, this is brilliant. There's a few writers on the forum whose writing I know will be right up my street as to me, the most important part of writing something good is to first understand your character(s). That is why, to me, a lot of stories and show fail- writers don't get deep enough into the psyche of the people they're writing about. Therefore, I loved this. I love how you have explained Lakshya, which incidentally totally tallies with my mental analysis of him. A boy who has everything handed to him and the whole world went out of their way to make his life easier- self absorption then becomes the only way to be. I like that the shallowness that underlines his character comes through but without making him "bad", which he of course isn't.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Medha, this is brilliant. There's a few writers on the forum whose writing I know will be right up my street as to me, the most important part of writing something good is to first understand your character(s). That is why, to me, a lot of stories and show fail- writers don't get deep enough into the psyche of the people they're writing about. Therefore, I loved this. I love how you have explained Lakshya, which incidentally totally tallies with my mental analysis of him. A boy who has everything handed to him and the whole world went out of their way to make his life easier- self absorption then becomes the only way to be. I like that the shallowness that underlines his character comes through but without making him "bad", which he of course isn't.

Also love the subtle way of pointing out the differences between him and Sanskaar and then him and Swara- this sub consciously to the reader highlights how those two are so much better suited to each other! 👏

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Okay Medha, now I'm feeling like a complete idiot, although with a goofy smile after reading this. I missed so much...I might have been blind those days.

Coming to Laksh, it seems you know him personally, you have portrayed him with that much accuracy. And The Hollow Man? Why, it is my favorite too! And the confused soul laksh is...well, well I understand him much better through this magnifying glass. He looked less of an annoying insect and more the prodded on innocent ant he thinks he is.

I liked the way he says his trust was broken and how he is afraid to trust again. Never felt this much for him..sort of pity him now😕

Awesome😃