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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: ...sandy...
Once again your writings are so awesome.. 👏 I think CVs read your OS and made shekar fall on swara feet😆😉 It was so lovely .. I wish something like this happen in the show..

I will read your OS a day and comment on it for sure 😃 do write more 😳

Hi Sandy...Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to leave this lovely comment. 😊 Glad you liked this O.S.

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

oh my god i have no words no describe how beautifully you have written this OS..😳

brilliant work and keep writing more..😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: kulsum_5
oh my god i have no words no describe how beautifully you have written this OS..😳
brilliant work and keep writing more..😊

Thanks so much kulsum. Glad you liked it. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written os..👍🏼

Thank you 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: ms.impulsive
Lovely..

Thanks, Ms Impulsive 😊

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misaki

@misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

How I wish Sujata on the show to actually have a change of heart and understand Sanskaar's love. Doesn't look like it's going to happen any time soon.

I also wished for Sanskaar to remain aloof and disconnected with Swara after the "big revelation". But alas! It couldn't happen. *dramatic sigh*. I loved how you got Sanskaar to react after Swara's confession. He's so afraid to believe. After everything that he's been through. He couldn't afford to get his hopes up. I loved how Swara played the guilt card back at him. Smart girl😆 (Wish the one on the show was too. 🤔)

I also loved how you managed to talk about Swara and Shekar's relationship as well. He truly is the worse one of them all. Yucky seems to have taken it upon himself to surpass him though. Like sasur- like damaad. Sanskaar as always is an exception to all the rules. Sometimes I wonder if he's adopted. Only guy with brains in the entire Khandan.😆(DP shows some promise now and then though)

I have already made it clear as to how much I enjoy reading works. So much that I couldn't help but go through all of them in one go. I'm sorry it is taking me so long to come back and give you feedback.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: misaki
How I wish Sujata on the show to actually have a change of heart and understand Sanskaar's love. Doesn't look like it's going to happen any time soon.

I also wished for Sanskaar to remain aloof and disconnected with Swara after the "big revelation". But alas! It couldn't happen. *dramatic sigh*. I loved how you got Sanskaar to react after Swara's confession. He's so afraid to believe. After everything that he's been through. He couldn't afford to get his hopes up. I loved how Swara played the guilt card back at him. Smart girl😆 (Wish the one on the show was too. 🤔)
I also loved how you managed to talk about Swara and Shekar's relationship as well. He truly is the worse one of them all. Yucky seems to have taken it upon himself to surpass him though. Like sasur- like damaad. Sanskaar as always is an exception to all the rules. Sometimes I wonder if he's adopted. Only guy with brains in the entire Khandan.😆(DP shows some promise now and then though)

I have already made it clear as to how much I enjoy reading works. So much that I couldn't help but go through all of them in one go. I'm sorry it is taking me so long to come back and give you feedback.

Geetha 🤗 🤗

Thanks very much for this lovely comment.

But dear---what is important to me is that my friends read my work at their convenience, when time permits. You don't have to feel pressured to comment if time is short yaar---no formalities. Am happy that you felt happy reading it. 😊

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

omg this was beautiful
simply loved it

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
omg this was beautiful
simply loved it

Thanks Prachi. Glad you liked it. 😊

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naina

@hp_2006

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Really awesome OS Dear Viji👏

i loved Swara' s thought "thank god ki baba didn't come earlier into my life when i was a child..otherwise i would have loved lakshya who is spineless as him"😆

I loved your insight here 😃

Then I loved the way Swara confronted Sanskaar boldly and confessed her love..😳

Loved the way Sanskaar claimed her lips and made her his.😃

I loved reading this..thank you very much Viji for giving us this OS