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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you guys for ur comments...🤗
Sorry for not able to reply seperately for each and everyone...😳
ll update next part soon...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Note: Sorry for late update... Dont know how this update came up. Hope you ppl like it...

PART 5:

Flashback Continues:

Swara: With fear starts crying she pleads them to leave her

Sanskaar is on the way

Arjun notices some goons on the other side of road also sees Swara in the middle sees Swara in middle and screams saying Sanskaar, Swara, goons

Sanskaar: Looks at the goons and both gets down and rushes to her

Sanskaar: Starts giving left and right blows to them

Arjun: Also do a small fight along with Sanskaar

Swara: Rushes to the driver and makes him to drink water. Goons flew away with blood oozing from their bodies

Sanskaar and Arjun goes to Swara: With driver, bhai thum teek ho na?

Driver: Ha madam

Swara: With tears and teary voice, sorry bhaiyya, e sab meri vaje se huva

Driver: U did nothing those people doesn't have humanity

Swara: Gives money to him and he leaves

Sanskaar was touched by her concern to a driver more than herself

Swara: Starts walking

Arjun: He is very angry on Sanskaar, he stands silently

Sanskaar: Runs to her, yeh pagal where r u going

Swara: Looking angrily at him, I am going to my house, i won't stay with u, and I tolerated much, now I lost my patience completely

Sanskaar: Thum pagal ho kya? ithni rath me thum kaisa jayegi?

Swara: Cryingly..oh! when did u start worrying for me, u stay away from me, by saying she starts walking again now fastly

Sanskaar: U have no money but u r saying u will go to ur home

Swara: Turns to face him and says, pointing to her legs, these are called legs i will go with the help of these

Sanskaar: Your home is not in the next street to go by walk

Swara: With continuous tears, u please leave me, i am fed up with u, whatever may happen let it happen i will go to my house i won't stay with u, by that she continuous her walk

Sanskaar: If u won't come with me, mom and everyone will kill me

Swara: it will be good if they really do that, u say sorry to everyone on behalf of me, she cries bitterly while walking

Sanskaar: Its ur mistake not mine, why u came out of the farmhouse when i asked u to stay there

Swara: How many times i called u, did u attend my call atleast for once, u left me at the farmhouse at 6:00pm now its 12:00pm i was alone in the farm house, still how much time i have to wait for u

Sanskaar: Was speechless for her direct question

Swara: Goes on walking

Sanskaar: Runs to her and pulls her so that he can face her, he continues u first come to home with me it was very late now

Swara: Unable to control her grief, she holds his shirt and rest her head on his chest and cries by saying u please send me back to my home, i won't live with u, u r rude, insensitive and she cries hardly

Sanskaar: He also gets tears, as he is the reason for her pain, he puts his hand around her and tries to console her by caring her hair, please u stop crying

Swara: Still sobbing by saying please send me to my home

Arjun: He too cries looking at her pity situation

Sanskaar: Suddenly he was unable to listen her sobing, he starts calling her saying "Swara... Swara..." but no answer from her, he gets tensed and pulls her out from him, she was fainted, he takes her into his arms and walks to the car

Flashback ends

Swara gets tears in her eyes by remembering it.

Ragini: Ok Swara I will leave now by saying so she keeps a CD on bed (Swara doesnot see her keeping CD) and leaves.

Swara (St): I don't want to go with him don't know again what he will do. I ll think of some excuse and avoid going with him

Sanskaar (St): I know becos of last time she may avoid coming with me I should try my level best to take her with me

MM house:

Swara sees the CD on her bed. She plays the CD and breaks down by seeing it

Swara (St): Sanskaar I never thought u ll do this with me. After seeing this also I can't hate you because I LOVE YOU A LOT.

Sanskaar comes home but doesnot find Swara in the room.

Sanskaar: Maa where is Swara?

Sujatha: Don't know we went out and came just now. Why what happened?

Sanskaar: She is not there in room.

Sujatha: Call her and check once

Sanskaar: Calls to Swara but comes to know that her mobile is in room itself. Where he finds a letter as well

Swara:

Sanskaar,

I know you dont and won't love me but I got to know a biggest thing which I didn't expect it from you. Still I can't hate you becos I LOVE YOU MORE THAN MY LIFE. But can't stay with you as well so I m leaving forever. Byeee... Hope we doesn't meet again

Never can be urs,

Swara

Sanskaar (St): What truth she is talking about?

He sees laptop ON and checks the CD by seeing it he get shattered.

Sanskaar (St): Shouts SWARA and cries by falling on his knees... I m sorry Swara I know I did a big mistake but realized it very lately. I can't live without you please come back...

What's present in CD? will destiny bring SwaSan together... Lets wait and see...

Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hayyeee Anu first for update...
Update was so emotional asha dear...Felt very bad for swara. ...poor girl...
And this ragini badly I want to kill her...
Wt z in tat cd plz plz update fast...
Do take took long time...else I will remainder PM for u daily...😉😉
Big hug🤗 for the update dear...missed update so much...
Edited by anu91 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome back Asha 🤗
Busy ho? And big thank you for posting the links of SwaSan scenes 😳
Coming to the story it was very emotional seeing Swara shattered and in that condition 😒 Poor girl, she doesn't deserve this
And CD? What's there in the CD that she took such a big step? 😲
It was very well written Asha 👏 Update soon 😳
Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it Asha, nice one..
Waiting for the next...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shreeswathy

Loved it Asha, nice one..

Waiting for the next...

Thank u yar...
ll update next part either by tomorrow or monday...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: abika

What is the truth??
Awesome

Thank u yar...
Truth ll be revealed later..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Asha... 🤗 Missed you yaar.. kahan thi tum??

Coming to story... amazing update dear...
Ye Nagini ne apna aur Sanky ka video dikhaya na Swara ko ... isiliye wo chali gai... 😭 Hate her...
Will be looking forward for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha122

Note: Sorry for late update... Dont know how this update came up. Hope you ppl like it...


PART 5:

Flashback Continues:

Swara: With fear starts crying she pleads them to leave her

Sanskaar is on the way

Arjun notices some goons on the other side of road also sees Swara in the middle sees Swara in middle and screams saying Sanskaar, Swara, goons

Sanskaar: Looks at the goons and both gets down and rushes to her

Sanskaar: Starts giving left and right blows to them

Arjun: Also do a small fight along with Sanskaar

Swara: Rushes to the driver and makes him to drink water. Goons flew away with blood oozing from their bodies

Sanskaar and Arjun goes to Swara: With driver, bhai thum teek ho na?

Driver: Ha madam

Swara: With tears and teary voice, sorry bhaiyya, e sab meri vaje se huva

Driver: U did nothing those people doesn't have humanity

Swara: Gives money to him and he leaves

Sanskaar was touched by her concern to a driver more than herself

Swara: Starts walking

Arjun: He is very angry on Sanskaar, he stands silently

Sanskaar: Runs to her, yeh pagal where r u going

Swara: Looking angrily at him, I am going to my house, i won't stay with u, and I tolerated much, now I lost my patience completely

Sanskaar: Thum pagal ho kya? ithni rath me thum kaisa jayegi?

Swara: Cryingly..oh! when did u start worrying for me, u stay away from me, by saying she starts walking again now fastly

Sanskaar: U have no money but u r saying u will go to ur home

Swara: Turns to face him and says, pointing to her legs, these are called legs i will go with the help of these

Sanskaar: Your home is not in the next street to go by walk

Swara: With continuous tears, u please leave me, i am fed up with u, whatever may happen let it happen i will go to my house i won't stay with u, by that she continuous her walk

Sanskaar: If u won't come with me, mom and everyone will kill me

Swara: it will be good if they really do that, u say sorry to everyone on behalf of me, she cries bitterly while walking

Sanskaar: Its ur mistake not mine, why u came out of the farmhouse when i asked u to stay there

Swara: How many times i called u, did u attend my call atleast for once, u left me at the farmhouse at 6:00pm now its 12:00pm i was alone in the farm house, still how much time i have to wait for u

Sanskaar: Was speechless for her direct question

Swara: Goes on walking

Sanskaar: Runs to her and pulls her so that he can face her, he continues u first come to home with me it was very late now

Swara: Unable to control her grief, she holds his shirt and rest her head on his chest and cries by saying u please send me back to my home, i won't live with u, u r rude, insensitive and she cries hardly

Sanskaar: He also gets tears, as he is the reason for her pain, he puts his hand around her and tries to console her by caring her hair, please u stop crying

Swara: Still sobbing by saying please send me to my home

Arjun: He too cries looking at her pity situation

Sanskaar: Suddenly he was unable to listen her sobing, he starts calling her saying "Swara... Swara..." but no answer from her, he gets tensed and pulls her out from him, she was fainted, he takes her into his arms and walks to the car

Flashback ends

Swara gets tears in her eyes by remembering it.

Ragini: Ok Swara I will leave now by saying so she keeps a CD on bed (Swara doesnot see her keeping CD) and leaves.

Swara (St): I don't want to go with him don't know again what he will do. I ll think of some excuse and avoid going with him

Sanskaar (St): I know becos of last time she may avoid coming with me I should try my level best to take her with me

MM house:

Swara sees the CD on her bed. She plays the CD and breaks down by seeing it

Swara (St): Sanskaar I never thought u ll do this with me. After seeing this also I can't hate you because I LOVE YOU A LOT.

Sanskaar comes home but doesnot find Swara in the room.

Sanskaar: Maa where is Swara?

Sujatha: Don't know we went out and came just now. Why what happened?

Sanskaar: She is not there in room.

Sujatha: Call her and check once

Sanskaar: Calls to Swara but comes to know that her mobile is in room itself. Where he finds a letter as well

Swara:

Sanskaar,

I know you dont and won't love me but I got to know a biggest thing which I didn't expect it from you. Still I can't hate you becos I LOVE YOU MORE THAN MY LIFE. But can't stay with you as well so I m leaving forever. Byeee... Hope we doesn't meet again

Never can be urs,

Swara

Sanskaar (St): What truth she is talking about?

He sees laptop ON and checks the CD by seeing it he get shattered.

Sanskaar (St): Shouts SWARA and cries by falling on his knees... I m sorry Swara I know I did a big mistake but realized it very lately. I can't live without you please come back...

What's present in CD? will destiny bring SwaSan together... Lets wait and see...

very nice update waiting for the next part update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Asha... 🤗 Missed you yaar.. kahan thi tum??

Coming to story... amazing update dear...
Ye Nagini ne apna aur Sanky ka video dikhaya na Swara ko ... isiliye wo chali gai... 😭 Hate her...
Will be looking forward for next update..

Hey Nityah...🤗
Missed u ppl too yar... Was busy with festival and office work yar...
Thank you so much yar...
No yar it wont be Ragini and Sanky video it ll be some other in further updates ll reveal it...

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