TS: Not Guilty

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Totally loved it...

U updated it awesomely...

Emotions were well described. ...

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Plz updt soon.
Add me in ur pm list.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Beautiful.

So, the siblings stick to each other, care for each other...the rest, wait for fate to decide!

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: bgscribe

Okay.. 😆 i will try to write an epilogue for you.. but currently i have no idea how this will sort out.. will put on my thinking cap and try to come up with an epilogue.

Oh! thank u so much dearie! 🤗🤗 And err... sorry for the emotional atyachar! 😆😆😆

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Beautifully done Sharon 👏
I'm sad that it ended though
I loved it when Swara gave it back to Laksh 😆 He still thinks she will go back to him after this 😕
It was simply amazing 😳
The best line according to me was when Swara said " Sanskaar has the right to be in between, Laksh. I am married to him."
Keep writing ⭐️

Thank you Preet..😊

That line is the closest i can bring Swara to accept and react to Sanskaar's confession.

Niki has asked for an epilogue.. Let me see if i can actually get one to write.. will pm you if there is..😆