' I WILL BE THERE FOR YOU' (last chap page 38)*Completed* - Page 28

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Omg mansi...last part was so cute

Angry sanskaar😳

N lucky n ragini made his popat😆

But he confessed

N their wedding night😳

Everything was so perfect awesome closer yaar

But plzz write an epilogue yaar sone cute SwaSan scenes

Thanks for the pm😃

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Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing Mansi 👏
Loved every bit of it
Kudos to you for writing this incredible story ⭐️
You are such a wonderful writer 😳
I loved Sanskar being possessive for Swara 😆
And i too liked Laksh Ragini here 😉 they helped SwaSan to confess their feelings
Wonderfully done 👍🏼 ⭐️
Keep writing 🤗

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dundumol96

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Posted: 9 years ago

I read it one go... Wonderful story

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 9 years ago

OMG manchi!

Bachi erotica likhne k line par hai☺️

Kiss suhagrat n all

I really liked it

Especially the whole natak

Ram Ram ghor kaliyug (PS:Ashum this line is for you missing our school days)

When read this i was like heyyy i used to say that😆

Only to read the next line wherein you said you missed or school days

That line alone brings back a lot of memories

Congo on your finished ss!!!

Party to banti hai

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rinku95

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Posted: 9 years ago

Fantastic ending
Thanks for pm

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

☺️ ❤️ ☺️ ❤️

Finally somebody got their Haq!! 😆 But seriously beautiful ending dear!! 👏👍🏼

and thnx for the PM! 😳

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3dancelover

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb! Loved the possessiveness and confession. Swasan are so cute! ❤️😊

PS: Thanks for the PM

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow it took a lot of time for me since I am reading it slowly but your entire story was rocking,lovely amazing updates,loved it to the core dear...

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Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
Nice one!!
The last part 😳 😳

Thanks dear for your comments😉

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Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Swasan
Awesome
Thanks for the PM

Thanks for your comments dear😉

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