SwaSan TS 'Dooriyan' (last part pag 6) - Page 4

Originally posted by: dpm15

Beautifully written preeth... :)

Really felt the pain :(

Do come up with the continoution of 'DOORIYAN'.

Thanks a lot 😊 i will continue 😊

Originally posted by: anju10

woww lovely os dear

very well written

plzz continue with next part

waitng for the confession

😊

Thank you so much Anju 😳 Sure i'll write the next part 😊

Originally posted by: anu91

U pened it so nicely...the emotions were described perfectly...

So cute...

Could u plz write continuation for this...

Plz dear if can do write...

Just request...

Thank you so much Anu 😳 sure i will write the next part 😊

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font size="2">Really wonderful that you're planning to continue this OS. Eagerly looking forward to the next part. 😊
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Thank you so much for the advice 😳 Working on the next part, so will post it soon 😊

After many people adviced me to continue this, i decided to upload the next part and most probably the last. So this is not an OS but TS (two shots). Thank you for giving me the idea to continue this 😳

Originally posted by: sneharay

Waiting😊

I've almost completed it, so maybe by today or tomorrow will update it, and tried to wrote a longer part 😊

Hey guys, this is Preet. Many people appreciated my OS and they gave me the idea to write the next part where they realize their feelings,so this became a TS (two shots). Here will show Sanskar and Swara realizing their feeling towards each other and confessing it. I hope you will like it. Sorry for my grammar mistakes as i'm not so good in English lol [:))] I used mixed hindi, english. Special thanks to CogitoErgoSum for advising me the closing song 😊

Sanskar is sitting on the bed in his room, looking at Swara's pic. He receives a call. It's Dida that informs him that Swara is not well. He immediately rushes there to meet her, but later on it is revealed by Dida that it was all her plan, while Swara and Shomi went to mandir. Dida knew that Sanskar was in love with Swara, she could see it in his eyes, but wanted him to confess and admit he is love with Swara.

He breaks down.

'Dida Swara is the most beautiful girl i met in my life.

She is someone who brought happiness and joy in my life. No matter how great my day might be she makes it always better. Since she left, i couldn't for a moment forget her. I felt the most important part of me left me.She is the first person i think about when i wake up and the last person i think about before you go to sleep. When something good happens to me, she is the first person i want to tell.

And when something bad happens with me, i look to her for support.

She is the most beautiful girl I know. I really respect her and admire her, because i know that love is the ability to know and accept someone's imperfections.

I can't imagine my future without her. I know i'm not perfect but i'll try to become the best for her. Since i know her i become a better person, she totally changed me. I trust her more then myself. I can reveal her my deepest secret, everything. I feel comfortable enough to be at my most vulnerable state because i know she will try and protect me from all my fears. Imagining my world without her scares me Dida.

Whenever i see her smiling i get a sense of satisfaction, i can stare at her while she smiles, Every time she smile, I love her even more, her smile warms my heart. And her eyes? I can look in her eyes forever. Dida you know what? If she was a tear in my eye, I wouldn't cry for fear of losing Swara. People says the eyes are the mirror to the soul. She must have one beautiful soul. She is special.

I just want to be with her. I don't know what i mean to her, but wo meri duniya hai. And i know she is still in love with Laksh, that's why i didn't want to confess my feelings to her; because i know she would refuse. We are best friend and i don't want to ruin our beautiful bond, confessing her my love. I know i'm incomplete without her, she complete my mind,soul and heart, she gave me a second chance in the life. When i see her, she lights up my day, when i hold her i wish the time freezes right there.

When i see her i get a jittery feeling in my stomach, i can feel the butterflies, my hands start sweating and a flutter of electricity runs through out my body.

You know what Dida? Before i met her, i was always concerned about my food. But abhi to Swara se koi bhi cheez important nahi hai. I can do everything for her happiness. Mujhe khushi milti hai uska saath de kar. I receive joy from her joy and pain from her pain. I love spending time with Swara, just being together, talking and sharing everything with her.. Conversation flows easily between me and her. There is a warm flow of energy between us even when we are doing different things in the same room. I can feel connected with her even from a distance. I find her sense of humour amazing, even though her jokes are very bad sometimes. All I know is that I want to grab her and be in her arms forever and forever and never let go.

She is the best girl Dida.' tears starts flowing from his eyes.

Dida looks at him smiling. She already knew Sanskar loved Swara, she just wanted to hear it from him. She goes near him and reassures him 'Sanskar, Shoru ko kyun nahi bta dete?'

'No Dida, i know Swara is still in love with Lucky, and i was the one who tried to separate them, i realized my mistake later unfortunately. I was blind for my revenge, i thought he was the one responsable for Kavita's death, but i didnt know the truth'

'Sanskar, shayed kismat yahin chahti thi, ki tum aur Swara saath ho jaye..'

'Nahi Dida, kismat yeh nahi chahti. And it's better i suffer, i deserve only this' and breaks down.

While they were talking, they didn't notice that Swara and Shomi reached the house and hearing Dida's voice coming from upstairs they went to see.

Swara and Shomi heard Sanskar's words. Sanskar and Dida are shocked to see them there. Dida and Shomi leaves from there, leaving both alone to clear all the things.

'S.. Swara?' asks in a shock state Sanskar.

'Sanskar, tum..tum mujhse py..?'

'Listen Swara, whatever you heard it's true, yes i do love you, i can't live without you.. But i know you won't be able to love me, i know you still love Lucky. Just forget whatever i said, i don't want our friendship to be ruined'

'Stop it Sanskar! You assumed that i don't love you, you can say whatever you want and i can't? Do only your feelings matter? And what about mine?'

'Swara i know, try to understand, i don't know when i fell in love with you, i don't know when you became an important person in my life. I can't imagine my life without you, i know our wedding is fake..'

'Sanskar, have you ever thought about my feelings? Have you ever tried to know about my feelings?'

'Swara?'

'No Sanskar, let me speak. You are something I never thought could exist for me. You are the best thing that has ever happened in my life, and I don't regret telling you how I feel.

Still, i was scared, because I'm growing a deep feeling inside my heart that I just couldnt explain. I truly didn't know what your feelings were, and I don't want to force you to tell me something you don't really feel towards me. I love you Sanskar. I know you'll find it hard to believe me if I tell you how much you mean to me. I hardly understand what I feel for you, and don't know how these long, sleepless nights, thinking only of you can go one. Since i left MM i couldn't stop thinking about you for a moment. I didn't reveal to you my feelings and you know why? I was waiting for you to stop me, but you didn't. Bas ek baar keh dete ki Swara ruk jayo, par tumne nahi roka.

I know you tried to separate me and Laksh, you just wanted revenge. But you tried to redeem yourself; when no one was with me in this difficult time you decided to support me to bring out Ragini's truth and unite my mom and dad. I know Laksh doesn't know the truth yet, and i hope soon he will get to know about it. I don't know if he will be able to forgive Ragini and move on with her or he will separate from her.

Each day i spend with you become wonderful than the previous one.
Life is so unpredictable. Changes are always coming, big or small. Since i came here I found that you're on my mind more often than anything else. Sometimes I intentionally think of you just to make my day brighter. Every time I think about you, it gives me more strength to carry on my life. It makes me happy to be alive, knowing that you've come into my life. Kab humari dosti pyaar mein badal gayi, mujhe bhi nahi pta lga.

Jitna bhi tumhe bhulane ki koshish karte hai, utna hi zyada mein tumhare baare mein sochti hoon.

Kabhi himmat nahi hui tumhe btane ki, kyun ki mujhe lga ki tum abhi bhi Kavita ko bhula nahi paye, aur mein humare itne acche rishte ki todna nahi chahti thi.

Sanskar i really don't know what God has in mind for us. I just know that i feel comfortable with you, i can share all the secrets with you, because i trust you.'

Sanskar came forward and and lightly pecked her cheek. She hugged him.It was a perfect hug,they seem to melt into each other. They closed their eyes, the noise outisde stopped. She felt safe and comfortable like in a perfect dream. She forgot all her worries and fears. The safest place int he world.

It was a warm, long hug.

Jaanam Dekh Lo Mit Gayi Dooriyan
Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan
Kaisi Sarhadein, Kaisi Majbooriyan
Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon... Yahaan

So this is it. I hope you'll like this last part :) would love to hear your reviews.