SwaSan & Swalak OS : A New Beginning

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A New Beginning

Hey frds this is the first time m writing something on Swalak so I don't know how it is but plzz if u r free then read it

So in my OS...Ragini was exposed n she n laksh r divorced...SwaSan love each other so they r getting married

Venue : Baadi...SwaSan's engagement ceremony

(Parineeta is with swara)

Swara-bhabhi thanks for coming...u r like my sister

Pari-arey I m ur sister...u n sanskaar bhaiya done so much for me...i mean just because of u...me n adarsh r together...tumhari wajah se unhe unki galti ka ehsaas hua

Swara-but bhabhi hats off to u...u gave adarsh bhaiya n ur relationship a second chance

Pari-hmm...he was feeling guilty n he actually apologised toh mujhe lga ki sabko second chance milna chahiye

Swara-bhabhi u have a very big heart

Bhabhi-woh toh hai tabhi toh apne devar ki taraf se nhi apni devrani ki taraf se shaadi mein shaamil ho rhi hoon

(they both starts laughing...shomi came there)

Shomi-shona u r looking so pretty

Pari-aunty she is pretty

Swara-sanskaar bhi yahi kehte hain

Pari-awww sanskaar bhaiya kehte hain

(Swara blushed)

(daadi came there)

Daadi-ladke waaley a gye hain (she goes to swara) bhagwaan karey ab tharey jeevan mein koi pareshani na aye ragini ne jo kuch kiya usey badla toh na ja sake hai bas maafi hi maang sakun hoon

Swara-dadi maa plzz...aapne kya kiya hai aapko thodi hi na kuch pta tha(n she hugged daadi...daadi hugged her back)

Daadi-ab chalein

Pari-haan bilkul...warna sanskaar bhaiya upar hi a jayenge

(they all went downstairs...sanskaar was mesmerized)

Laksh(in a teasing tone)-bhai...what happen...totey ud gyye kya

Sanskaar-totally (he came back to his senses) what do u mean...i was just...was just looking at the lehenga

Adarsh-kyaaa

Sanskaar-haan maine choose kiya tha na

(Adarsh n Laksh gave him a deadly look)

Sujata-mhari bahu kitni sunder lag rhi hai

(she went to swara...swara touches her feet)

Sujata-khush raho

(sanskaar was still staring...swara greets everyone)

AP-swara beta go n sit with sanskaar na

(Swara nodded...sanskaar holds her hand n they sat)

Sankaar-killer lag rhi ho

Swara(with a shocked look)-what

Sanskaar(with a confused look)-what what

Swara-aapne mujhe teasing way mein kuch bola...i thought u r boring n sadu

Sanskaar(with a disbelieving look)-boring n sadu

Swara(with a puppy face)-sorry...waisey challenge yaad hai na

Sanskaar-plzz no yaar

Swara-u have to do it

Sanskaar-r u crazy...it's just impossible

Swara-but u promised me...u have to propose me

Sanskaar-in front of everyone

Swara-yep

Sanskaar(monologue)-aaj bade papa mujhe nhi chodengey

DP-pandit ji shuru karein

(swara gave him a do it fast wala look)

Sanskaar-no

Sujata-tharey ko key hua

DP-tumhe is shadi se koi paeshani hai kya

(sanskaar nodded his head in a yes but said no)

Laksh-bhai haan ya na

(this time sanskaar nodded his head in a no but said yes...swara was looking at him with a shocked expression)

Swara(monologue)-ohh god...sanskaar i was just trying to tease u...what r u doing

Sujata-sanskaar tu key kar rha hai

Sanskaar-I have to propose her

Everybody(together)-abhi

Sanskaar-abhi isi waqt right not right here (with a loud voice)aur main karke rahunga(n he saw DP's face...who was glaring at him) (sanskaar...with a soft voice)bade papa plzz

DP-okk...do it

Sanskaar(with a happy tone)-sacchi

DP-sanskaar

Sanskaar-ji...rose rose rose rose...arey give me a rose yaar (he was looking here n there...then he saw an aunty)aunty ji aapkey baalon mein jo rose hai wo milega

Bengoli Aunty-ki

Sanskaar-Key nhi rose...chabi ka kya karunga

Laksh-bhai ruko (he goes to the temple n picked up a rose from there)here u go

Sanskaar-shona plzz yaar...khadi toh ho jao

Adarsh(in laksh's ear)-dont u think he is so blunt...isey na bohot maar padegi

Laksh-100 %

(sanskaar bent down n starts)

Sanskaar-sona m doing it first time so plzz (swara smiles)okk...shona i know i hurted u so much just because of me or because of my stupid revenge i have hurted u n u was the one who suffered the most...i know i was broken but tumhari life destroy karney ka right nhi tha mujhe...actually na last 5 yrs mein koi mila hi nhi jo samjha pata ki main galat hoon...yaa shayad kisi ki himmat hi nhi thi...sab dartey theey arey he is SK...karma's owner he is so powerful he can destroy us...shayad isiliye meri galtiyon mein bhi saath dete theey...my frds they all were like SK u r doing right tum galat nhi ho...but u know u were the one who told me that too on my face that I M WRONG tumne mujhe sahi aur galat ka matlab samjhaya...u know u actually taught me that m on wrong path i have to move on...frankly speaking i was a monster yaar...who drugged you...i was the one who ruined ur image tumhara rishta tak (swara was on verge of crying) but then one day all of a sudden we got married...jhootha rishta tha par irada hamesha nek tha...we were strangers but then hum dost baney phir kab dost se jada ban gye mujhe abhi tak samajh nhi aya...but now m a changed man jo apni shona se bohot pyaar karta hai...so miss Swara Gadodia i know u used to hate me par ab toh nhi karti na (swara smiles)i know i hurted u the most par ab tumhari life khushiyon se bharna chahta hoon...lets take a fresh starts...a new beginning...tumhe yeh batana chahta hoon ki ab meri har khushi sirf tumharey saath hai...n i really really love u so will u marry me(swara was staring at him)

Pari- swara kuch toh bolo

Sanskaar-swara speak up yaar my knees r hurting

Swara(she smiles n nodded her head in a yes)-yeah Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari...i will marry u because I love u too...ab utho toh

(everbody starts laughing)

Sanskaar-sorry (they both hugged each other)

AP-ab sagayi poori kar ley

Swara(she felt emberressed)-ji

(they both exchanged the rings)

(after half n hour...at the terrace)

Swara-sanskaar what r u doing...hum terrace par kyun aye hain

Sanskaar-ek kaam tha

Swara-kya

(Laksh entered)

Laksh-bhai what happen aapne mujhe kyun bulaya

Sanskaar-look i know sab thik ho gya hai...everything is fine now but still u need to talk...baat karo plzzz...main jaata hoon

Swara-sanskaar aap kahaan ja rahe hain...rukiye na

Laksh-yeah bhai stay na

Sanskaar-no yaar tumhari problems hai akele hi baat karo(n he left from there)

Swara-tum thik ho

Laksh-yeah...congratzz

Swara-thanks...toh aagey kya socha hai

Laksh-nothing much...actually u know na m just a graduate phir shaadi n all toh abhi MBA karney ka soch raha hoon

Swara-that's great so u r going to London

Laksh-hmm...m going to London

Swara-congratzz aur pta hai

Laksh-sorry swara

Swara-excuse me

Laksh-i said sorry

Swara-why

Laksh-u know why

Swara-leave it laksh

Laksh-no swara...as bhai said we need to talk

Swara-hmm...but what

Laksh-I wont that plzz forgive me because i know...i don't deserve that...n i know i was wrong

Swara-no laksh u were right...i know sabko lagta hai tum galat theey par shayad nhi theey...tumne mera video dekha aur tum hurt hue maanti hoon tumne mujhe trust nhi kiya par the point is kya tum uss situation mein theey ki tum mujhe trust kar paatey...i mean just think about it u came there to marry me n i wasn't there n then u saw that video...so practically ur reaction was normal

Laksh-nhi mujhe tumhe trust karna chahiye tha

Swara-but everything was against me na

Laksh-woh MMS ke time par bhi toh sabkuch mere against tha but u trusted me par jab meri baari ayi toh mainey kya kiya...Ragini se shaadi kar li

Swara-laksh she was so manipulative...n she blackmailed u...usney tumhe emotionally black mail kiya tha...tumharey pas option nhi tha

Laksh-i know but i was the one na who promised u ki i will always trust u...phir mujhe kya ho gya tha...tumne kitni baar kaha ki she tried to kill u...bhai also told me par mainey tumhe hi galat samjha...pta hai kya main kabhi tumhe deserve nhi karta tha...sanskaar bhai tumhe kitna chahte hain...tum aisa banda deserve karti thi hamesha se

Swara-its not about deserving someone its about trust...jo hamare bich mein shayad nhi tha...u know laksh log kehtey hain kisi bhi relationship mein pyaar na bohot important hota hai but ab na main yeh nhi manti

Laksh-kyun

Swara-kyunki mainey dekha hai...mere maa baba pyar kartey hain ek dusrey se but trust nhi hai isliye relationship bhi on n off hi rehta hai

Laksh(he laughed)-on n off

Swara-yeah...u know main manti hoon pyar ho ya na ho but trust n respect should be there...like in arrange marriages pyar nhi hota but trust n respect hoti hai...just look at badi maa n bade papa...maa n papa woh sab pyaar nhi kartey theey but woh trust woh respect thi...u know what laksh arrange marriages mein pyar shadi ke baad hi hota hai lekin woh trust aur respect hoti hai...look at me n sanskaar hum ajnabi theey but main sanskaar ko hamesha trust karti thi aur aaj dekho hum kitney khush hain...so its not like ki tum deserve kartey theey ya nhi woh jo trust tha na woh shayad utna nhi tha

Laksh-utna ya bilkul

Swara-agar bilkul nhi hota toh tum baar baar mera saath nhi detey ...laksh tumne jo kiya woh agar sahi nhi tha toh galat bhi nhi tha...shayad situation hi aisi thi ki jo mere liya galat tha woh tumharey liye sahi tha

Laksh-u know what...bhai is really very lucky

Swara-kya baat kar rhe ho i thought u r lucky(n she starts laughing laksh too joined her)

Laksh-waisey tumharey pagalpan ko bhai hi jhel saktey hain

Swara-woh toh hai

Laksh-u r happy na

Swara-very very happy...laksh

Laksh-haan ji

Swara-move on

Laksh-really

Swara-hmm...woh kehtey hain na A New Beginning

Laksh-for sure

Swara-promise

Laksh-pakka wala promise...n now m feeling so nice sab clear jo ho gya

Swara-thanks to sanskaar

Laksh-waisey bhai trust u a lot na mere saath chodkar chaley gyye

(sanskaar entered)

Sanskaar-hey m back

Swara-we can see that...the devil is back

Sanskaar-could u plzz shut ur mouth

Swara-really...sanskaar m gonna kill u(she starts chasing him...n he was running to save his life)

Laksh(monologue)-they both r so good together...n laksh finally move on...A New beginning is waiting for u

-The End-

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Vishi- thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was really so sweet 😳
Thankgod Lucky ko uss vamp se chuttkara mila 👏

Sanskaar's proposal awww bilkul Dil se loved it ❤️❤️
Chalo Sadu Sanskaar thoda hattk mode mein aya 😆

And SwaLak last scene ahaan I hope show mein bhi CVS last mein friendship bond toh dikhaye SwaLak ka 😳

I hope Lucky finds perfect match ❤️

phir SwaSan bhi khush aur Lucky bhi khush 😳

Thankyou for writing this Sonal 🤗
Tu seriously Bahut mast likhti hai yaar 👏

Ye le stars ⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️.⭐️ /5

Sun Ek request hai Plz Twinj pe bhi kuch likh 😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww...thats so sweet and heart-warming❤️
I really want asuch cute and sincere Swalak closure😳

If cvs are gonna separate Swalak then they should at-least create a bonding between them based on sincere and good friendship😳😳

Then Swasan can be...and Laksh would have some pretty girl to lighten his world😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderfully written sonu correct justification to swalak relationship yar and swasan was super this is one of the best os yar u did excellent jod */* :-)))))))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was so lovely Sonal. 🤗
I wish CVs clear everything in such a way, and show a great friendship between Swalak.
Love your writing. 👏
Swasan part was so cute. 😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vishi-

This was really so sweet 😳
Thankgod Lucky ko uss vamp se chuttkara mila 👏

Sanskaar's proposal awww bilkul Dil se loved it ❤️❤️
Chalo Sadu Sanskaar thoda hattk mode mein aya 😆

And SwaLak last scene ahaan I hope show mein bhi CVS last mein friendship bond toh dikhaye SwaLak ka 😳

I hope Lucky finds perfect match ❤️

phir SwaSan bhi khush aur Lucky bhi khush 😳

Thankyou for writing this Sonal 🤗
Tu seriously Bahut mast likhti hai yaar 👏

Ye le stars ⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️.⭐️ /5

Sun Ek request hai Plz Twinj pe bhi kuch likh 😳


thanks for the stars 😃
N will try to write on twinj😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shanaia

Awww...thats so sweet and heart-warming❤️

I really want asuch cute and sincere Swalak closure😳

If cvs are gonna separate Swalak then they should at-least create a bonding between them based on sincere and good friendship😳😳

Then Swasan can be...and Laksh would have some pretty girl to lighten his world😳

thanks for liking it dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: azira07

wonderfully written sonu correct justification to swalak relationship yar and swasan was super this is one of the best os yar u did excellent jod */* :-)))))))))

thanks for liking it azi😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww that's so sweet Sona 😳 Superb OS 👏
Such a sweet friendship between SwaLak 😳 And Sanskar's confession on his knees 😳
Amazing 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet_12

Aww that's so sweet Sona 😳 Superb OS 👏
Such a sweet friendship between SwaLak 😳 And Sanskar's confession on his knees 😳
Amazing 👏

thanks preet😃

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