SwaSan FF: Second Love Becomes Life (Prt 9 pg 14 updated) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Hey!!!!!!!
Short Part as I was busy with my studies and now I'm Busy with my sister's wedding preparation.
Will be Updating my works on Saturday or Sunday...


Part 8

While Swara is in her own world Sanskar Calls her from the Washroom

Sanskar: Swara mere kapde...

Swara : Sanskar abhi kisi ka phone aaya tha.. Wok eh raha tha ke mujhe tumse shadi nahi karni chahiye thi mujhe agta hai who Ragini ho gi Usse aisa lagta hai ke mein Laksh ko usse chin lungi Pata nahi...

Sanskar : (interrupt's her and shouts) Mere kapde yaar.. Baad me baat kare ya mein aisi nikal jao??

Swara : Haww De rahi hu kabhi meri baat toh sun liya karo bas chila rahe ho...

Swara gives Sanskar his clothes and waits for him to come out. After some time Sanskar comes out and is lost in looking at Swara. After few seconds he comes out of his trance and shakes his head..

Sanskar: (mumering) Sanskar bachu kya kar raha hai woh Swara hai.. SWARA... Waise hai toh meri patni dekh sakta hu... Nahi yaar nahi dekh sakta.. Bas mein apne aap se baat kar raha hu yeh kab huva?? Mein pagal ho jao ga.. (To Swara) Tum kuch bol rahi thi??

Swara : Nahi.. Mera matlab ha.. Tumne ek cheez notice ki??

Sanska : Kya??

Swara : Hum ek dusre ke saath comfortable hai kuch awkard nahi hai humare beech...

Sanskar : Tum itni bakk bakk karti ho toh kaun uncomfortable hoga.. Raat bhar tumne mujhe jaga ke rakha subah subah aankh lagi

Swara : tum baat mat karo.. Mein soch rahi thi purane zamane mein ek newly married couple humare jaise behave karte hoge ya nahi unhe bhi nahi pata hota ho ga ke kiske saath unki shadi hone wali hai humare jaise

Sanskar : Tumhari Bakk Bakk ho gai toh chale??

Swara shakes her head in a no

Sanskar : Kyu ab kya huva?

Swara : Koi kuch bola to??

Sanskar : Koi kuch nahi bole ga mein sab se baat kar lunga

Swara : Ok chalo

SwaSan comes down they are met by Parineeta in middle. She came to call them as they were late..

Parineeta : (shocked) Swara tumne devarji ke kapde kyu pehne??

Sanskar : Bhabhi Swara ke pass koi kapde nahi the toh isliye..

Parineeta : Swara humse maang liya hota Hum de dete..

Swara : Bhabhi mujhe baad me yaad aaya ke mere pass koi dress nahi hai toh Sanskar ne kaha ke mein uska koi bhi dress pehen lu..

Parineeta : (blushing) Hum tumhe saree lake dete hai tum woh pehen lo..

Sanskar : Bhabhi Swara aapke kapde nahi pehen sakti aaj uski pehla din hai aur pehli baar hum saath mein puja karenge toh mujhe acha nahi lage ga.. Aap please Swara ke liye ek dupatta de de

Parineeta : Theek hai... Devarji aapko neeche sab ko sambhal na hoga..

Sanskar : Ji Bhabhi...

Parineeta brings dupatta for Swara. SwaSan and Parineeta comes down. Swara walks behind Sanskar shielding herself. Laksh First sees Swara in Sanskar's clothes and is shocked, jealous and angry..

Laksh : Swara tumhari besharmi yaha bhi shuru ho gai?? Humare ghar ki koi izzat nahi hai kya jo tumne Sanskar ke kapde pehen liye?? Tumhare jaise ladki...

Sanskar : (angrily) Laksh Zaban sambhal ke meri patni se baat kar rahe ho (Brings Swara close to him) aur meine hi Swara ko yeh pehen ne ke liye kaha hai uske pass koi dress nahi tha aur mein nahi chahta tha ke humare zindagi ki nayi shuruvat me Swara kisi aur ke kapde pehne. Mujhe pata hai meine galat kiya hai but mere pass koi dusra option nahi tha. Mein Swara ko nashte ke baad Shopping pe le jaunga.

Durga Prasad : Theek hai

Swara : Bade Papa kya mein kuch keh sakti hu??

Durga Prasad : Bolo

Swara : Bade Papa mujhe itne traditional sarees pehen ne ki aadat nahi hai. Mein ne humesha Western outfit hi pehna hai toh kya mein Simple dresses nahi pehen sakti??

Durga Prasad : Theek hai tum pehen sakti ho

Sanskar : Bade Papa ek aur baat Mein chahta hu ke Swara simple western dress bhi pehne..

(All are shocked with Sanskar's request. Swara is shocked as well as happy that Sanskar understands her so much.)


Hope so you guys like it..


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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice update..

Who is threatening swara???
😕


Thanks
To know more keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Superb update..
Like the way sanskar taking swara's side..
N those cute moments.. "Aww"
Still who was behind that mystery call ??
Curious to know.
Will be waiting for ur next update :)
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Awww.
that's so nice of Sanskar to let swara wear weastern and simple outfit

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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Loved the scene between DP and Sanskaar/Swarna...Full of understanding..
Loved the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Swara in Sanskaar's clothes😆.. Wow.. and Yeh mystery call ka suspense..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
She s wearing his dress.😳 What's the pbm for laksh whatever she s wearing what make him difference. She have to ask her husband only. He have the rights to tell to wear this that nu. Also so sweet he understands her and asking permission for her to wear western outfit. So sweet sanskar. Bt who called 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Superb update dear
Sanskar is such a darling
He is supporting Swara
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
interesting
love it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Read all the parts...
Awesome story...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm

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