Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23]

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: AartShefa
Omg u made my sans boy to get heart broken. .it's unfair dr...now I badly want your next update. .Please update soon. .I m waiting eagerly. .btw thanks for the pm..superb update. .loves n hugs

Aww, yes, unfortunately, I had to hurt him 😭 But I will try to update as soon as possible, really! And be patient, better times will surely come!

And no problem and *hugs back*

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Falling short of words.. It was jus so impactful !eeehhh.. you are awesome..
now that my sanskar is broken.. I just want swara to make it upto him.. what ever the reason might b.. This is wrong !

Sansku.. dun let her enter your life jus lik that.. Sadist here as well 😆 😆

please leave a pm when u update next! Thanks :)

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Wt an update dr...

So painful...

Wt will sanskar do now...can't see swara and sanskar in pain...

Plz update soon...

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damon fan

@-damon-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

u r online..so plz give us an update..plz

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1018283

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: -damon-
u r online..so plz give us an update..plz

lol, I am online doesn't mean I have the update ready 😛 But it should be done very soon as the chapter is mapped out completely and I am writing on it, alongside another work of mine. Patience - the fruits of patience are very sweet 😉

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1018283

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
beautifully written !!!!!!

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: -.Aphrodite.-
That's beautiful but painful.
I had tears in my eyes reading the update.
Sanskaar is in so much pain, can't bear it. Please update soon.

Thank you, dear! 😳 And aww, I hope I can make you smile, too, soon 😉

Chapter is finished, I'm polishing it up and thinking about whether to cut it a bit as it turned out to be really long.

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1018283

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8
Heartbreaking yet so beautifully expressed. Thank you for the PM. Do update soon.

Thank you, dear! And no problem 😉

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome.. Just loved it😊

Thanks! Glad you liked it 😊

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1018283

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: gayu6
Feeling sad for sanskar 😭 finally what's swara's decision

Not sure if you will like Swara's current decision 😛 But her stubborn mind just needs some persuasion, lol

Originally posted by: kaku17
This is way too heart wrenching...angst at its best...😭...sanskaar oh my god...even my heart broke in to pieces along with his..😭...can't even imagine what sans would have felt when he saw lucky kissing swara, though she definitely wasn't responding, but did not shove him aside too...😲..I know I would have died...😭

Having said that it way too brilliant, and I have always loved your work right from NAUC forum...esp that TS " a tale of two brothers"...my fav..⭐️...sorry for getting side tracked...😛

Please do update the remaining parts sooner...I have a really low threshold for pain...it will take some time to recover from this chapter for me and even in the serial the track is moving towards angst...my poor heart...😭

Please update soon and hoping that this time it would be happy one...and thanks for the pm...😃

I'll take this as a compliment - angst at its best 😉 I am a sucker for angst- writing it, that is, lol. And Swara... Swara... well, most of you won't be happy with her that is for sure.

Going to post soon, it's about ready. A monster-chapter, lol. Though, still a sad one, I guess, but things will pick up after this one 😉

Btw, do you mean "Brother Mine"? That was my Rajbir SS 😳

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1018283

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Asyalover
Oh my god...so painful...my poor sanskar

Poor Sanskar, indeed!

Originally posted by: SONAL30
Wow noor...finally u updated😃
Okk awesome chapter
But what the hell is going on...lux ji kissed swara🤢that too infront of sansku😭
Whatever but he was forcing himself on swara😡
Hey but why the hell miss swara was listening his bakwass
AP😡 gandi aurat plzz think about sansku yaar he loves her but nhi she only cares about her son's happiness
Swara n lux ka rishta🤔
But DP was the saviour...he talked to sansku n finally sanskaar is in love
Now m waiting for SwaSan wedding
Continue soon dear🤗

Yes, finally 😆

To his defense, Laksh was drunk 😛 As for Swara... let's just say that she's being difficult. Rightly so? That's up to you guys to decide.

Wedding? Don't make your calculations without Swara! 😆 And yes, DP is a great support to Sanskar 😉