SwaSan OS: 'Saath Saath'

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: AnnStyles
Very sweet os
Please do write more

Thank you dear 😳

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Messi2
loved it do write more

Thank you 😆

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Cintila
You are such a great writer yaar...! This was too good. Really...! Please do write more..!👏😃

Thanks a lot for the compliment 😳

Edited by Preet_12 - 10 years ago

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome..😊

Thank you Sneha 😳

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: tayyabasohail
Awww preet it's Soo sweet 😳
Loved every bit of it 😳
It's the sweetest os on Swasan I've read till now ⭐️

Aww thanks for the compliment dear 😳

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Smilelicious

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Jamina96
Wow preet you are the best writer 👏
I loved the rain scene 😳
Simply Awesome 👏 👏

Thanks a lot dear 😳

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sonal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Aww preet

Such a cute os

Loved it

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

aamazing... you should continue it... like showing how ragini was defeated by SwaSan...

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Ishita Nagpal

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Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Awsum loved it
Do write more..!!

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gayu6

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Nice os preet. I like the chocolate chasing scene. Loved this part

Swara is about to question him but he anticipates her 'yahi soch rahi ho ki meine eesa kyun kiya right? Wo actually mujhe Ragini par bilkul bhi bharosa nahi hai, ussne pehle bhi tumhari jaan lene ki koshish ki, kya pta aj bhi eesa kuch karti? So i just checked ki food mein poison to nahi hai; but everything seems okay, so ab kha sakti ho tum'

She puts aside the tiffin and walks near him 'pagal ho gaye ho? agar sach mein poison hota issme to?'

'To kya? Mujhe kuch ho jata, but tum to bach jati na?' replies in a very composed way.

She puts her hand on his lips 'sanskar!' and starts beating him on his chest.

He is caught off guard by her reaction 'are you mad? maar kyun rahi ho? ek to tumhari jaan bachai aur upar se tum yeh thank you de rahi ho'

'haan aur mein zyada marungi tumhe agar phir se eesa tumne kaha'

'Sorry sorry, galti ho gayi, ab marna band karogi please? Dard ho raha hai' holding his ears.

very much preet. Also tat final rain scene. Whatever he is saying she too is saying tat so cute and childish and finally both went inside the tent😃 Please write more preet

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